Had We Never Loved So Blindly
MahsaFF12 Reviews | 7.42/10 (12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 7 Favorites )
Tonks seeks a deeper connection in her relationship with the elusive Remus than mere sexual intimacy. Her attempts to gain his trust are thwarted by a series of misunderstandings, leading to a disastrous encounter with Sirius.
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Brilliant story, so well written and perfectly paced. Please keep writting. thanks.
I liked this very much and can't wait to read more! I love R/T!!
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
Thank you! The next chapter is in the queue. :)
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
Thank you! The next chapter is in the queue. :)
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You've set up an interesting relationship dynamic, and I really want more, as in, right now! I'm trying to figure out what Remus is trying to get out--and if leads to a menage a trois, well, all right! LOL.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. It means a lot to me as I'm feeling a bit insecure about my first story LOL. I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter; next one is in the queue. :)
Oh thank you for giving Tonks a girlfriend, I think she could certainly use the support since stoic boyfriend isnt providing it. 10 points to your house for the Health and Hygiene for Wizards" seminar. Don't think I didnt get the name of the cobbler either. Gepetto=smirk. 
I liked the part where SB yelled at Lupin and told him to be kinder to Tonks. I never would have seen that coming. For some reason I was thinking SB was pinning over a previous affair with Lupin. See how off track I get?
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
Hello, and thank you for taking the time to review.10 points to your houseI appreciate the rare chance to rack up some points. LOL For some reason I was thinking SB was pinning over a previous affair with Lupin. See how off track I get? Well, SB/RL is quite the popular ship, so I can see why you might think that. Chapter 5 & 6 of my story will include much interaction between the two of them, and when I wrote it, I began to see why the ship is so popular. They're great together. :)
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
Hello, and thank you for taking the time to review.10 points to your houseI appreciate the rare chance to rack up some points. LOL For some reason I was thinking SB was pinning over a previous affair with Lupin. See how off track I get? Well, SB/RL is quite the popular ship, so I can see why you might think that. Chapter 5 & 6 of my story will include much interaction between the two of them, and when I wrote it, I began to see why the ship is so popular. They're great together. :)
I love seeing Tonks with another friend. This was a wonderful scene.
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm hoping to have another chapter up soon.
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm hoping to have another chapter up soon.
I have to give Tonks credit for her patience in allowing Lupin to marinate in his silences. I would have no reserverations in grilling him. Although that would probably end the relationship wouldnt it? I am really looking forward to the next chapter Ms. Mahsa!
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
I have to give Tonks credit for her patience in allowing Lupin to marinate in his silences. I would have no reserverations in grilling him.Marinate? Grilling? My mouth is now watering for the man, but for all the wrong reasons. I can't help but picturing him now as a tasty tuna fillet... :)I am really looking forward to the next chapter Ms. Mahsa! Why, thank you kindly, Ms.
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
. I'm putting the next chapter in the queue as we speak. And thank you again for your comments!
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
I have to give Tonks credit for her patience in allowing Lupin to marinate in his silences. I would have no reserverations in grilling him.Marinate? Grilling? My mouth is now watering for the man, but for all the wrong reasons. I can't help but picturing him now as a tasty tuna fillet... :)I am really looking forward to the next chapter Ms. Mahsa! Why, thank you kindly, Ms.
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
. I'm putting the next chapter in the queue as we speak. And thank you again for your comments!
This is not my usual pairing you will have to excuse me if I say something stupid in a review. OMG what does Lupin mean that Sirius has to feel like a man? Is he suggesting that they invite him to their bed? Naughty. 
Poor Tonks, she wanted Lupin to talk to her and lookie what he said. Next time she may let his moodiness pass unnoticed!!I find it very hard to believe this is your first fan fic! You do not write like a newbie. Its wonderful writing, I never would have guessed! I am looking forward to the next chapter!!
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
This is not my usual pairing you will have to excuse me if I say something stupid in a review.Hehe - No problem - as its my first time for this pairing, I may be equally stupid in writing about it.I find it very hard to believe this is your first fan fic! You do not write like a newbie.I've written before, just never fiction, so plot, POV, characterisation, dialogue - that part is new - but constructing a sentence is fairly familiar. LOLThank you so much for taking the time to review. It means a lot to me. :)
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
This is not my usual pairing you will have to excuse me if I say something stupid in a review.Hehe - No problem - as its my first time for this pairing, I may be equally stupid in writing about it.I find it very hard to believe this is your first fan fic! You do not write like a newbie.I've written before, just never fiction, so plot, POV, characterisation, dialogue - that part is new - but constructing a sentence is fairly familiar. LOLThank you so much for taking the time to review. It means a lot to me. :)
Poor Sirius is now hungover AND confused LOL
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
No worries. Next chapter, he feels a bit better. And next chapter, even better ;) Thank you for reviewing!
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
No worries. Next chapter, he feels a bit better. And next chapter, even better ;) Thank you for reviewing!
Now some talking during sex is good... but he made up for it.
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
Yes... or at least Tonks is not fussed about it LOL. Thanks for your comment. :)
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
Yes... or at least Tonks is not fussed about it LOL. Thanks for your comment. :)
This is wonderful! You've got me so hooked!Well done! :)
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I hope to have another chapter up in about a week. :)
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I hope to have another chapter up in about a week. :)
Another fantastic chapter, and so different from the last one. I'm more than a little intrigued by your characterizations and wondering just where you're taking this story. Good job! Looking forward to next chapter.
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
Hello, and thank you for the kind words. I'm very pleased that you're enjoying the story so far. I hope it continues to live up to your expectations. :)
Response from MahsaFF (Author of Had We Never Loved So Blindly)
Hello, and thank you for the kind words. I'm very pleased that you're enjoying the story so far. I hope it continues to live up to your expectations. :)
Anonymous
it wasn't the first time he'd heard a woman call Remus a git, or worse. Probably the usual reasons.
Now, I want to know what you mean here, and you probably won't tell me. If it's just the usual reasons women are aggravated by men, then all right. But are you alluding to Sirius knowing more about Remus and his bizarre behavior, this constant need to keep Tonks (or other women) completely outside his personal barriers?
This is a great story. Of course, her hip knocked something over! And regarding Remus's erection... Don't think I could've left him like that! I'd rather be late for work.
Your writing is brilliant. It's all the little details that I love so much. I can see everything. Keep it up! I'll be watching.
Author's Response: "Now, I want to know what you mean here, and you probably won't tell me"
Now why on earth should you think I won't tell you? :) Of course I will... over the course of the next, er, dozen chapters or so LOL. What do you think this story is supposed to be about, anyway? ;)
"Your writing is brilliant. It's all the little details that I love so much."
You're really kind to say that. It means a lot to me, because this is the first fiction that I've ever attempted to write, and I have all those "oh-god-how-awful-is-my-first-fic" jitters. Thanks so much for taking the time to read my story.