The Petulant Poetess
  • Stories
  • Browse By
    • Category
    • Character
    • Genre
    • Author
  • Info
      Useful Info
    • General Information
    • Message Board
    • Membership & Story Ratings
    • Submission Rules
    • Important Links
    • Support The Petulant Poetess
    • Writers' Resources
    • Punctuation Guide
    • Writing Fan Fiction
    • Harry Potter Resources
    • Dictionaries
    • Beta Resources
  • Create an Account
    • Create an Account
    • Sign In
Saturday Night Drabbles The Breeding Dementors
Chapters Menu
Download PDF Version

New Chapter for The Breeding Dementors

The Breeding Dementors

1: The Breeding Dementors

The Breeding Dementors

lyn_f

15 Reviews   |   15 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Drabble/100-Word Saturday Night Drabbles 141 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Amidst a heavy London fog, a pair of newly-bred Dementors find a pair of unwilling victims.

Start Reading

Chapters (1)

Chapter 1: The Breeding Dementors


About lyn_f

Validated
Author

lyn_f

Member Since 2008  |  33 Stories  |  Favorited by 18  |  327 Reviews Written  |  399 Review Responses

I am a relative newcomer to the world of Harry Potter Fan Fiction. I recently discovered the good 'ship HG/SS, and I've been hooked to the point where it is my OTP.

I was a Ruth Kirschstein NRSA post-doctoral fellow at the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill. When I am not at the lab bench or in the classroom, I am an organist. I'd be in a church near me, occupying an organ bench, and blowing dust around the nave. (Just kidding.) Currently, I serve as organist/choirmaster for a couple of small Episcopal churches near Duke University.

Author Website
http://organic-chemist.livejournal.com/
Also Archived At
FanFiction.net, Lumos, Occlumency

Reviews for The Breeding Dementors

Displaying all 15 Review
0/10

Rose of the West

Brilliantly creepy.  I like the way you've captured that both the boys were feeling hopeless at that point.

Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)

Thanks so much, Rose! This was my first drabble for TPP, and it is amongst my favourite ones I had written.

0/10

snapify52

oh cool.  is it going to be a one-shot?  it's little duddykins and his reform school cousin, right?

Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)

Yes, it's just a one-shot, and you've guessed correctly who the potential victims are.Thanks for your review.

10/10

snitchette

I feel cold suddendly. Brrr.

Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)

/casts a Warming Charm on

Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)

Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you liked it.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Very good. :)

Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)

Thanks, glad you liked it.

10/10

Anonymous

Excellent!

Author's Response: Thanks!

10/10

beaweasley2

Kinda spooky how they are born. Nice twist on what happened in canon. The new babaies are going to go hungry, aren't they?

Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)

Hmmmm ... seems like it.  I don't think they're all that keen on Patronuses.  Thanks for your review.

10/10

braye27

Chilling thought!  Nice depiction of the scene!

Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)

Thanks!  Glad you liked it.

0/10

morgaine_dulac

Brrrr...Nicely done!/M

Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)

Thanks!

10/10

The Girls of Hogwarts

LOL and they will get more than they bargined for! LOL Realy cute take on the scene!

Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)

Thanks!

9/10

kittylefish

*shivers* well done. :)

Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)

Thanks, kitty!

10/10

karelia

Lovely take on the prompt. :)

Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)

Thanks, LITC!

10/10

pyjamapants

Dudley always did remind me of Shamu. :)*makes to avoid thinking further about dementors breeding**shudder*Did it just get colder in here?

Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)

/looks at the thermometer on the virtual wallErm ... think happy thoughts, and hopefully the temperature will warm up to comfortable levels.  Yes, he certainly did remind me of that particular killer whale!

0/10

sunny33

Killer whale type boy ROFL!

Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)

Glad you loved that description!

10/10

HermioneWeasley1972

Very nice! 

Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)

Thanks!  And thanks for issuing the dare; I had fun writing this one.

0/10

KellyH

"The mists parted to reveal a shadowy figure billowing softly in the gentle breeze. The figure appeared to grow and expand, stretching itself like a rubber band. It split itself neatly into two, with each half becoming its own billowing entity." Nice imagery! XD 

Response from lyn_f (Author of The Breeding Dementors)

Thanks! *glomps you*

Displaying all 15 Review

The Petulant Poetess

A moderated archive, hosting stories by authors who enjoy dabbling in the wonderful world of Harry Potter fanfiction.

More About The Petulant Poetess

© Copyrights. All rights reserved. ThePetulantPoetess.com

Explore

  • All Stories
  • by Author
  • by Category
  • by Character
  • by Genre

Links

  • General Information
  • Terms and Conditions
  • Message Board
  • Writers' Resources
  • Submission Rules