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Where You Belong
selinabln16 Reviews | 7.38/10 (16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 11 Favorites )
It's the evening before Umbridge's final hearing and Severus realizes something important.
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A dreamy realist, with a heart for bookish witches and ill-tempered wizards.
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this was a beutiful story.. hertbreaking though..
love the fact that it was written from severus POV. Nice!
whoa, that last line was a car wreck! Not that I mean you did a bad job. No, it was very sweet and good, but it was a big smash! into the gentle affection of the scene.
ummm....heartbreaking? but beautiful. well done
How sad! It's hard to see love develop too late.
MRS. WEASLEY....ewwwwww, yucky! I read tho "tbc..." so there is still hope! “Hush, little nuisance. Sleep.” is probably one of the sweetest lines I have ever heard come out of his mouth! Don't keep us in suspense for to long!
I was totally sucked into this budding romance between Severus and Hermione, when out of the blue WHAM! the last line just blew me away. Arrrrrgh!But I'm going to follow this story to its conclusion (you did say you were trying to make it right, after all). This is really a great beginning and lays a firm foundation for coming chapters (while you make it right, after all).Beth
no no no no! She married the whiny prat?
This really is terribly moving - well done. You've conveyed a lot in a short piece of work and nothing is over-stated.
Hey, I was surprised to find you here. That was very lovely until that last line. :( Can you kill off Ron? He's a jealous prat anyway. Maybe a fatal illness, or horrible accident at work.
very sweet and tender. yes, the last bit was unexpected, but not off-putting for me. i look forward to seeing where you take this. : )
Response from selinabln (Author of Where You Belong)
Thank you, I am happy that you have patience with me and this little plot bunny. Thanks for your lovely review. Sel.
Response from selinabln (Author of Where You Belong)
Thank you, I am happy that you have patience with me and this little plot bunny. Thanks for your lovely review. Sel.
I loved it, until the very last sentence; what a cruel thing to do, adding Ron in a Hermione/Severus punishing Umbrigde story. I was looking forward to read about a trial where Umbrigde got her punishment (I am so happy you are doing something about it, the old toad shoul be roasted above an open fire, wood provided by every magical creature who should have front seats to her torture...), but due to severe allergy against the Ron/Hermione pairing I will be rather careful about following your story. Just the thougth of getting a scene where Hermione shows such lack of jugdement that she let any part of Ron's skin get in contact with hers, makes my stommack twist and turn and angry, painfull boils are popping up everywhere.....:-) I will probably take a peak whan you update, but most likeley won't read well enough to review until you, hopefully, begging on my knees, promising chocolate etc etc, makes Ron dissapear from Hermiones life for good, never ever comming back ever...:-))
Response from selinabln (Author of Where You Belong)
I am sorry. I didn't like to have put you off. I am already trying to make it right, and believe me I don't like the idea of Ron/Hermione either. Thank you for letting me know your thoughts on this. Sel.
Response from selinabln (Author of Where You Belong)
I am sorry. I didn't like to have put you off. I am already trying to make it right, and believe me I don't like the idea of Ron/Hermione either. Thank you for letting me know your thoughts on this. Sel.
Oh wow. What a heartbreak:(I loved it:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from selinabln (Author of Where You Belong)
Yeah, I know. I wanted something completely different for this challenge but the muse has been cruel and graced me with these two last words I am already trying to make it right. Glad you liked it nevertheless. Thanks for the review. Sel.
Response from selinabln (Author of Where You Belong)
Yeah, I know. I wanted something completely different for this challenge but the muse has been cruel and graced me with these two last words I am already trying to make it right. Glad you liked it nevertheless. Thanks for the review. Sel.
That's was really lovely...up until the last two words. Surely Ron's out somewhere having an affair or getting himself killed. No? Drats! Don't suppose you would consider it?
Response from selinabln (Author of Where You Belong)
I know, I know. There is more to come and all I say is that I am addicted to happily ever afters Thanks for reviewing. Sel.
Response from selinabln (Author of Where You Belong)
I know, I know. There is more to come and all I say is that I am addicted to happily ever afters Thanks for reviewing. Sel.
Oh bum, and just when I thought there was promise. Very nicely done though.
Response from selinabln (Author of Where You Belong)
Well, there is a glimmer of hope even in these lines ;o) Trust me. Thanks for reviewing. Sel.
Response from selinabln (Author of Where You Belong)
Well, there is a glimmer of hope even in these lines ;o) Trust me. Thanks for reviewing. Sel.
Such a touching scene and I love the “Hush, little nuisance. Sleep.” line it harks back to his usual persona but it is tender. Aww.Then the last line...Oh so very cruel.Is there any more? Please...Cheers.
Response from selinabln (Author of Where You Belong)
I am working on more, yes and I am fighting my cruel muse who insisted on the last line ;o))Thanks for the review. I am glad you liked it. Sel.
Response from selinabln (Author of Where You Belong)
I am working on more, yes and I am fighting my cruel muse who insisted on the last line ;o))Thanks for the review. I am glad you liked it. Sel.
It's unfair. Severus is always the broken hearted one. Please tell him to come see me. I'll take good care of him
Response from selinabln (Author of Where You Belong)
I know you would But first we have to give Ron a chance to disqualify himself, don't we? I am trying to make it right already... Thanks for the review.
Response from selinabln (Author of Where You Belong)
I know you would But first we have to give Ron a chance to disqualify himself, don't we? I am trying to make it right already... Thanks for the review.