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Legacies

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imhilien

Hermione has been left Snape's house in his will... and seemingly his ghost, as well! (Based on the 'How Hermione came to live at Spinner's End' challenge)

Drama Angst Drabble/100-Word compliant post-DH/DH GrangerSnape100 433 Words 1 Chapter Complete
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Disclaimer: I don’t own anything from the Harry Potter world; J.K. Rowling does. No copyright infringement is intended; I am only borrowing these characters.

When the war was over, Hermione was startled to discover that Snape’s terse will had stated she was the most sensible person to leave his book collection to, as well as his house at Spinner's End that contained said collection.

Guilt came over her… Believing Snape to be a traitor, she had not prevented him from literally dying in front of her. Could she really accept his house?

Ron waded in… no way was Hermione living there. Snape might have been good, but he had been greasy. Greasy man, greasy house.

Temper flaring, Hermione accepted the house and rejected Ron.

Snape’s home was dim and quiet. Dust was everywhere, though his books were clean.

Donning apron and attitude, Hermione started cleaning the house from top to bottom, the place becoming much brighter.

She was aware of being observed at times... One night when sitting down to read a book, a shadow moved at the corner of her vision.

“Thank you for leaving me your house, Professor,” she said aloud. “I should have realised sooner you were never a traitor.”

The shadow stilled. The next morning she found a small flower on the kitchen table, and she felt she was forgiven.

Hermione never felt threatened, though when Ron tried again to persuade her into leaving, she sensed growing anger behind her. Ron looked beyond her, blanched, then fled.

Hermione turned to see nothing, only sensing an odd tenseness now.

“I’m not going,” she said patiently, and perhaps she imagined hearing a sigh.

That night she dreamed she stood on a railway platform by a train ready to depart. Snape was there in front of her, looking younger though his eyes were still a piercing black.

“I had to be sure you were the right one for the house,” he said stiffly.

“You’re leaving,” Hermione said stupidly.

Snape looked amused. “I’ve already stayed too long, Miss Granger.”

“Don’t go,” Hermione found herself saying.

Snape stared at her and then shook his head. “Houses are for the living, not the deceased,” he said dryly, an oddly gentle look in his eyes. “But I will carry your words with me.”

“Promise me one thing though,” he added abruptly.

“Yes?” Hermione asked.

“Bring some happiness to my house… There was precious little of it there when I was alive.”

Hermione blinked. “I will.”

She was then swiftly embraced, before waking alone to a new day.

FINIS


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11 Reviews  |  6.27/10 Average

0/10

Ljpjcg

Oh no! He left! But maybe she'll meet with some tragic accident in a few years time and he will meet her at the station. 

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thanks for reviewing. :)

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thanks for reviewing. :)

9/10

kittylefish

sad and sweet at the same time.  i thought the straightforward, economical writing style was very effective in this piece. 

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you thought so. :)

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you thought so. :)

10/10

severuslover

Awww...that was quite sweet. I really thought that was quite touching. Great job.~Jen

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thanks for your kind review! :)

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thanks for your kind review! :)

10/10

pookah

This is wonderful!  I love that he asked her to bring some happiness into his house.  (Her house, now.)   A little bit sad but ultimately a hopeful tale, for he is going on to the next great adventure, and she has her whole life ahead of her.Thank you for sharing this!

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thank you for your lovely review. :)

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thank you for your lovely review. :)

10/10

braye27

Bitter sweet, but a wonderful love story nonetheless.Beth

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thanks for your kind review... :)

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thanks for your kind review... :)

0/10

kimjo2

   thanks

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thank you. :)

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thank you. :)

0/10

sunny33

Aww... he left!

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

He couldn't stay, sadly. Thanks for reviewing!

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

He couldn't stay, sadly. Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

snitchette

It's sweet and sad at the same time. The flower on the table was a very lovely idea. Thanks for sharing

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you thought so. :)

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thanks for reviewing, I'm glad you thought so. :)

10/10

morgaine_dulac

*sob* Now that was heartbreakingly beautiful. Thank you for sharing. /M

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thanks for your kind review... *offers tissue*

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thanks for your kind review... *offers tissue*

0/10

snapify52

Ok, well he's dead, which I'm not happy about.  That's the inner fangirl, i suppose.  DeadSnape notwithstanding, I really liked the brevity paired with simple syntax.  Eloquently written.  Very nice.H

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thanks for your review! I don't usually write DeadSnape fic, but this little story crept into my head for this particular challenge.

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thanks for your review! I don't usually write DeadSnape fic, but this little story crept into my head for this particular challenge.

10/10

rosered

Oh, crap!  I burst into tears over the last part.  Excellent story!!!!  :)

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thanks for reviewing. :)  *offers tissue*

Response from imhilien (Author of Legacies)

Thanks for reviewing. :)  *offers tissue*

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