The Greasy Retriever
karelia23 Reviews | 6.91/10 (23 Ratings, 0 Likes, 7 Favorites )
Severus trains to be an Animagus and finally succeeds transforming.
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"....he felt an uncontainable urge to jump up on her, to lick her nose, her cheeks, her lips, her irresistible neckline."When I read this I was wondering if you were "really" going to go there. *Wipes sweat from brow* XD Poor guy. I wonder what he really wanted to change into?
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
*grins*My guess would be a bat. ROFL.
Wow! Very cute and funny. The title, is really just too perfect though and the closing line doesn't quite live up to it for me. But the title is really ***ing funny!
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
I encourage you to join the TPP chat on Saturday nights, receive a prompt and write a drabble. :)
Awww, how utterly adorable. And I will totally deny it if you tell Severus!!! But I think a Labrador is a good way for Severus to explore his other side.The mentality seemed to be spot-on too, lol. Oooohh, I just love dogs. Awesome answer to the prompt, dear. Tee hee.~Stef =o)
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
That thought crossed my mind almost immediately when PJ gave me the prompt, LOL!Thanks for much for your kind words! *pats the shinies*
What was Sirius? Was he a labrador? If so, Severus will probably never transform again!Anyway, that was a fun drabble. Thanks for sharing.
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
I don't think canon ever determined the breed; it just said a black, shaggy type of dog if I remember correctly.Thanks for reviewing!
a total hoot! thanks
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
:) Thanks for reviewing!
hahaha wowie never thought about him being a lab...this would be excellent for follow up chapters or story!
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
I'd never thought of him as a lab either! LOLThanks for reviewing! *pats the shiny stars*
I bet he was really ticked by that beings he hated Snuffles so much!
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
Absolutely! *grins*Thanks for reviewing! *pats the shinies*
Imagine that, a very bouncy, playful, affectionate dog! Nice take on the prompt!
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
ROFL! Of course, now he can explore his playful side. *grins*Thanks for your lovely review! *pats the shinies*
LOL I hope it's black one at least and not the sandy usual color.
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
Heh, thank you for reviewing! :)
Well, they are very protective and loyal.
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
Yes, very true! And he finally has an outlet for his playful side, even if he didn't know he had it. :)Thanks for reviewing and the stars!
He would probably eat better, if more indiscriminately, in that form! :)
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
ROFL! Too true!Thanks, love! *pats the shinies*
Tee he... Severus as a dog. I can't help but to make the connection between his form and that of Sirius.
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
I hear ya, LOL! There was a lot of snickering going on while I was writing it about Sirius/Snuffles...Thanks for the review! *pats the shinies*
OH! LOL this is great! Is he a black lab?
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
I'd imagine him to be black. :DThanks for reviewing! *pats the shiny stars*
Oh he can lick my face any day. Transformed or not. ;-)
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
I'll send him over, Morgaine! :)Thanks for reviewing! *pats the shinies*
Just the title of this one sent interesting pictures through my crazy brain. Now I'm glancing over at my Black Lab... wondering. He just jumped up on me this morning and scratched my neck in his enthusiasm to say good morning. Maybe I'll rename him. Apu (Nahasapimapetelon) however that's spelled, is a bit long anyway. C'mere Snapey poo! At least I can keep the poo part of his name. "Thank you... Come again!"Oh, gads, I've been up way too long and am starting to really ramble. Nice story by the way.
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
*falls over laughing*I found your review far more entertaining than my drabble, Deb! Thanks for that! :)
Response from debjunk (Reviewer)
As you could probably tell, I was in an odd mood last night. 
Poor Sev. All that time... and he's a dog. *imagines Sev and Snuffles frolicing in a field*
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
LOL! Now there is a picture that's seriously hard to believe! :))Thanks for reviewing! *pats the shinies*
Wow. Nice. Severus as a black lab? Heehee!
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
Heh, funny how drabbles turn out! :)Thanks for reviewing!
I suppose it is as well that Sirius is dead or there would be literal dog fights and pissin' contests! Thanks for this amusing response to the prompt!
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
Thanks,
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
! If I'd had more time, I'd probably made it AU and included at least one dog fight between them, LOL.
Oh, yeah, animal instincts at work. It's fitting that Severus would feel comfortable with the whole lab thing... That one was fun, thanks!
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
*grins* It was an appealing prompt...Thanks for reviewing! *pats the shinies*
*gigglesnorts* severus as a big, bounding, overgrown puppy! very believable doggy behavior. i love it! :D
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
Aw, thanks, love. That was actually kind of hard to write with a bunch of people talking, LOL! :D
Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)
i can imagine - i'm having a really hard time reading with all this chatter. (can't be the alcohol consumption.)
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
Alcohol? There is alcohol involved??? *goes to check the stash*
Good one~ :)
Response from karelia (Author of The Greasy Retriever)
Thanks, love! *pats the shinies*