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The Dunnest Smoke of Hell
Scarlet Crystal3 Reviews | 6.67/10 (3 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )
Harry Potter lies face down in the dirt, surrounded by a ring of Death Eaters in the Forbidden Forest. Narcissa Malfoy approaches, lowering hand to the boy's chest to see if he yet lives. Everyone knows what happens next: Narcissa announces Lord Voldemort's triumph as Harry plays dead. What if, in this crucial moment, Bellatrix did not trust her feckless sister? What if she strode past her celebratory comrades and knelt by the Dark Lord's fallen enemy, wishing to feel for herself the absence of the boy's heartbeat? This is the story of that tragic turn of events.
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Hello! My name is Scarlet. I have been writing for as long as I could remember, though admittedly my first writing impliment was a bright red marker. I amĀ a retiredĀ beta at PI, the Perfect Imagination HP Beta directory.
Reviews for The Dunnest Smoke of Hell
Excellent beginning. You've apparently set the world on end quite neatly. I also like the reference in your title. Are you implying that Bellatrix will become a Lady McBeth-like character? (I just finished up a run as Lady M for a production at Halloween).
Oh, wow. Oh wow oh wow oh wow. I hate it when I'm rendered speechless, but you seem to have done so. Oh do please continue this tale!
This is very interesting. Good start. I love the characterization of Bella in the beginning. Perfect.