Yule 2008 Challenge Yuletide Ball

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Yuletide Ball

Corazon

33 Reviews | 5.88/10 (33 Ratings, 0 Likes, 11 Favorites )

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Stand Here Please: Dumbledore/McGonaga ll-type meddling to get an unsuspecting couple to stand under the mistletoe. HG/SS

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Chapter 1: Yuletide Ball

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8/10

la Chatelaine

And that is why Hermione is my "shero." She does the things I could not possibly do but would love to. And not just a peck on the cheek either! Go Girl.

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Yeah! I'm so happy that you saw that - she could have kissed him on the cheek, but what's the fun in that? She had to lay one on him - even if he didn't respond. She is a "shero"*hugs*Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Yeah! I'm so happy that you saw that - she could have kissed him on the cheek, but what's the fun in that? She had to lay one on him - even if he didn't respond. She is a "shero"*hugs*Corazon

10/10

MoreThanSirius

Poor Severus! Sometimes even that vaunted Gryffindor courage needs a little help. Glad Hermione found some Firewhiskey reinforcements.He leaned forward and whispered, “Repercussions.”Oh yeah, baby! I can't wait for the repercussions. I'm so glad to see that you are back and just as happy to hear you have plans to expand this.

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Yes, "Repercussions" - they are grand and you wil soon read about them. Thank you for reviewing!Hugs,Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Yes, "Repercussions" - they are grand and you wil soon read about them. Thank you for reviewing!Hugs,Corazon

0/10

kimjo2

a stick in the mud!!! i just howled! thanks so much

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

You are so welcomed! I actually had a custodian give a teacher a cup of mud with a stick in it. It was so perfect! hehehe...Hugs,Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

You are so welcomed! I actually had a custodian give a teacher a cup of mud with a stick in it. It was so perfect! hehehe...Hugs,Corazon

0/10

Dreamy_Dragon

This was fun. Poor Severus :D

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

I'm glad you had fun! Yes, poor Severus, but I will make it up to him, if not the full version, at least in another story.Hugs,Corazon

10/10

blue artemis

That was amusing.

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Glad you enjoyed!~Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Glad you enjoyed!~Corazon

10/10

snitchette

Definitely this calls for a sequel. It could lead to so much more... Anyway It was a nice story and I enjoyd it very much.

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

I am glad you enjoyed it! There is plenty more with a slight twist to what you just read. I hope to have it ready soon.Hugs,Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

I am glad you enjoyed it! There is plenty more with a slight twist to what you just read. I hope to have it ready soon.Hugs,Corazon

10/10

MagicAlly

Lovely story. I hope you do the rest.Really glad you are writing again.

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Thank you! And yes, I am currently writing the rest. I have missed writing. I just need to make the time for it.Hugs,Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Thank you! And yes, I am currently writing the rest. I have missed writing. I just need to make the time for it.Hugs,Corazon

10/10

apisa_b

Now I think I have to read the follow-up story to get the meaning of the christmas present.I wonder who was responsible for the mistletoe ... A nice light-hearted story you have written here. Thank you for the laughs I had :-)

Response from apisa_b (Reviewer)

As to who is responsible for the mistletoe ... next time I'm going to read the summary as well before I post the review ;-)

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

I'm so glad you had some good laughs! That is what I aim for. Yes, there is more, which I am working on now. I love your response to reading the summary. I'm glad I'm not the only one who misses out on certain things. My problem is that I like to dig right in! *mwah*Hugs,Corazon

Response from apisa_b (Reviewer)

As to who is responsible for the mistletoe ... next time I'm going to read the summary as well before I post the review ;-)

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

10/10

indigo_rose

That was hilarious! I'm looking forward to your subsequent tale now with bated breath!

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

You are so welcomed! It's your excited response that ignites my ambition to write faster! I will get it out soon!Hugs,Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

You are so welcomed! It's your excited response that ignites my ambition to write faster! I will get it out soon!Hugs,Corazon

10/10

Veneficus

Awesome! The author that got me into SS/HG is back... I've been a fan of yours for years.In any case, this cute little story was too much fun to read! I can't wait for the whole story to be posted, and until then, I'll be thinking on how you (or Hermione really) will manage to ... un-stick Severus. *grins*. Welcome back.

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

You are too kind. I am truly please you found this story fun to read. I am busy writing the rest of this story and hope to have it up soon. Thank you for the wonderful welcome back!Hugs,Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

You are too kind. I am truly please you found this story fun to read. I am busy writing the rest of this story and hope to have it up soon. Thank you for the wonderful welcome back!Hugs,Corazon

10/10

Maddie

Aw, poor Severus. It must have felt like he was a student again.

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Yeah, poor guy, but I have some really good "activities" planned for him in the complete story, if you know what I mean. Thanks for reviewing!*hugs*Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Yeah, poor guy, but I have some really good "activities" planned for him in the complete story, if you know what I mean. Thanks for reviewing!*hugs*Corazon

0/10

droxy

Poor Snape. Kissed and mocked. tsk ysk.Nice little short story.

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Don't worry, Severus will get his or perhaps he already got his and this was Hermione's revenge....hmmmm....I'm almost finished with the complete story. Thanks for the review!*hugs*Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Don't worry, Severus will get his or perhaps he already got his and this was Hermione's revenge....hmmmm....I'm almost finished with the complete story. Thanks for the review!*hugs*Corazon

9/10

kittylefish

that was a fun premise. i look forward to reading the longer story this will be part of.

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

I'm glad you enjoyed!Hugs,Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

I'm glad you enjoyed!Hugs,Corazon

10/10

MollysSister

OH MY OH MYThere is going to be fall out from the kiss I just know it!

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Hehehe...there will be a lot of fall out due to previous events, yet to be disclosed and later events. I am having fun with this one and hope to finish it soon! Hugs,Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Hehehe...there will be a lot of fall out due to previous events, yet to be disclosed and later events. I am having fun with this one and hope to finish it soon! Hugs,Corazon

10/10

kizzy7

Aww, this was cute-- Hermione summoning up the courage to kiss Snape. Would love to read more!

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Thank you! And yes, there is more coming!Hugs,Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Thank you! And yes, there is more coming!Hugs,Corazon

0/10

lyn_f

:)I like that! Mr Anti-Social gets an education, and the Gryffindor Know-It-All is the one who delivers it to him! This was nicely done.

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Mr. Anti-Social - I love it! And yes, he will get quite a bit more educating! Thanks for reviewing.Hugs,Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Mr. Anti-Social - I love it! And yes, he will get quite a bit more educating! Thanks for reviewing.Hugs,Corazon

0/10

sunny33

A stick in the mud - what a great present!

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

I couldn't resist that stick in the mud. LOL!Hugs,Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

I couldn't resist that stick in the mud. LOL!Hugs,Corazon

0/10

FruGal

I'm so glad you are going to continue this very amusing story. I think Hermione has Severus on the run. Did she also send him the missletoe?

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

The mistletoe is actually someone else's doing, which I hope to have uploaded soon. Thank you for the review!Hugs,Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

The mistletoe is actually someone else's doing, which I hope to have uploaded soon. Thank you for the review!Hugs,Corazon

0/10

Javoher

Nice one! I'd love to see more of courageous!Hermione.

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Thank you! Courageous!Hermione is one her way!Hugs,Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Thank you! Courageous!Hermione is one her way!Hugs,Corazon

0/10

alatariel leralonde

Cute! I am anxious to see what you do with the continuation!

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Thank you!!!Hugs,Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Thank you!!!Hugs,Corazon

10/10

cenicienta

Interesting story. So, what is Severus teaching? And can you explain some more about eh mud and the stick?

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Well, in the full story, Severus holds a specific position at Hogwarts which you will read about soon. A stick in the mud is an idiom so the direct translation makes no sense at all. From your penname, I am assuming that you speak Spanish. I wish I knew an idiom in Spanish that would help to clarify. Basically it means someone who does not have fun, always sees the negative side to things, brings down people who are happy. I hope this helps.Hugs,Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

0/10

carley9

Very cute :) Definately going on the favorites list :)

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Thank you!Hugs,Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Thank you!Hugs,Corazon

0/10

debjunk

Wow, she's brave! For both the gift and the kiss.

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Yes, she is. Thanks for the review!Hugs,Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Yes, she is. Thanks for the review!Hugs,Corazon

10/10

June W

how lovely to see you again! I enjoyed this one-shot excerpt, and look forward to seeing the rest one day. poor Severus.... I hope he gets at least one NICE present this Christmas. I also like your new Potions master, with his talent for mixing drinks. oh, and Hermione calling Severus a stick-in-the-mud when she herself knows that she is a prude - now I wonder how she's going to de-prude herself in the next year. perhaps Severus will help... muahaha! thanks for the story, and I'm glad you're here.

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Thank you for the wonderful review! I hope to have your questions answered soon with the full story. Again, thank you!Hugs,Corazon

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

Thank you for the wonderful review! I hope to have your questions answered soon with the full story. Again, thank you!Hugs,Corazon

10/10

Becky

Corazon..Welcome back..I have missed your writings..How are you??I am looking foward to the continuation of this story..I love it, good for Hermione!! Hugs,

Response from Corazon (Author of Yuletide Ball)

You are so sweet! Thank you for the welcome! I am doing great, just so darn busy that I need to beg for time to write. I am hoping hubbys wins the lotto soon so I can quite my job and be a lazy bum who writes all day! *mwah*Hugs,Corazon

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