Hmmm, I can still see a way for Severus to worm his way out of this. She didn't exactly say he had to build the house, just that it had to be built without magic. Sneaky little Snape!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Too cute. Hahaha

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

Thank you!

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

Thank you!

9/10

pookah

Naughty Severus. I wonder what he has to do for Hermione that he dreads? Thanks for a funny and clever response to this prompt.

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

Thank you for the review! I'm happy that you enjoyed it . hehe

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

Thank you for the review! I'm happy that you enjoyed it . hehe

10/10

StormySkize

The first three letters of 'Slytherin' aren't 'sly' for nothing!

9/10

silverdoe

BUSTED! Very cute story.

0/10

Moreteadk

HA! Serves him right, the cheater. :p So... what does he have to do then? Technically he did lose, although he'll probably argue that he didn't based on the fact that the bet was whether or not he would eventually resort to magic. Which he didn't.

0/10

snitchette

Does that mean that he's just lose his bet. Wonder what he will have to do. Care to share ? Please

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

I still haven't worked out if he won or lost (or maybe they both won?) in my head... which is why I left it so open-ended. Eventually I'll probably write more on Hermione's terms and the outcome of the bet, but atm I am sorting out another plotline (the bunny just wouldn't stop tickling me on this one when I read the prompt). Thank you so much for reviewing!

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

0/10

WriterMerrin

Oh, very cute!

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

Thank you!

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

Thank you!

0/10

kimbee73

Very clever...much enjoyed. I can see Severus actually trying to build it though.

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

Thank you, I'm so happy that you enjoyed! hehe :) I'd love to see Severus using power tools to build a tree house...

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

Thank you, I'm so happy that you enjoyed! hehe :) I'd love to see Severus using power tools to build a tree house...

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh how very clever he is! Teehehe hire a contractor - and forgetto remove their logo!

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

lol I can see him doing it in my head, he didn't use magic to build it after all did he? lol Thank you for the review!

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

(and I'm an idiot who hit refresh when the page didn't load properly! lol pls excuse my stupidity!)

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

(and I'm an idiot who hit refresh when the page didn't load properly! lol pls excuse my stupidity!)

0/10

elsolel

Did she say 'he' had to build it? or just get it built without magic? hehehe. He could easily get a ladder.

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

lol yes, I think the ladder is the easiest thing to be resolved! Thank you for the review!

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

lol yes, I think the ladder is the easiest thing to be resolved! Thank you for the review!

0/10

klschmidt

Looks like the membership into the "Mile High" Club may be delayed a bit - but certainly he could figure out how to get a ladder sufficient for the children's needs. Wonderful story. :-)

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

Thank you!

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

Thank you!

8/10

Maggie

So, does this mean he lost? Or does she give him credit for getting it done without magic?

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

I figured I'd leave that up to the reader. Technically, he didn't use magic to build it. However, technically he didn't build it at all either. He did use his wits to get it built in a muggle fashion, even if the ladder was forgotten lolThank you for the review!

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

10/10

livvy6

LOL! I can see that smug exprssion sliding off his face!Cute story.Livvy

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

Thank you! lol I had a bunny come nibble on my toes while reading the prompts, it tickled so I wrote a little open ended ficlet lol

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

Thank you! lol I had a bunny come nibble on my toes while reading the prompts, it tickled so I wrote a little open ended ficlet lol

0/10

sunny33

Very good. Pity he got sprung!

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

Thank you! lol, the question is - did he really get sprung? I figured the reader could decide on that one - part of me says yes... but another part says no lol

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

Thank you! lol, the question is - did he really get sprung? I figured the reader could decide on that one - part of me says yes... but another part says no lol

8/10

helshez

*chuckle* very entertaining. thanks.

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you!

0/10

debjunk

Cute. He should know better than to try and pull a fast one on Hermoine.

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

Thank you! He should know better, but I don't think that would stop him from trying!

Response from smurfgirlz (Author of The Tree House Dilemma)

Thank you! He should know better, but I don't think that would stop him from trying!

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