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Hogwarts Castle You Ask That Of Me?
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You Ask That Of Me?

sweetflag

4 Reviews   |   4 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Angst Poetry/Prose Hogwarts Castle 650 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Harry Potter Severus Snape

Severus Snape has been a ghost for several years, and his dubious peace is shattered when he receives a visit from Harry Potter.

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Chapter 1: You Ask That Of Me


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Hello.  I love reading and writing... what more can I say?

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9/10

kittylefish

very sad. i kind of hate that he's still so bitter, even in death, but i guess it makes sense with his character. very moving in any case.

Response from sweetflag (Author of You Ask That Of Me?)

Thank you for the review and the stars.  I wondered as I wrote this, and it seemed to me that after all those years, he would be so accustomed to his bitterness that it was almost a comfort to him... Would he cope giving it up?  I was thinking of writing a poem to accompany this one, an idle thought, that will follow on from this... a series following Snape as he comes to terms with it all... depends on how this one does.  Anyways, thank you once again.

Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)

i think you could be right about his holding onto his bitterness. i just always want redemption, so i like to imagine he would find a way to let it go. but that's me projecting my own stuff more than anything to do with him. if you are inspired to write another, i hope you don't let lack of response to this one deter you. i try to remember that even if few people bother to leave feedback, that doesn't mean that people don't like it. (at least that's what i tell myself repeatedly!)

Response from sweetflag (Author of You Ask That Of Me?)

Thank you for the review and the stars.  I wondered as I wrote this, and it seemed to me that after all those years, he would be so accustomed to his bitterness that it was almost a comfort to him... Would he cope giving it up?  I was thinking of writing a poem to accompany this one, an idle thought, that will follow on from this... a series following Snape as he comes to terms with it all... depends on how this one does.  Anyways, thank you once again.

Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)

i think you could be right about his holding onto his bitterness. i just always want redemption, so i like to imagine he would find a way to let it go. but that's me projecting my own stuff more than anything to do with him. if you are inspired to write another, i hope you don't let lack of response to this one deter you. i try to remember that even if few people bother to leave feedback, that doesn't mean that people don't like it. (at least that's what i tell myself repeatedly!)

0/10

elsolel

Touching and very bitter.  I really wish Harry had known or used some healing spells in the Shack!

Response from sweetflag (Author of You Ask That Of Me?)

Thank you for the review.  So many things could have been done, but they weren't, and that is remarkably sad--but we have fanfiction to ease that sting :D.

Response from sweetflag (Author of You Ask That Of Me?)

Thank you for the review.  So many things could have been done, but they weren't, and that is remarkably sad--but we have fanfiction to ease that sting :D.

10/10

snitchette

It's very beautiful and poignant.

Response from sweetflag (Author of You Ask That Of Me?)

Thank you for the review and the stars :)

Response from sweetflag (Author of You Ask That Of Me?)

Thank you for the review and the stars :)

9/10

nogod1215

Wow... all I can say is WOW!!!!

It is poinent and touching... I had a tear in my eye as I read this. You have touched me very much with this poem. Thank you for sharing it.

Jenn

Response from sweetflag (Author of You Ask That Of Me?)

Thank you for the review and the stars.  I'm very happy that you enjoyed this poem.

Response from sweetflag (Author of You Ask That Of Me?)

Thank you for the review and the stars.  I'm very happy that you enjoyed this poem.

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