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On the Loch-Out
teshara16 Reviews | 4.38/10 (16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
Zacharias Smith accompanies Luna Lovegood on a day expedition at the request of his father.
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Oh, this is lovely! Funny, which is exactly what I was looking for today. Thanks!
I adore Luna's relationship with her father. They're quirky and imaginative, but that doesn't mean they aren't clever and cunning, too! Thanks for the lovely read :)
Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)
thanks!
This was fabulously funny!
No wonder why she was sorted into Ravenclaw. *grin*
Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)
muahahaha!
Bwahahahaha!Way to put that pompous Zacharias Smith in his place!
Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)
Thanks! :D
i love this! especially the part where luna and her father out-slytherin the slytherin. very unexpected turn of events. :D
Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)
:D Thanks! Zacharias is a Hufflepuff, though :D He's a really tiny character, but he was in the Order.
Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)
oops. sorry, i got him confused. so - point taken, but they were still being awfully sneeky.
Xeno is the Loch Ness monster? LOL Of course he is! Really funny.
Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)
You are the first to comment on that! I keep waiting for people to ask me how anyone misses a animagus dinosaur...Thanks!
Oh, brilliant, Xenophilius, brilliant! Ha, serves Zacharias right.
Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)
Thanks! Xeno's always good for a laugh!
This is brilliant! Bloody Brilliant!Zach's internal dialogue was hilarious, but Luna and Xeno's response took the cake.
Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)
hee hee! Thanks!
Oh yeah! That is way cooler than I could have imagined.
Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)
Thanks!
Tee hee! That was awesome! I love Animagus forms. Just proves Luna is always smarter than she seems.
Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)
Thanks :D
Oooh devious Lovegoods! LOL
Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)
:D Xeno's a crafty one...
ROFL. One way of scaring off prospective suitors! :)
Response from teshara (Author of On the Loch-Out)
it works :D