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Oh, Fortune
Melenka12 Reviews | 7.5/10 (12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 3 Favorites )
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Melenka
Member Since 2008 | 20 Stories | Favorited by 82 | 104 Reviews Written | 967 Review Responses
Writer of various fiction, prone to putter in the garden, recovering costumer, dedicated wonk.
Reviews for Oh, Fortune
Very nice imagery! I love the concept, and the last line is just perfect.
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
Thank you! I enjoyed writing this. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
Thank you! I enjoyed writing this. :)
This is very beautifulI like to immagine them continuing, speeding up their kissing and touching, their love making as Carl Orff's Oh Fortuna keeps speeding up and culminating to bliss.Thank you for this lovely pieceCheers Moepi Aka Michèle
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
Thank you! That is one seriously hot piece of music, which is sort of funny considering the libretto. Ah, irony.I am glad you liked it and appreciate your comment.
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
Thank you! That is one seriously hot piece of music, which is sort of funny considering the libretto. Ah, irony.I am glad you liked it and appreciate your comment.
You do lyrical very well.
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
Thank you! I like to play around with words.
Lovely! My favorite is the last line: "His mouth denial shattered. Eyes open, she fell."Beth
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
Thank you. :) That's my favorite part, too.
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
Thank you. :) That's my favorite part, too.
Please do continue to be lyrical. The result is simply wonderful.
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
Thank you very much. It' felt good to write like that after a year of writing stripped-down prose.
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
Thank you very much. It' felt good to write like that after a year of writing stripped-down prose.
lovely. very poetic. i would single something out, but you have managed to make each word a special little jewel in its perfect place.
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
Oh, thank you so much. I'm glad it pleased you.
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
Oh, thank you so much. I'm glad it pleased you.
Brilliant as always.
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.
Lovely!
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
Thanks!
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
Thanks!
That is awesome on so many levels. I have no words for it.
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
It was you as set me on the road, lady, so my thanks to you for that. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
It was you as set me on the road, lady, so my thanks to you for that. :)
Very beautiful. Thanks for sharing. /M
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
Thank you. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
Thank you. :)
Prose poetry :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
I thought I had forgotten how to write poetic prose. Thank you for the shiny stars. :)
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
I thought I had forgotten how to write poetic prose. Thank you for the shiny stars. :)
That was beautiful... simply beautiful!!!
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
You spoil me. :) I'm glad you like it.
Response from Melenka (Author of Oh, Fortune)
You spoil me. :) I'm glad you like it.