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Beyond Blue
Hanagasume243 Reviews | 7.36/10 (243 Ratings, 0 Likes, 25 Favorites )
A marriage law has been passed by the new Minister for Magic... Hermione and Snape aren't impressed, but they have to follow the law, right?
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Hanagasume
Member Since 2008 | 31 Stories | Favorited by 246 | 119 Reviews Written | 1,704 Review Responses
I write fan fiction: I am a big SS/HG shipper, but I also like RL/HG, DM/LL and tastefully written Dramione or Lumione on occasion.
I photoshop: I use photoshop an awful lot to create my own banners and edit photos - I love my DSLR.
I am a bibliophile: Paperback, hardcover, graphic novel, fiction or non-fiction. You name it, I read it and collect it.
SEVERUS SNAPE IS MY ONE TRUE LOVE!!!
Reviews for Beyond Blue
Haha that is so ironic that they should Apparate right on top of one another! Nice :)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Haha - I think it's very fitting :p Thanks for reviewing!
This is an interesting beginning. I will be interested to see where this goes in the other chapters!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Thanks. I am glad you are intrigued :p
our hermione better do some quick footwork if she doesn't want to wreck anything positive. wonderful update. thanks so much
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Yes, she most certainly does have to act fast. Poor Sev. Thanks for the review!
The ceremony was sweet, and so was their kiss. It is just so unfortunate that Hermione was so stubborn, and that there was not wedding night I look forward to your next update!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
I'm glad you liked it! It's tough to write Hermione being so cruel :p Thanks for reviewing!
Awww, poor Severus and Hermione. Please update soon.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Hopefully I will be able to add the next chapter soon! Thanks for the review!
Nice switch - having Hermione insensitive to Snape's feelings, and Snape actually telling her so soon. I'm enjoying this a great deal.Cheers.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
I thought it would be interesting to put a bit of a spin on things. Glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!
Yeah - he said something!!! Albeit coldly and without letting her reply - but oh there is hope!!! YEAH!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Well, now its just Hermione's turn to do what needs to be done to make it work :p Thanks for the review!
Ha! Awesome chapter... hope you can update soon, I am really enjoying this.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Thanks so much! I am glad that you are enjoying this, and I hope to update soon also!
absolutely fab! way to go Snape!!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Hehe I agree. Hermione needs a slap in the face :p Thanks for reviewing!
Well, at least he got it out. I'm very proud of him!! Great chapter!!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Yep! Now its all up to Hermione to make the marriage work the way it should :p Thanks for reviewing!
I wonder what she was about to say. Did the Ministry in its great wisdom (*snort*) not provide new couple with a communication counselor? Because they absolutely need it, especially Severus.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Lol - Albus Dumbledore wise? Sometimes I wonder. Hopefully I will be able to provide more clarity in the future chapters. Thanks for reviewing!
First, thank you so much for the update! Seccond, Hermione better move and talk fast to make up for this blunder. Severus migth have misjugde some and not daring to think anything else, but Hermione is the only one who can salvage this. I am guessing that she is every bit as insecure as he is, they just show it in different ways. Update again soon!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
I'm glad you like it. I understand the situation is a little frustrating, but sit tight. It will all make sense I hope. Thanks for reviewing!
Goodie, he told her. Ball's in her court. :)
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
It sure is - thanks for reviewing!
Boy-oh-boy! You've really turned their characters upside down. Severus is the one who is trying so hard and putting his best foot forward, and Hermione is the one being thoughtless and difficult. Good for Severus for telling her just how he felt and then closing the door in her face! She needed a wake-up! C'mon, Hermione. It's time to quit being a harridan and "get your poop in a group" before you mess everything up beyond repair!BTW, I really love this story!Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Nothing like a little reverse-role to shake things up :p It's interesting to see Sev be a little more humane. And I agree - it's time for Hermione to wake the hell up. I am so glad you are liking this Beth! Thanks for reviewing!
Oh man, maybe they should have spent their first days away from the castle. Silly Hermione, she couldn't have been more hurtful if she had tried. I hope she makes it right soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Hopefully future chapters will clarify why she has acted this way. Hermione is rather stubborn that way :) Thanks for reviewing!
Their breakfast together was going so well until Hermione made her "marriage of convenience" comment to Minerva. What could have made her say such a thing and then storm out of the Great Hall? At least Minerva understood how badly he had been hurt by Hermione's careless remark. Hopefully she will come to realize how her comment had made Severus feel and will apologize.Great chapter!Beth
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
It was, and Hermione was very thoughtless indeed. Perhaps it was a moment of insecurity or denial? And yes, Minerva was a dear. The future chapters should hopefully provide clarity for you :) Thanks for reviewing Beth!
I've heard of Gryffindors being stubborn but come on Hermione! Why can't she just admit even to herself that maybe she does feel something?? So, my dear author(s), (rubbing hands in anticipation) how many more wonderful chapters (approx.) can we expect? Quite a few I hope!Keep 'em comin'!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Indeed - she needs to wake up and smell the coffee :) I've finished writing the story, and it's not terribly long, but it's a slow process ironing out all the kinks. Thank you for your enthusiasm!
Response from mamabear52 (Reviewer)
YESSSSS! I am soooo glad that you are the type who finishes a story and doesn't just let it go when they run out of ideas. That is SO frustrating! You get all caught up in a story and then, nothing. Can't wait to see the rest even if it isn't overly long. Sometimes the great stories are medium size. Looking forward to it! Thanks!
Ah, 'tis time for our young couple to learn something about communication if they hope to make this marriage work.You've certainly heightened the tension in their relationship. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
'Tis indeed time for them to try harder. Hermione in particular. I'm glad you liked this - thanks for reviewing!
That was both lovely and sad all the same time. Their clothing descriptions sound quite tasteful, and the setting sounds amazing. But oh! Poor Sev and his poor fragile heart. When is Hermione going to see how wrong she is? Looking forward to the next update!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
It is rather sad that Hermione was so blind to his growing affection for her. If only she would stop being so resistent and frustrating :p More on the way! Thanks for reviewing!
Ouch. Poor Sev is so down on himself. It's unfortunate that Hermione is being so cold. I hope she figures it out soon!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
It is unfortunate that she is treating him that way :( But its all part of the plot so :) On to your next review! Thanks!
They were very mature about everything considering. I like this so far -- on to read the next chapter!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
They had to be mature -- its in their nature :) Thank you for the review!
This is an interesting start. I like MLC - so it should be interesting to see where you go with this.
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
I'm glad you are interested. Thanks for reviewing!
Very well written chapter--I'm looking forward to reading the next installment!
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Thank you so much! I am glad that you are enjoying it! I hope to have another chapter ready soon!
I seriously loved this prompt the first time around. And I'm hooked yet again with another wonderful fic. I'm glad that their first meeting went okay and they didn't try to kill eachother or complain to the matchmakers. I can't wait to see how this continues. Much Love ~ Brena
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Thank you so much! Next chapter is already in queue!
really well done - again - can not wait to see more - thanks for all of your hard work - really enjoy the internal monologue of your characters - nicely revealing
Response from Hanagasume (Author of Beyond Blue)
Thank you so much! I am very flattered and pleased that you are liking this! *Hugs*