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Things We Don't Want to Admit
KellyH16 Reviews | 3.13/10 (16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 9 Favorites )
Both Hermione and Severus have something they don't want to admit to. A dark twist to a prompt of: Moonlight, flowers and rain.
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Would you consider making another chapter??
Response from KellyH (Author of Things We Don't Want to Admit)
Ummm... probably if the muse strikes, and I find a need to continue with it. As of right now, I'm sorry to say, probably not. Although I'll probably write more posessive!snape because I have an odd fondness for them. XD
That's creepy. I guess it's sort of nice of him to have obliviated her.
Response from KellyH (Author of Things We Don't Want to Admit)
Oh I wouldn't consider that nice ;) Thanks for the comments!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
That's why I said sort of. He could have left her with the knowledge of her obsession for her. I think he is clever enough to know she wouldn't have use that information against him in any way, but she would have to live with it. And it is not a light information to live with. That way she can remain carefree and live her life. That's where he is being nice.Of course, spying on her, how best he is at this, is not healthy. She's sensing him and get uncomfortable, and if he wants to get over it, he should avoid her as much he can. That's my 2 nuts for all the worth it is. ;)
"Near midnight she knew he realized the truth..." This is chilling! What a great and dark answer to the prompt. Well done!Beth
Response from KellyH (Author of Things We Don't Want to Admit)
Thanks!
dark and scarry. thanks so much
Response from KellyH (Author of Things We Don't Want to Admit)
Your welcome and thank you!
Ooohhh! Fiendish, spooky Snape! Nicely done - thanks for sharing!
Response from KellyH (Author of Things We Don't Want to Admit)
mmmm spooky Snape is fun once and awhile.
Very dark, but very, very good.
Response from KellyH (Author of Things We Don't Want to Admit)
Thank you. I'm glad that you liked it!
Very dark, dear, but I love it!
Response from KellyH (Author of Things We Don't Want to Admit)
Thanks Luv!
Woah. Creepy out-of-control Severus. Very well written, even if it makes us uncomfortable.. creeped out uncomfortable. :-|
Response from KellyH (Author of Things We Don't Want to Admit)
Yup, creepy Snape. I must admit he is fun to write. XD
Interesting...very interesting. Great job on the detail. Keep up the good work. ~Jen
Response from KellyH (Author of Things We Don't Want to Admit)
Thanks! XD
Wow, creepy, dark. Good!
Response from KellyH (Author of Things We Don't Want to Admit)
Thanks! XD
Wow, that was... Very. Creepy. I like the way you twisted the prompt into something so dark!
Response from KellyH (Author of Things We Don't Want to Admit)
Thanks. I do like to twist around the prompts. XD
Oooh creepy... I'd usually love to be alone in the middle of a field with Severus Snape, but um, not like that. Brings a whold new meaning to Potions Under Duress.
Response from KellyH (Author of Things We Don't Want to Admit)
LOL Yes, it does bring a whole new meaning to Potions Under Duress. XD
Very interesting look at one-sided love.
Response from KellyH (Author of Things We Don't Want to Admit)
Oh I would not call this love by any means. XD Thanks for the review!
Oh freaky scary. That's definitely not someplace I want to go. The drama starts from the first word and doesn't end. I was worried there'd be some serious non-con... you had me going. Yikes. I like a possessive Severus, but that takes the cake. What a gift of suspense.
Response from KellyH (Author of Things We Don't Want to Admit)
Obsessive/Possessive Snape is very scary indeed. Thanks for the review!
Kelly, you did it again, you... dark woman, you! :P
Response from KellyH (Author of Things We Don't Want to Admit)
What drabbled into the dark world? Sorry I just can't get out of this hole. XD
ooh! Creepy!
Response from KellyH (Author of Things We Don't Want to Admit)
I know. I like creepy. XD