I like this a lot. It sent shivers down my spine. And rang a very familiar bell. Know that you can feel comfortable being an outcast, eventually. :-) And write some more, it's good!

I have to say that this reminds me so much of my nephew. He ended up quitting high school because he didn't have anyone. People made fun of him because he was overweight and hadn't alot of money for name brands. Very sad. Lots of emotion here.

Very perceptive, and well presented.

I like this poem. It truly describes highschool. But you were a loner and, suprisingly, loners are usually more artistic and have more emotions to write about and describe.

I like this poem. It truly describes highschool. But you were a loner and, suprisingly, loners are usually more artistic and have more emotions to write about and describe.

This makes me think of Hermione and how she would feel.  Your very good.