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The Making of a Witch

1: The Making of a Witch

The Making of a Witch

KellyH

14 Reviews   |   14 Ratings, 0 Likes, 3 Favorites )

Drama Angst Drabble/100-Word Potter Place Fun 1,237 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Albus Dumbledore Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Someone sees something surprising/or something they shouldn't have. What do they see?

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Chapter 1: The Making of a Witch


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10/10

slasher454

Wow, that was unexpected!  The perv in me thought she accidently went back in time and saw her parents ... er ... *making* her.  Lol!  Completely different sort of scaring, and I don't know which would be worse!Nicely done.  Thanks for the interesting read :)

Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)

LOL Now why didn't I think of that.  Far more damaging indeed! XDThanks for the review and sorry for such a late reply to it. XD

10/10

snitchette

I'm dmbstruck. I was expecting some rape or torture or something along the lines. I would never have guessed that, and I can understand why she wanted to forget. That's terrible news. Well done

Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)

Indeed.  Especially since DD never seemed to have remorse for it.  Thanks for the pretty stars!

0/10

sschmidt

Please say there is more!!! 

Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)

Sorry but no.  It least at this time. I know I could go further with this but too much on my plate at this time. :(

0/10

lyn_f

Oooooo, chilling!/shivers

Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)

Shivers is good in my book! XD

0/10

rhiannon113

That is utterly disturbing. Of course, we've all heard rumours of governments doing this very thing to children. Excellent idea for a plot. =]

Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)

Thanks! I would hate to know exactly what the government does behind close doors *shivers*

0/10

kittylefish

very interesting but definitely creepy!

Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)

MAHAHAHA! Creep =  good in my fanfic world. XD

10/10

Anonymous

F-ing brilliant, K.

Author's Response: I'm not surprised that I'm F-ing brillant! You should know by now that I am. ;)

Thanks XD

9/10

beaweasley2

Oh wow. How is she giong to react to that knowledge? To find out you were a subject of experimentation and not of natural selection. But then why did Snape dislike her so?

Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)

Righteous anger I assume - especially since DD really didn't display any remorse, and they kept continuing on messing around with her head as a teenager.Snape dislike her - I remember JKR saying that Snape fully believed in wizarding blood being pure (even though he is half) so I assume because she was made into a witch by experimentation he would see her as not even one. Even if he was the one that helped turn her into one.Thanks for insightful review. XD

10/10

Stefdarlin

Wow, just... wow!  This gave me a bit of chills.  A very interesting direction to take things.  It would explain a lot.  Great job.~Stef =o)

Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)

Thanks! XD

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Oh...my lordy. Thats a peculiar thing to do!

Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)

Oh yes! Experimenting on children (even if you think you won't harm them) has always been a chill factor to me.  

10/10

pyjamapants

Kelly, this was fascinating! I see what you mean that you could have taken it further. I'd love to read more!

Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)

If and when I do it won't be soon. I'll be committed to your exchange for awhile. *Looks hopeful that you'll give me a good dark prompt* XD

10/10

luvsev

*Gasps* Wow! This took my breath away. You did an amazing job with the prompt, and even though this is a drabble, it is one of those things that could be expanded. :)

Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)

Yup.  Sometime drabble night can make you gain more plot bunnies!  Thanks for the prompt!

Response from luvsev (Reviewer)

I have found that out about drabble night as well, since I still have the plot bunny jumping in my head for the Forbidden Room. You most certainly welcome for the prompt. I know that I have said it before, but you did such a lovely job with it.

0/10

peppermint

Ooo, creepy!

Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)

Creepy = good. XD

0/10

sunny33

That was definitely dark, Kel! :)

Response from KellyH (Author of The Making of a Witch)

Iz like my dark ficz!

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