My Body Aches

serenity_potterx

3 Reviews | 6.67/10 (3 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Angst Poetry: Free Form 159 Words 1 Chapter Complete

A short poem I wrote during a time of depression.

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Chapter 1: My Body Aches

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Im an A-level student living just ouside London. I also am Fan Fiction mad. Im addicted to both the Hary Potter and Twilight fandoms they rock nd each contain some awesome peopele. I love my friends they light up my days and make me laugh constantly. My dad is my absolute world. He's my role modle and best friend.

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10/10

Southern_Witch_69

You've made your point well, and I can almost "feel" it.

Response from serenity_potterx (Author of My Body Aches)

Thank you.Im glad you could connect to it.:)

10/10

oohdear

this is so good, i can feel your pain, i don't know whether it is real or imagined, but i feel it.awesome

Response from serenity_potterx (Author of My Body Aches)

thank you. it was real when i wrote the peom but that was a while ago now.thank you for your kind words

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lauren marie

wow I really like this poem, which is honestly unusual for me as I don't typically connect with poetry but I really felt with this, I am really happy to read that you are feeling differently now, it is great to hear. love your writing!

Response from serenity_potterx (Author of My Body Aches)

Thank you. Im really glad to hear that you felt you could connect to it, i geuss thats one of the main aims of writing, to try to get the reader to respond. I wrote this peice during a really wrough time and it was simply to explore my own emotions I never really thought about showing it to anyone, but Im glad I have now. I am a completly different person from when I wrote this and am sooo much happier now.Thank you soo much for your kind words.*Hugs*S_px

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