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On the Loch-Out

1: One Shot

On the Loch-Out

teshara

16 Reviews   |   16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Humor Drabble/100-Word Potter Place Fun 498 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Luna Lovegood Xenophilius Lovegood

Zacharias Smith accompanies Luna Lovegood on a day expedition at the request of his father.

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liviconnor

Oh, this is lovely!  Funny, which is exactly what I was looking for today.  Thanks!

10/10

slasher454

I adore Luna's relationship with her father. They're quirky and imaginative, but that doesn't mean they aren't clever and cunning, too! Thanks for the lovely read :)

Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)

thanks!

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jectex

This was fabulously funny!

10/10

snitchette

No wonder why she was sorted into Ravenclaw. *grin*

Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)

muahahaha!

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lyn_f

Bwahahahaha!Way to put that pompous Zacharias Smith in his place!

Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)

Thanks! :D

10/10

kittylefish

i love this!  especially the part where luna and her father out-slytherin the slytherin.  very unexpected turn of events.  :D

Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)

:D Thanks! Zacharias is a Hufflepuff, though :D He's a really tiny character, but he was in the Order.

Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)

oops.  sorry, i got him confused.  so - point taken, but they were still being awfully sneeky. 

10/10

beaweasley2

Xeno is the Loch Ness monster?  LOL Of course he is! Really funny.

Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)

You are the first to comment on that! I keep waiting for people to ask me how anyone misses a animagus dinosaur...Thanks!

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HermioneJeanSnape

Oh, brilliant, Xenophilius, brilliant! Ha, serves Zacharias right.

Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)

Thanks! Xeno's always good for a laugh!

10/10

pyjamapants

This is brilliant! Bloody Brilliant!Zach's internal dialogue was hilarious, but Luna and Xeno's response took the cake.

Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)

hee hee! Thanks!

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WriterMerrin

Oh yeah!  That is way cooler than I could have imagined.

Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)

Thanks!

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peppermint

Bwhaha!  Very cute!  

Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)

thanks!

10/10

Stefdarlin

Tee hee!  That was awesome!  I love Animagus forms.  Just proves Luna is always smarter than she seems.

Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)

Thanks :D

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KellyH

Oooh devious Lovegoods! LOL

Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)

:D Xeno's a crafty one...

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silverdoe

LOL, cute

Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)

thanks!

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sunny33

ROFL.  One way of scaring off prospective suitors! :)

Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)

it works :D

10/10

luvsev

lovely use of the prompt, dear.

Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)

thanks :D

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