Padlocked

bttrfly

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Angst Poetry: Other 88 Words 1 Chapter WIP

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Member Since 2005 | 4 Stories | Favorited by 2 | 1 Review Written | 5 Review Responses

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Arabella Bloodgood

You are truely talented.

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Arabella Bloodgood

You are truely talented.

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Lillith Maria

Wow. This is one of those poems that seems to say everything and there is probably nothing that could make it better. Keep writing poetry. you are amazing.

Response from bttrfly (Author of Padlocked)

Thanks.

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Southern_Witch_69

You know, about ten years ago, my grandfather died. He and I were very close. We always talked about everything together, no secrets. Like, if he caught me smoking in my younger years, he'd ask if I needed a light. That kind of thing. My grandma gave me his knife--the one he always carried at this side. Well, I used it to carve a heart and his name, Lee, into my arm. I was so numb, I thought it would make me feel again. This poem reminds me of that. So... it touches me, as I feel I've been there. Cheers!

Response from bttrfly (Author of Padlocked)

I started cutting when I was in 6th grade... at the end of 10th grade my best friend found out, so I tried to stop. After not cutting for one month, I really wanted the release I use to get from it. She put a pen in my hand and a paper in front of me. Told me to write instead, and thats what came out.

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