into the wild

into thin air

4 Reviews | 8.5/10 (4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Poetry/Prose Poetry: Free Form 160 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Just something I wrote. Nothing big, probably awful.
I'd appreciate reviews, good or bad.
Thanks

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Chapter 1: I

About into thin air

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4/10

baseballbabe122

Very interesting piece, I suppose. It doesn't provoke any major feelings, if I'm completely honest. I see a bit of a pattern in it... but it just doesn't seem to flow with all of the punctuation thrown in throughout. :) It definitely has potential, though.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

DAMN STRAIGHT AMEN

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luvsev

Wow, that had quite an impact on me. I think that you did a lovely job!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

wow, that's quite different. I rather like it.

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