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The Making of a Witch
KellyH14 Reviews | 4.93/10 (14 Ratings, 0 Likes, 3 Favorites )
Someone sees something surprising/or something they shouldn't have. What do they see?
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Wow, that was unexpected! The perv in me thought she accidently went back in time and saw her parents ... er ... *making* her. Lol! Completely different sort of scaring, and I don't know which would be worse!Nicely done. Thanks for the interesting read :)
Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)
LOL Now why didn't I think of that. Far more damaging indeed! XDThanks for the review and sorry for such a late reply to it. XD
I'm dmbstruck. I was expecting some rape or torture or something along the lines. I would never have guessed that, and I can understand why she wanted to forget. That's terrible news. Well done
Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)
Indeed. Especially since DD never seemed to have remorse for it. Thanks for the pretty stars!
Please say there is more!!!
Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)
Sorry but no. It least at this time. I know I could go further with this but too much on my plate at this time. :(
Oooooo, chilling!/shivers
Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)
Shivers is good in my book! XD
That is utterly disturbing. Of course, we've all heard rumours of governments doing this very thing to children. Excellent idea for a plot. =]
Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)
Thanks! I would hate to know exactly what the government does behind close doors *shivers*
very interesting but definitely creepy!
Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)
MAHAHAHA! Creep = good in my fanfic world. XD
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F-ing brilliant, K.
Author's Response: I'm not surprised that I'm F-ing brillant! You should know by now that I am. ;)
Thanks XD
Oh wow. How is she giong to react to that knowledge? To find out you were a subject of experimentation and not of natural selection. But then why did Snape dislike her so?
Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)
Righteous anger I assume - especially since DD really didn't display any remorse, and they kept continuing on messing around with her head as a teenager.Snape dislike her - I remember JKR saying that Snape fully believed in wizarding blood being pure (even though he is half) so I assume because she was made into a witch by experimentation he would see her as not even one. Even if he was the one that helped turn her into one.Thanks for insightful review. XD
Wow, just... wow! This gave me a bit of chills. A very interesting direction to take things. It would explain a lot. Great job.~Stef =o)
Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)
Thanks! XD
Oh...my lordy. Thats a peculiar thing to do!
Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)
Oh yes! Experimenting on children (even if you think you won't harm them) has always been a chill factor to me.
Kelly, this was fascinating! I see what you mean that you could have taken it further. I'd love to read more!
Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)
If and when I do it won't be soon. I'll be committed to your exchange for awhile. *Looks hopeful that you'll give me a good dark prompt* XD
*Gasps* Wow! This took my breath away. You did an amazing job with the prompt, and even though this is a drabble, it is one of those things that could be expanded. :)
Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)
Yup. Sometime drabble night can make you gain more plot bunnies! Thanks for the prompt!
Response from luvsev (Reviewer)
I have found that out about drabble night as well, since I still have the plot bunny jumping in my head for the Forbidden Room. You most certainly welcome for the prompt. I know that I have said it before, but you did such a lovely job with it.
That was definitely dark, Kel! :)
Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)
Iz like my dark ficz!