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Following You

17 Reviews | 5.88/10 (17 Ratings, 0 Likes, 15 Favorites )

Snapshot Alternate Universe Hogwarts Castle 655 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Harry Potter Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Harry notices that Hermione keeps making excuses not to meet with him, Ginny, and Ron. He decides to follow her one day.

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10/10

snitchette

“Why not? You need—what is that horrible smell?” “Nothing.”[...]“Foolish wand waving would be better than living in filth! And you need to bathe. Go now while I tidy this up.” These lines are absolutely priceless. I don't think Sev has already been ordered to go take a bath by a woman before. *wink* And I'd love to read more.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Following You)

Teehee... Sometimes a man's got to be told everything!

10/10

pickles

I like it!Thank you..

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Following You)

thanks! Long time no see! :)

Response from pickles (Reviewer)

How are you busy woman?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Following You)

Doing great! :) You?

Response from pickles (Reviewer)

Good.School has been cancelled for today.I'm hoping that the magistrate will let us reschedule our hearings for today til another day. Then I can be home with the girls again.My boss will call me around 8am.

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kimjo2

i like it because it shows that harry can be capable of mature reasoning. thanks so much

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Following You)

Thanks for reading! :) I like a more mature thinking Harry, so I couldn't just let him hang like that. haha

10/10

Anonymous

Very interesting, this one, really a good reading - you make me very curious about what will happening next... I do hope you decide to write more about this idea.

Author's Response: I probably won't, but then again.... :) thanks!

10/10

braye27

Very nicely done! I like that Hermione can keep a secret.Could you be tempted to write a sequel?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Following You)

Thanks! Possibly. Hahaha

10/10

irishredlass

Like it I did, but you are so good at making the reader say more. Do his hopes come true? What is the interaction like behind the closed door? Hugs Irish

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Following You)

I leave that up to you, my dear reader. :) ~hugs~

10/10

Muggline

Thank you, thank you, thank you. And I agree with some others: you accidentally checked the "complete" box, dear ;-)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Following You)

LOL! Thanks! :)

0/10

debjunk

So Harry. Jealous and then finally not. At least he got to the not part.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Following You)

Agree! :)

10/10

The Girls of Hogwarts

LOL Yes, what a pilock! Snape reached out to someone at least and his alive! Nice little story. Maybe you culd be talked into adding another chapter - if you get bored again that is?

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Following You)

Who is this masked reviewer? Hahaha!! Thanks. :)

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HermioneJeanSnape

Ooh, evilly tantalizing. Excellent!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Following You)

Thanks!

10/10

June W

ahem.... there is a mistake here: Completed: Yes I want more!! I want to know Snapey's thoughts and how he and Hermione connected. This is like the prologue or first in a series of vignettes. (wheedles SW) please?????

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Following You)

Hmm. I will think about. It's a good idea actually the more I think of it. :) thanks

0/10

sunny33

Interesting to speculate why Snape chose Hermione.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Following You)

:) Thanks!

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WriterMerrin

Interesting perspective, and the dialog was hilarious!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Following You)

~grin~ Thank you

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CharmedForce

Oh, this is exactly how I think Harry would react. First with insult that Severus dare hide away and keep Harry from knowing more of Lily, but then with actual understanding. Brilliant!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Following You)

Thank you so much! :)

10/10

Gardengirl

And a lightning-fast recovery from self-centeredness on Harry's part! Very nice little vignette. Thanks!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Following You)

Thank you! :)

10/10

karelia

Veeeeeeeerrrrrrry nicely done! I like especially how Harry chastices himself for his thoughts of jealousy; that's extremely realistic. Thank you for writing it, my friend. :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Following You)

Whoot! You're welcome, my friend. :) xooxoxox

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tenoh27

Very nice and a good to see Harry maturing, thank you!

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