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If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake

27 Reviews | 5.7/10 (27 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )

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Hermione Granger Original Character Severus Snape

Severus has a bit of trouble watching over his son with Hermione’s granddad in the house. Of course life would be easier with magic, and if the half-kneazle could be allowed in the bassinette, but no, he has to do everything the Muggle way!

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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company.

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Reviews for If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake

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0/10

Electryone

This was so cute! And the picture at the end was just adorable.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thank you. I'm glad you liked them.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thank you. I'm glad you liked them.

10/10

luvsev

I really liked the story, plus the picture at the end of it is beautifully done. :)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thank you very much.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thank you very much.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Aw, that was so cute, and I love your drawing. Beautiful. Grandparents mean well, but darn they sure can be a pain. lol I love this.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thank you very much. I really appreciate the compliment. Yes, well, if granddad would just let the kneazle in with the baby, things would have been fine!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thank you very much. I really appreciate the compliment. Yes, well, if granddad would just let the kneazle in with the baby, things would have been fine!

9/10

phoenix

how very sweet. I love how this turned out and the picture says it all. And I do know the difficulty of getting a child to settle.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thank you very much. I'm glad that you liked this and my picture. Thanks for the review.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thank you very much. I'm glad that you liked this and my picture. Thanks for the review.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I love this prompt and you did a great job. Adorable pic

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thank you very much.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thank you very much.

9/10

Shadow

Poor Snape. I am exhausted just reading how many times he had to go up and down the stairs.I loved the art work. There is nothing more beautiful than seeing a loving new father cuddling his baby.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks, yes things would have been so much easierif the cat could have entertained the kid or if he could Apparate... I'm glad you liked my picture. Thanks

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks, yes things would have been so much easierif the cat could have entertained the kid or if he could Apparate... I'm glad you liked my picture. Thanks

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Very cute. I really adore the picture of Snape and son here. :)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks. I'm glad you do.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks. I'm glad you do.

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kimjo2

precious...especially loved the picture! thanks so much

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks.

9/10

pookah

hooray, I was hoping someone would write something to the kittens/snakes prompt (as I couldn't think of a thing, myself!) This is very sweet and charming. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks! You're wlcome!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks! You're wlcome!

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WriterMerrin

Oh my, but they do look exhausted! And happy. It's a beautiful picture to go with the image you painted with your words. What lovely thoughts you leave the reader with.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thank you very much. I'm so glad that you liked both. Thank you for the nice review.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thank you very much. I'm so glad that you liked both. Thank you for the nice review.

9/10

FlittterKat

Severus is such an optimist thinking he could work on a potion when Hubert is so young, lol. I like how you worked in the kitten and snake as toys for the young ones. Good idea. Also, the drawing was so sweet, I loved it.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thank you very much. WE all marvel at the male ego from time to time. But I implied that normally the half-kneazle would curl up with the baby during nap times, but Grandpa kept shoowing the cat away. I'm glad you liked the drawing.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

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empathicslytherin

aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! that is soooo cute!please update soon!-amirah

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

I'm so glad that you liked it. But it's a one shot, one chapter and a picture. sorry I don't mean to disappoint, but its all done. But thank you for the review and I love the stars!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

I'm so glad that you liked it. But it's a one shot, one chapter and a picture. sorry I don't mean to disappoint, but its all done. But thank you for the review and I love the stars!

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Moreteadk

Good thing you put in the author's note because I was about to comment on the sudden name change. I thought it was sweet. Incredible that the old man couldn't just leave well enough alone (although, what else would he do when Severus so rudely hides in the basement instead of entertaining his guest...)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

LOL I though someone would say something about it. In Severus' defense, he'd put the little tyke down in his bassennet and went to brew a potion. How was he to know granddad wouldn't let the little guy sleep? He could have read a book. Teehehe Thanks for the review.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

9/10

zyra

Simple but very entertaining! The fanart was a bonus really... aww, how cute... *gets teary eyes*Well-done!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it.

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StormySkize

Oh, I'm sure every parent can relate to the baby who cries at the most inopportune times!Very cute picture to go along with the story.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

thanks. That was just what i was going for. I'm glad you like my pic

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

thanks. That was just what i was going for. I'm glad you like my pic

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debjunk

Cute. I can relate to Severus bounding up and down the stairs several million times. Poor guy.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks. yep, Apparation is so much easier! so is having a half-kneazle who knows how to entertain the kid.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks. yep, Apparation is so much easier! so is having a half-kneazle who knows how to entertain the kid.

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gersknightlady

This was a cute little piece and ther art work is precious. :)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thank you very much.

10/10

beaweasley2

Awww.“Little Hugo likes snakes! I’ll be darned,” Mr. Abernathy exclaimed. “Amazing, I know,” Severus said, tugging on his left sleeve. Teehehehe He likes Dady's snake, and dady's voice... too cute. Love the piccture.

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

Thanks. Yes, little tyke likes the snake on dady's arm and dady's voice. but he doesn't like grandpa's voice much.

Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)

Thanks. Yes, little tyke likes the snake on dady's arm and dady's voice. but he doesn't like grandpa's voice much.

9/10

reets67

Phew! poor thing I am exhausted just reading his travels up and down those stairs. Great story with interesting ingredients! Thanks for the story.Cheers.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks. Yep, would've been easier to Apparate, but he couldn't.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks. Yep, would've been easier to Apparate, but he couldn't.

10/10

snitchette

So cute.I love the picture with Snape and son asleep. *happy sigh*

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks.

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elsolel

Very neat. I liked how Hubert kept crying every time Severus got into his potion. Very true to life! The picture is touching, too.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks. I tried to keep it real. I'm glad it came across like that. Thanks for the compliment on my picture.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks. I tried to keep it real. I'm glad it came across like that. Thanks for the compliment on my picture.

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sunny33

very cute, story and pic

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks.

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

Snape and his son are really cute, and the picture is very nice, too.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks.

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smurfgirlz

Cute story! :) Poor Severus with all the stairs...lol

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks. it would keep his lean frame in good shape though.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks. it would keep his lean frame in good shape though.

10/10

Sampdoria

A lovely story and the picture was amazing!!!!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of If Kittens Won’t Do It, Try The Snake)

Thanks.

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