Three's A Crowd
severuslover16 Reviews | 7.19/10 (16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 16 Favorites )
Hermione and Pansy have never gotten along, but now there’s a whole new reason for their fighting. And of course, it’s over a guy! Join the fight as these two girls battle it out and use any means necessary to win the guy’s heart.
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My name is Jen. I live in the United States and didn't really start reading, or even liking, Harry Potter until about the year before HBP came out. I feel like it's been ages since I've been on a fanfic site and posted anything. I'm going try to start posting again before school starts up. :) I think the writing bug has bitten me again.
Reviews for Three's A Crowd
Nicely tied up with a red bow, I'd say. Really cute story. I enjoyed reading it very much.
Response from severuslover (Author of Three's A Crowd)
Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. ~Jen
LOL Good fro Hermone - she made the bold move! Now, lets see if she wins?
Response from severuslover (Author of Three's A Crowd)
You'll have to wait and see...LOL! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for the review and rating. ~Jen
While I can understand all the problems involved, I think it is very bad form to ditch a partner one day before this kind of event or even on the day itself, because she won't be able to find another partner that quick. At least, if he does end things with Pansy, he should show some courtesy and not show up at all, let alone go with Hermione.
Response from severuslover (Author of Three's A Crowd)
I understand what you mean, and, believe it or not, I agree wholeheartedly with you. But unfortunately, it needed to happen for the sake of the plot. Sorry to disappoint you with this angle...I hope you'll still come back for the last chapter. Thanks for the review and rating. ~Jen
I kind of feel sorry for Pansy. But not much. I guess that makes me evil.
Response from severuslover (Author of Three's A Crowd)
No, you're not evil...a bit insane maybe, but...LOL. I kinda felt bad for Pansy when I wrote this chapter too, but I got over it by the next chapter...you'll see why. Anyway, thanks for the review and the wonderful rating. ~Jen
Poor Hermione. Jealousy is not an easy feeling, but the hurt that it provides is much worth. Nonetheless, I'm glad Draco is showing concern, lust even. Surely this will end nicely foe everyone. Or so I hope.
Response from severuslover (Author of Three's A Crowd)
Yeah, Hermione's having a slightly rough time keeping Draco's attention, but he's slowly coming around. Thanks for the review and the wonderful rating. I hope you come back to read the rest. ~Jen
I really like Hermione's style. The spell she blamed on Pansy, the way she flirted with Draco!! Lovely and devious, just the right use for her superior intellect. LOL I'd like to ask one question. How many more chapters have we got to look forward to? I'm enjoying this, and both wanting it to come to some sort of resolution and not wanting it to end!!
Response from severuslover (Author of Three's A Crowd)
I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I have two more chapters to post; so the end is near, but yet it's not. LOL. Thanks for the lovely review. ~Jen
Oh, Max was a creeep! Yes, good thing Draco was there. As for Pans, If I were Hermione, I'd go ahead and read in the common room or play exploding snap over and over trying to make as much noise as possible. Let him take her into hs room if they wanna snog! Common room...
Response from severuslover (Author of Three's A Crowd)
Hey,
Response from severuslover (Author of Three's A Crowd)
! I'm so glad you were able to find your way to this story. Oh, and don't worry; Hermione will get her revenge on Pansy in the end. Thanks for the review.~Jen
For some reason the idea of a Pansy/Hermione rivalry just tickles me. Probably because I haven't read it before. Very cute so far ^^
Response from severuslover (Author of Three's A Crowd)
Thanks. I'm glad you like the whole Pansy/Hermione rivalry. When I first got the idea for the story, there was just something about these two girls that drove me to write a "battle" between them. Thanks for the review. ~Jen
I like it so far. You're keepng the Head cliche but mixing it with the Draco was a spy clichce, and that's something I haven't read in the ship before. Kudos!
Response from severuslover (Author of Three's A Crowd)
Ummm...thanks, I think. I'm glad you find my mixing of cliches intriguing and fun. Hope you enjoy the rest (when it's posted anyway). ~Jen
I love the mental image of Pansy covered in cake and punch. That was cute.
Response from severuslover (Author of Three's A Crowd)
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. ~Jen
Awwwwww Poor Pansy. The cake AND the punch bowl. She deserves some punishment but this humiliation in front of the whole school? Naaa. Look what you've done with me. I'm getting soft. Wonderful job with the whole story, I enjoyed it immensely.
Response from severuslover (Author of Three's A Crowd)
I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Pansy's punishment was a bit over the top, but when I started writing this chapter, I just couldn't help myself. Thanks again. ~Jen
REVIEW PLEASE!?!?! The story was cute and poor Draco, whats a Dragon to do? Please update soon!Lots of Luv, Amber
Response from severuslover (Author of Three's A Crowd)
Thank you for the review. I'm glad you like the story so far. I'm going on a trip this weekend, but I'm going to try to edit the last chapter when I get back on Sunday. So, look for the next chapter sometime next week. ~Jen
I'm really liking this story. Are you going to update here soon? I can't wait to read the rest of it.
Response from severuslover (Author of Three's A Crowd)
I'm planning on looking over the next chapter one more time tonight before submitting it for validation. Thanks for the review and I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. ~Jen
I like the situation you've built, and the tension. I think you must be on to something brilliant!
Response from severuslover (Author of Three's A Crowd)
Thanks! I really enjoyed coming up with this storyline. ~Jen
OMG What a fight. I would have paid Galeons to see that ! I can't wait for the next fight.
Response from severuslover (Author of Three's A Crowd)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had a lot of fun writing that scene. And I won't tell you too much, but this is definitely not the only fight in the story. Thanks for the review! ~Jen
Some passive voice issues, but a plausible story line. How many chapters have you planned for this story? It will be interesting to see where you take it.
Response from severuslover (Author of Three's A Crowd)
I have three more chapters to post. I'm glad you find the story interesting so far. Thanks for the review and I hope you return to read the rest. ~Jen