This Moment

bttrfly

3 Reviews | 10.0/10 (3 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

Romance Poetry: Free Form 548 Words 1 Chapter Complete

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Chapter 1: This Moment

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10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Your Dad and mine could get along very well. This is very romantic in a daydream kinda way.

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Lillith Maria

Ha ha. I don't think I want to suffer in the eternal flames of hell so... I Love This Poem. all of your poetry is magnifecent

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Southern_Witch_69

Very touching. Did the person die? Or simply leave? Seems like "he" did. I guess sometimes losing someone simply by having them leave is like them dying as well... especially if you never see them again. good poem

Response from bttrfly (Author of This Moment)

There was no guy... there never has been. I just had a dream about dancing on a beach. In the morning I wrote this. I really wish I had a guy to dance on the beach with... southern_witch_69's response: Sounds like she is talking to someone, dreaming about the person, and wakes in disappointment that they are gone. I mistook it for having lost someone "she'd" already had.

Response from bttrfly (Author of This Moment)

I never really thought of it that way, but that makes sense too..

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