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A Reward For Severus
savine_snape13 Reviews | 5.15/10 (13 Ratings, 0 Likes, 14 Favorites )
Severus has not been able to find Hermione. Voldemort has a reward for Severus. What does Voldemort have in store for Severus?
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What can I say a 30 something mother of 1 who works as a clinical chemist in a path lab and has a 'thing', if its possible to have a 'thing' for a character, for a certain Potions Master.
RL has stalled the plot bunnies and I've no idea if/when I'll feel like writing again.
Reviews for A Reward For Severus
Poor Severus. He can't ever get a respite, he must defile his beloved and can't protect her.
That was very well written. I'm not usually a reader of dark tales but this was really good. You're very talented to have been able to convey the dark within as well as the conflict. The torment was exquisite. Well done.
I thought this to be brilliant. How, oh how, is severus going to get Hermione out of this situation though? The mind boggles. I know that this is finished and I shall make up my own ending ;)Loved it!Love Sonia :)
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
Thank you Sonia, as always your comments make my heart sing. I'm sure Severus will get Hermione out of the situation somehow, I'm intrigued by how you think he could get them both out of a very sticky situation.Love Maz :)
Response from sbrande (Reviewer)
Maybe he could fake her death... You know, like pretend to snap her neck. Then he could remove her like that once the DL tells him to dispose of the body. She would have to play along the side lines of the war and not be a direct player. I think this would suit Hermione just fine.
Could come up with a better plan later as I haven't had my first MUG of coffee yet.
Loves you, Sonia :)
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
Thank you Sonia, as always your comments make my heart sing. I'm sure Severus will get Hermione out of the situation somehow, I'm intrigued by how you think he could get them both out of a very sticky situation.Love Maz :)
Response from sbrande (Reviewer)
Maybe he could fake her death... You know, like pretend to snap her neck. Then he could remove her like that once the DL tells him to dispose of the body. She would have to play along the side lines of the war and not be a direct player. I think this would suit Hermione just fine.
Could come up with a better plan later as I haven't had my first MUG of coffee yet.
Loves you, Sonia :)
bad bad bada bad conscience and a guilty feeling and self hatred are a bad reward for a fine man. same for the glorious girl. but who would have expected anything else from this bad dark wizard L. V.
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
Yeah sorry, I did rather beat up Severus and Hermione in this fic. It's not my usual style, I'm more of an angsty/fluffy writer.This plot bunny jumped at me from left field when I was chatting with a friend about how twisted L.V. really was.Thanks for leaving a review.
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
Yeah sorry, I did rather beat up Severus and Hermione in this fic. It's not my usual style, I'm more of an angsty/fluffy writer.This plot bunny jumped at me from left field when I was chatting with a friend about how twisted L.V. really was.Thanks for leaving a review.
I don't know if I like it or not. The dark voyeuristic side made shills ran down my spine. On the other hand he had no choice to protect them both. Disturbing.
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
This is the darkest piece I have ever written. Like you I'm not sure if I like it or not, but the plot bunny refused to go away. I very rarely venture into the darker side of writing, this was a challenge to myself to see if I could write a dark piece. I can imagine Voldemort having that kind of dark voyeuristic desire, more as a test of Severus' loyalties than anything else. Poor Severus, he will always feel guilt over what happened.I NEED to go write something lovely and fluffy now!Thanks for leaving a review.
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
This is the darkest piece I have ever written. Like you I'm not sure if I like it or not, but the plot bunny refused to go away. I very rarely venture into the darker side of writing, this was a challenge to myself to see if I could write a dark piece. I can imagine Voldemort having that kind of dark voyeuristic desire, more as a test of Severus' loyalties than anything else. Poor Severus, he will always feel guilt over what happened.I NEED to go write something lovely and fluffy now!Thanks for leaving a review.
And once more, poor Severus is sorry for something that was not his fault. Poor man.Loved this little piece, despite its darkness. Thanks for sharing. /M
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
I don't venture into dark fic writing very often, but this plot bunny bit hard.Severus does coome across to me as someone who would take the blame for something if it hurt someone he loved. Look at how canon!Snape protects Harry because he feels, in part, responsible for what happened to Lily.Thanks for leaving a review. Sav
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
I don't venture into dark fic writing very often, but this plot bunny bit hard.Severus does coome across to me as someone who would take the blame for something if it hurt someone he loved. Look at how canon!Snape protects Harry because he feels, in part, responsible for what happened to Lily.Thanks for leaving a review. Sav
That was disturbing. Moreso about Voldemort and his voyeuristic/sadistic tendencies.
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
It is the darkest piece I have ever written, I don't often venture into the dark side of SS/HG. I have one other piece of dark fic which I wrote for sbrande's birthday.Even though you found it disturbing, thank you for taking time to leave a review.
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
It is the darkest piece I have ever written, I don't often venture into the dark side of SS/HG. I have one other piece of dark fic which I wrote for sbrande's birthday.Even though you found it disturbing, thank you for taking time to leave a review.
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Ooh, Sav, this was dark! Occasionally, I like to dip a toe into the Dark side, see what they're up to. But I can't take more than this! 800 words is plenty. I shall retreat to sunnier climes.
Well done.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review Lulabelle.
I don't often venture over to the darker side of the good ship Grape, I think I have written another very dark fic and then two grey drabble series.
I shall be following you to the sunnier climes, and polish up the already written chapters of CBTM, and get the next one written too.
Once again Thanks for taking the time to leave a review.
*hugs*
Oh, Severus... poor guy. And people say we're mean to Ron. This is wonderful--nice take on the prize!Hermione story.
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
Thank you
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
,Yup we do tend to be mean to Ron. this ebil plot bunny wouldn't go away until this series was written. I don't often venture into the dark side but I'm glad you liked this enough to leave a review.*hugs*
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
Thank you
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
,Yup we do tend to be mean to Ron. this ebil plot bunny wouldn't go away until this series was written. I don't often venture into the dark side but I'm glad you liked this enough to leave a review.*hugs*
Whoa. Dark!Sav is right! Creepy but still excellent!
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
Hi. Dyno.Mmm Voldi always struck me as a bit of an odd ball, so my slightly twisted side decided to go for totally creepy.*hugs*SavOh, thanks for leaving a review. :D
Response from dynonugget (Reviewer)
It's my pleasure. This was a great read!
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
Hi. Dyno.Mmm Voldi always struck me as a bit of an odd ball, so my slightly twisted side decided to go for totally creepy.*hugs*SavOh, thanks for leaving a review. :D
Response from dynonugget (Reviewer)
It's my pleasure. This was a great read!
Aww...that was slightly sad, but yet touching at the same time. I liked how you had Severus try to restrain himself for Hermione's sake. Wonderful job!~Jen
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
Thanks for the review.Poor Severus, yet another thing for him to beat himself up over. Hopefully Hermione has been able to show him that she still loves him.
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
Thanks for the review.Poor Severus, yet another thing for him to beat himself up over. Hopefully Hermione has been able to show him that she still loves him.
erk. Nasty, nosy deatheaters!
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
This is the darkest piece I've written to date.Thanks for taking time to leave a review. :D
Yes, it was dark but interesting. I know there is a way to get Hermione out of LV's evil clutches. Poor Severus, betrayed again. It's the story of his life, poor dear. Off to read another of your stories.
Response from savine_snape (Author of A Reward For Severus)
Yes, I was in an dark mode when I wrote this and Voldemort ended up being very twisted with his idea of a reward for Severus.Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment.