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Smoke Rings

Melenka

13 Reviews | 7.54/10 (13 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )

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Sometimes, the end can be a beginning.

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Melenka

Member Since 2008 | 20 Stories | Favorited by 82 | 104 Reviews Written | 967 Review Responses

Writer of various fiction, prone to putter in the garden, recovering costumer, dedicated wonk.

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9/10

etherealizabeth

This was very nicely done! I liked the smoke rings, especially. Good work.

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

Thank you! I'm pleased that you liked it.

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

Thank you! I'm pleased that you liked it.

10/10

HogwartsClassof91

What a lovely treat! You continue to surprise and impress me with the depth of your talent. I could so clearly see the smoke rings in the beginning, dancing around before her. I love how you gave us a glimpse of something so frivolous—so feminine—within her character despite all her tough dialogue. And speaking of dialogue, that was perfect as well! Fabulous story, my dear!!

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

Thank you so much. Coming from you, that means a lot. This one sort of flowed through me. Not entirely sure where it came from, but I'm so pleased you like it. :)

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

Thank you so much. Coming from you, that means a lot. This one sort of flowed through me. Not entirely sure where it came from, but I'm so pleased you like it. :)

0/10

that was cute malenks

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

Thanks!

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

Thanks!

0/10

I'm very glad she did ask. She sent me here, and it was a very nice visit. Good job!

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

Thank you! I'm happy you decided to take a look and glad you enjoyed it.

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

Thank you! I'm happy you decided to take a look and glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

Nice and sweet - thank you!

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

My pleasure. :) I have to prove I can do sweet once in awhile.

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

My pleasure. :) I have to prove I can do sweet once in awhile.

0/10

That wasn't dark! Very nice!

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

I know! Shocker, right? I wonder if I could do a whole story without anyone going darkity dark dark... Glad you liked this.

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

I know! Shocker, right? I wonder if I could do a whole story without anyone going darkity dark dark... Glad you liked this.

10/10

For my friend, because she asked.That means you're a good friend and just for that you're to be thanked. And icing on the cake: what a sweet story. I can only hope for a better future for her.

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

Glad you liked this. It was the least I could do for my friend, a story with hope and hints of love and no smut, and she insisted I share. So I suppose the thanks go to her. :)

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

Glad you liked this. It was the least I could do for my friend, a story with hope and hints of love and no smut, and she insisted I share. So I suppose the thanks go to her. :)

10/10

Delightful. Good things can come from sorrow, can't they?

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

It's surprising how often that's true. Thanks for the shiny stars. :)

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

It's surprising how often that's true. Thanks for the shiny stars. :)

9/10

That is what you get for marrying your dead boyfriend's twin? I'm guessing Oliver is more of a reward, though.

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

I always thought they were suited. So at least something good came of it.

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

I always thought they were suited. So at least something good came of it.

10/10

very sort of unexpected and sweet, and with a feeling of a promise of things to come. nice.

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it.

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

Thanks! I am glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

So absolutely perfect. Thank you. You made my evening!

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

I am so happy you like it! Just goes to show that I can write sweet when motivated.

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

I am so happy you like it! Just goes to show that I can write sweet when motivated.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

You are such an awesome friend because that was great. Brilliant idea.

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

Thank you. The minor characters get little love, and I have always been particularly fond of Oliver. I thought he deserved a shot at love, however nascent. And only he would think to use Quidditch as a flirtation device. ;)

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

Thank you. The minor characters get little love, and I have always been particularly fond of Oliver. I thought he deserved a shot at love, however nascent. And only he would think to use Quidditch as a flirtation device. ;)

10/10

Great to see two such underused characters.

Response from Melenka (Author of Smoke Rings)

I prefer to write minor character, since JKR has left plenty of room to play with their personalities. Thanks for reading and for the review. :)

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