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Worthless

Arabella Bloodgood

11 Reviews | 6.27/10 (11 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )

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Chapter 1: Worthless

About Arabella Bloodgood

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Arabella Bloodgood

Member Since 2007 | 8 Stories | Favorited by 7 | 1,994 Reviews Written | 643 Review Responses

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10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I think that's very sad from someone looking from the outside. However, every now and then when depression bites me in the ass, I feel just this way: like nothing, pointless. Thanks for posting.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

That is very true. I have had many start worrying about me because of this little piece. All I tell them is that it isn't all the time. Thank you for leaving me a review.

10/10

luvsev

*sighs* I can relate to this. Your writing is brilliant.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Thank you for the lovely review. I am sorry you can relate to my poem. I wish no one could. I hope you have a great day.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Thank you for the lovely review. I am sorry you can relate to my poem. I wish no one could. I hope you have a great day.

0/10

lollyd123

well written you can feel the despair and desperation in the words.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Thank you for reading and leaving me a review. These feelings suck when they hit but I don't feel this way all the time.

Response from lollyd123 (Reviewer)

thats good to hear yeh im sure everyone has felt like that at some point some more then others most poetry i think is written by the emotion the writer is feeling at the time well it is for me.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Too true. I hope you enjoy reading other stories here at TPP.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Thank you for reading and leaving me a review. These feelings suck when they hit but I don't feel this way all the time.

Response from lollyd123 (Reviewer)

thats good to hear yeh im sure everyone has felt like that at some point some more then others most poetry i think is written by the emotion the writer is feeling at the time well it is for me.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Too true. I hope you enjoy reading other stories here at TPP.

10/10

lynetteaug72

This is very sad.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Thank you.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Thank you.

0/10

Elise_Wanderer

I so hope this is just what you feel like on a really, really bad day, and that you don't have such days very often at all, because you've truly captured the flavor of what that feels like---and I think we've all been there!~hugs~

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Yeah some days are worse than others but I'm really good at hiding it. I have been doing it for a really long time, it's second nature now. Thanks for the review.

Response from Elise_Wanderer (Reviewer)

Take it from me (I know whereof I speak!):- Wellbutrin (or the antidepresssant of your choice)- chocolate- friendsDon't hide too much. You aren't alone! ~mwah!~

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

I know this but when its really bad I sometimes forget. The only friends I have are on here and sometimes I feel like I annoy them to much. Like I get clingy or something. Like now I need to shut up and move on. Later.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Yeah some days are worse than others but I'm really good at hiding it. I have been doing it for a really long time, it's second nature now. Thanks for the review.

Response from Elise_Wanderer (Reviewer)

Take it from me (I know whereof I speak!):- Wellbutrin (or the antidepresssant of your choice)- chocolate- friendsDon't hide too much. You aren't alone! ~mwah!~

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

10/10

pookah

Oh this is so very sad. I hope you don't really think of yourself like that. Most people are not sure of themselves, and they think others are. But of all the peopel I know, I may be the only one with healthy self-esteem. (scarey!) And I have occasional doubts. We all have moments when we doubt ourselves. (if that's any comfort!) and some people neer feel comfortable with themselves. I sure hope you don't feel like this often, dear. if you ever need a shoulder to write on, you can always e-mail me!

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

~wipes eyes~ you are very sweet thank you for the offer and the review it means a lot

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

~wipes eyes~ you are very sweet thank you for the offer and the review it means a lot

0/10

MollysSister

I hope to hell you arent talking about yourself!!! It bothers me to read the poem because the subject is so upset and without hope. I expect that is a good comment about how it sucked me in!!I had no idea you were a writer!

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Hey You,I'm not a writer by no means. Its just a poem that I had in my mind and I had to get it out. I didn't think it was really that good. And as for 'Nightmare,' the little I wrote, that was just my take on DH, not really much to it. It took a lot of correcting to get it readable. lol So no I'm not a writer. Ok yes I was talking about myself. I have moments like that. Thanks for leaving me a review. See ya next quiz.Tamara

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

0/10

Severessa

I have seen suicide notes that read like this. I pray that you do not feel this way.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Thank you for your review. There are times, yes. I could never kill myself but wish I was dead by another means.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Thank you for your review. There are times, yes. I could never kill myself but wish I was dead by another means.

9/10

sinbad

Dark and depressing, I certainly hope you don't really feel this way. On the whole I think you caught teenage angst perfectly.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Yes I remember the feeling from then also. Thank you for your review.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Yes I remember the feeling from then also. Thank you for your review.

10/10

sweetflag

Incredibly powerful, Arabella! I'm still shaking from reading it. I did say that you should write more, and you have... and it's staggering. It's so simple, and yet so full... very few will read this without connecting to it on some level.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Your review makes me tear up. Thank you for such a beautiful review.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Your review makes me tear up. Thank you for such a beautiful review.

10/10

debjunk

Wow, that was breathtakingly sad. It made me think of a friend who is going through some terrible times right now. I'm sure she's thought every word of your poem to herself at one point or another. She's said some of them out loud to me. Hauntingly lovely.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Thank you for your review. I am so sorry your friend has felt this way. No one should have to feel this way.

Response from debjunk (Reviewer)

I agree and I continue to try and make her see that as well.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

You are a very good friend.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

Thank you for your review. I am so sorry your friend has felt this way. No one should have to feel this way.

Response from debjunk (Reviewer)

I agree and I continue to try and make her see that as well.

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Author of Worthless)

You are a very good friend.

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