She
sweetflag4 Reviews | 4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )
Inspired by the various poems that I have read on this site; this is my take on how we hold on to those things that we should let go.
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sweetflag
Member Since 2007 | 27 Stories | Favorited by 35 | 180 Reviews Written | 1,104 Review Responses
Hello. I love reading and writing... what more can I say?
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I think this is beautifully worded.
Response from sweetflag (Author of She)
Aha! You went through some poems--bet you're glad that they were all short! :D lol. I like this poem. I wrote it without thinking about it much (you can probably tell... lol), and just went for a more instinct driven approach--if that makes sense.Thank you for reading and leaving the review :)
Beautiful. Excellent imagery and especially enticing musicality in the first stanza. 
Response from sweetflag (Author of She)
Thank you for the review and the wonderful compliment.
Response from sweetflag (Author of She)
Thank you for the review and the wonderful compliment.
this is absolutely beautiful. i can't find one single thing about it to criticize; nor can i find anything to single out as special, because the whole thing is absolute perfection! very well done. :D
Response from sweetflag (Author of She)
Thank you for such a beautiful review... poetry has always been this slippery concept... you should see the marks I used to get whenever we did critical analysis of poetry at school, and I still have no idea how it works! When my life calms down a bit, I am going to study poetry... get down to the bones of it--any advice or tips would be greatly appreciated... lol :D
Response from sweetflag (Author of She)
Thank you for such a beautiful review... poetry has always been this slippery concept... you should see the marks I used to get whenever we did critical analysis of poetry at school, and I still have no idea how it works! When my life calms down a bit, I am going to study poetry... get down to the bones of it--any advice or tips would be greatly appreciated... lol :D
Goes right to the heart that one. Thank you for sharing. /M
Response from sweetflag (Author of She)
A few of the ladies on this site inspired it... I think that I was paying my way for enjoying their offerings... possibly thanking them for writing such beautiful pieces.
Response from sweetflag (Author of She)
A few of the ladies on this site inspired it... I think that I was paying my way for enjoying their offerings... possibly thanking them for writing such beautiful pieces.