Abduction
HannahSmith34 Reviews | 6.15/10 (34 Ratings, 0 Likes, 16 Favorites )
Hermione finds herself at Malfoy Manor. Is she in danger? What danger?
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HannahSmith
Member Since 2007 | 10 Stories | Favorited by 33 | 146 Reviews Written | 268 Review Responses
I started writing fanfic for Star Trek TOS back in the eighties, but only published HP fanfic for the first time in December 2007, here on TPP. I enjoy HG/LM as well as HG/SS and cannot stand the idea of HG/RW. I dislike reading/writing about rape and violence; my stories all have nice endings... so be warned.
Reviews for Abduction
Glad he has someone to turn to.
Oh, the tragedy!
This gentleman Lucius is a bit unnerving to me. Yet, I found myself wishing he'd let her help him.
I wonder why he is being so nice? Guess I'll find out shortly. I'm definitely intrigued.
Good choice. :)
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
Exactly! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!
So close and yet so far! :)
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yes - isn't it sad...
Draco, or Lucius? :)
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
you know by now! sorry for not replying sooner, RL has kept me occupied for months - only just now returned to the site...
Oh, he's a gentleman to the core.
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Yes – Hermione must have been disappointed...
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
Yes – Hermione must have been disappointed...
What was Lucius supposed to do? Did I miss that part?I think he sould take Hermione up on her offer!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
Hermione suggested to forge a few convincing memories for Lucius of her captivity to fool the Dark Lord (Lucius wasn't supposed to treat her decently, of course) and Hermione was willing to play along so he wouldn't get punished. I think he should have taken her up on it, too. But he escaped me...
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
Hermione suggested to forge a few convincing memories for Lucius of her captivity to fool the Dark Lord (Lucius wasn't supposed to treat her decently, of course) and Hermione was willing to play along so he wouldn't get punished. I think he should have taken her up on it, too. But he escaped me...
Awe, but Severus died? 
At least Lucius isn't going to Azkaban.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
If Severus hadn't died, they might have ended up with a threesome, and though I'm very fond of that storyline, this just didn't feel like that kind of story. So I decided to go with canon on this one. Sorry... But Lucius and Hermione will be happy ever after. Thanks very much for reading and reviewing!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
If Severus hadn't died, they might have ended up with a threesome, and though I'm very fond of that storyline, this just didn't feel like that kind of story. So I decided to go with canon on this one. Sorry... But Lucius and Hermione will be happy ever after. Thanks very much for reading and reviewing!
I'm a bit sad that Severus didn't survive but I'm glad that Lucius did. And they lives happily ever after... *sigh*
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
Yes, I know... I'm always tempted to have perfectly happy endings, but that's not realistic... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
Yes, I know... I'm always tempted to have perfectly happy endings, but that's not realistic... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Perfect!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
That's a lovely review! Thank you so much!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
That's a lovely review! Thank you so much!
They got their happy ending after all! Sad that so many were lost, but at least they have each other as they begin a new life. Good drabble series!Beth
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The end is not entirely happy, but it's hopeful. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
The end is not entirely happy, but it's hopeful. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
It is refreshing to see Lucius as a true gentleman. Just what do they have in mind to convince the Dark Lord that he is still a trustworthy Death Eater?Very entertaining!Beth
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The Dark Lord should be able to read something convincing in Lucius' mind (Legilimency), such as violence against a prisoner...
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
The Dark Lord should be able to read something convincing in Lucius' mind (Legilimency), such as violence against a prisoner...
Intriguing idea! Gotta find out where this is going!Beth
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You'll see...!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
You'll see...!
I'm glad he got a happy ending.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
Yes, so am I! Thank you for reviewing!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
Yes, so am I! Thank you for reviewing!
ah tragic love. I'm a sucker for it. Good job!
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Thank you!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
Thank you!
I hope they can be together after the war.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
I hope so too – it would be sad if they couldn't... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
I hope so too – it would be sad if they couldn't... Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Oh, dear. That was sad and yet really lovely.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
Thank you! The final chapter will be less sad, I promise.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
Thank you! The final chapter will be less sad, I promise.
I'm impressed by Lucius' abnegation. And I guess this can easily lead to something more between them. BTW where is Narcissa?
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
And so it will. Narcissa, well, you'll find out in the final chapter. No adultery, in any case (;-)).
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
And so it will. Narcissa, well, you'll find out in the final chapter. No adultery, in any case (;-)).
That's an interesting beginning.
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Thank you!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
Thank you!
A little play acting to fool the dark lord huh? Whats the relationship between Lucius and Severus?
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
Hmmmm... This is primarily about Lucius and Hermione... At first I had planned to have them act out the Real Thing to fool the Dark Lord, but decided against it – we shouldn't always need to depend on smut to keep it interesting. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
Hmmmm... This is primarily about Lucius and Hermione... At first I had planned to have them act out the Real Thing to fool the Dark Lord, but decided against it – we shouldn't always need to depend on smut to keep it interesting. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Comforting Lucius? Who knew!!! I am looking forward to see where you are taking this.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
You'll find out soon – last 2 chapters are in queue. Thanks for reviewing!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
You'll find out soon – last 2 chapters are in queue. Thanks for reviewing!
An honorable Lucius is hard to resist.
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
My point exactly! One needs to make him a little better than in the books, otherwise H's interest in him is not convincing. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Response from HannahSmith (Author of Abduction)
My point exactly! One needs to make him a little better than in the books, otherwise H's interest in him is not convincing. Thanks for reading and reviewing!