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Amusement Park

Melenka

18 Reviews | 8.78/10 (18 Ratings, 0 Likes, 25 Favorites )

Smut Potter Place Fun 1,427 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Severus Snape

Hermione spends her birthday discovering the meaning of fun.

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Chapter 1: Amusement Park

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Melenka

Member Since 2008 | 20 Stories | Favorited by 82 | 104 Reviews Written | 967 Review Responses

Writer of various fiction, prone to putter in the garden, recovering costumer, dedicated wonk.

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10/10

MoreThanSirius

Now THAT'S a Fun House! And a very happy birthday, indeed.

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

Yes, indeed! I surprised myself with this one. I'm glad you enjoyed it, too!

10/10

Velvet Song

Wow... I feel like I need a cold shower. Or a cigarette. Or both. That was hot! Deliciously hot!

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

Heh. Thanks. I was inspired. I suggest cigarette then shower. They don't combine well. ;)

10/10

Persevero

Damn. If I'd just gone to the Bot Garden yesterday!

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

One imagines they would have done something to hide themselves from the world, but you never know - a girl might get lucky! ;)

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

One imagines they would have done something to hide themselves from the world, but you never know - a girl might get lucky! ;)

10/10

HogwartsClassof91

I bow to your greatness... that was amazing. You give new meaning to the term "fangirl"... I think I need to cool down!!!

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

*blush* You're too kind. I am glad you enjoyed the diversion.

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

*blush* You're too kind. I am glad you enjoyed the diversion.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

No happy birthday to me lolThis was awesome Melenka I so wish I was Hermione right nowyou can have a piece of my cake and ice creama big peice too

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

Happy birthday to you. :) Thanks for sharing your treats with me.

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

Happy birthday to you. :) Thanks for sharing your treats with me.

10/10

karelia

Oh, my. This is seriously hot. *fans self* Brilliant!

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

Thanks. Glad you found it... stimulating. ;)

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

Thanks. Glad you found it... stimulating. ;)

10/10

blue artemis

I loved that.

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

Thanks! It kept me up way too late last night, but it was fun.

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

Thanks! It kept me up way too late last night, but it was fun.

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

This is delicious! My favourite threesome *sighs happily*

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :)

10/10

severuslover

I really liked the idea behind this one! Great job! Keep up the wonderful work! ~Jen

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

Thank you very much! I had good prompts for this one.

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

Thank you very much! I had good prompts for this one.

10/10

Stefdarlin

However did I miss this? It was delicious!! I love that they were in the hall of mirrors, that was a very unique twist.Divine, simply divine.~~Stef

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

I'm glad you found it! I liked that they fixed the mirrors. Nothing kills a good illicit romp like seeing yourself 3 ft tall and misshapen. LOL Thank you for the praise and the pretty stars!

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

I'm glad you found it! I liked that they fixed the mirrors. Nothing kills a good illicit romp like seeing yourself 3 ft tall and misshapen. LOL Thank you for the praise and the pretty stars!

10/10

snitchette

Could you give me the adress of that amusement park, please. I would like to reserve a week entertainment for my next birthday .

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

LOL! Do you think you could take a week of such... amusement? It might be more than anyone could bear. ;)

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

If there's Lucius and Severus I 'll take every potions available to ensure I can hold the challenge. And a month rest after that to recover ;)

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

LOL! Do you think you could take a week of such... amusement? It might be more than anyone could bear. ;)

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

If there's Lucius and Severus I 'll take every potions available to ensure I can hold the challenge. And a month rest after that to recover ;)

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh the fun house has never been that much fun! Lucky girl!

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

I doubt she'll ever look at one the same way. ;) Thank you for the lovely stars.

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

I doubt she'll ever look at one the same way. ;) Thank you for the lovely stars.

0/10

pyjamapants

Fun House indeed. I really like how Severus tricked her into going to such lengths for him.

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

I suspect he thought she'd refuse, but for once, Lucius was right.

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

I suspect he thought she'd refuse, but for once, Lucius was right.

0/10

sunny33

What? They wasted ten years? Oh, my!Very good smuttiness, top marks! :)

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

Well, they did manage to become friends in that time, so it wasn't a total waste. Thanks for the kudos!

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

Well, they did manage to become friends in that time, so it wasn't a total waste. Thanks for the kudos!

10/10

pickles

excellent

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

Thanks! I appreciate the shinies. :)

10/10

magialuna

*sighs happily*Oh how I adore HG/SS/LM stories. They are the perfect pairing. Great job on this!Clare

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

Thank you so much! I had good prompts, and this one almost wrote itself. I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

8/10

Serpentina

phew, that was incredibly hot and somewhat unexpectedly so. What better way to enjoy breakfast on a saturday (in bed) and reading this story. thank you :)

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

I am so glad you liked it! This was such a fun story to write.

10/10

wannabewolfe

*fans self* l;dkfjasdflkjdsfdsflkjwhoa. I cannot even pull together a coherant thought at the moment.Lovely, hot, passonate, wonderful.

Response from Melenka (Author of Amusement Park)

Thank you! I love it when this story is discovered anew. I so appreciate you reading it!

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