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The Breeding Dementors
lyn_f15 Reviews | 6.6/10 (15 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
Amidst a heavy London fog, a pair of newly-bred Dementors find a pair of unwilling victims.
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I am a relative newcomer to the world of Harry Potter Fan Fiction. I recently discovered the good 'ship HG/SS, and I've been hooked to the point where it is my OTP.
I was a Ruth Kirschstein NRSA post-doctoral fellow at the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill. When I am not at the lab bench or in the classroom, I am an organist. I'd be in a church near me, occupying an organ bench, and blowing dust around the nave. (Just kidding.) Currently, I serve as organist/choirmaster for a couple of small Episcopal churches near Duke University.
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Brilliantly creepy. I like the way you've captured that both the boys were feeling hopeless at that point.
Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)
Thanks so much, Rose! This was my first drabble for TPP, and it is amongst my favourite ones I had written.
oh cool. is it going to be a one-shot? it's little duddykins and his reform school cousin, right?
Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)
Yes, it's just a one-shot, and you've guessed correctly who the potential victims are.Thanks for your review.
I feel cold suddendly. Brrr.
Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)
/casts a Warming Charm on
Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)
Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you liked it.
Very good. :)
Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)
Thanks, glad you liked it.
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Excellent!
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Kinda spooky how they are born. Nice twist on what happened in canon. The new babaies are going to go hungry, aren't they?
Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)
Hmmmm ... seems like it. I don't think they're all that keen on Patronuses. Thanks for your review.
Chilling thought! Nice depiction of the scene!
Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)
Thanks! Glad you liked it.
LOL and they will get more than they bargined for! LOL Realy cute take on the scene!
Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)
Thanks!
Lovely take on the prompt. :)
Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)
Thanks, LITC!
Dudley always did remind me of Shamu. :)*makes to avoid thinking further about dementors breeding**shudder*Did it just get colder in here?
Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)
/looks at the thermometer on the virtual wallErm ... think happy thoughts, and hopefully the temperature will warm up to comfortable levels. Yes, he certainly did remind me of that particular killer whale!
Killer whale type boy ROFL!
Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)
Glad you loved that description!
Very nice!
Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)
Thanks! And thanks for issuing the dare; I had fun writing this one.
"The mists parted to reveal a shadowy figure billowing softly in the gentle breeze. The figure appeared to grow and expand, stretching itself like a rubber band. It split itself neatly into two, with each half becoming its own billowing entity." Nice imagery! XD
Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)
Thanks! *glomps you*