Bonfire Night
Alison9 Reviews | 9 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )
This is a one hundred word drabble about pre-teen Severus. Enjoy!
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Alison
Member Since 2006 | 42 Stories | Favorited by 26 | 8 Reviews Written | 149 Review Responses
A published Aussie author for a number of years now, I decided to dabble in the waters of HP fanfic for the first time. I hope my stories are acceptable.
Reviews for Bonfire Night
Wow, you really captured the moment.
He made his own sparkler, clever boy!
Response from Alison (Author of Bonfire Night)
Hee hee! :D
Response from Alison (Author of Bonfire Night)
Hee hee! :D
yay! lovely. thanks
this is lovely. young!severus breaks my heart, and this piece was kind of hopeful and heartbreaking all at once. at least in this moment he is triumphant.
Glad you decided to post this drabble. It was very enjoyable. Cheers. /M
Too cute. I actually wanted to clap for him. 
I love the intensity and seriousness of the moment.
This is sad and happy and triumphant and horrible all at once. Happy and triumphant for getting Severus out of a house with a drunk father. Sad that he will often be miserable at Hogwarts. Horrible to leave Eileen without a wand; perhaps she'll need it to defend herself agaisnt her husband. This is a wonderful piece. Thank you for sharing it. You've packed so much into such a small tale.
Response from Alison (Author of Bonfire Night)
Oh, thank you for your nice comments! I had the drabble sitting on my computer for some time, but I wasn't sure if I should send it in, as it really is such a short piece. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Alison
Response from Alison (Author of Bonfire Night)
Oh, thank you for your nice comments! I had the drabble sitting on my computer for some time, but I wasn't sure if I should send it in, as it really is such a short piece. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Alison
That was gorgeous and moving, and in so few words. It left me teary to think of Severus so young and innocent.