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Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge Rewriting History
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Rewriting History

1: One

Rewriting History

HermioneWeasley1972

23 Reviews   |   23 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Drama Angst General Alternate Universe Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 773 Words 1 Chapter WIP
Severus Snape Tom Riddle (Voldemort)

One man's decision changes the course of history in the wizarding world.

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HermioneWeasley1972

Member Since 2007  |  125 Stories  |  Favorited by 26  |  270 Reviews Written  |  225 Review Responses

I am in my 40s and I recently had two books published - Mike and the Deaf Student and Crayons - Color My World. They are both on Amazon and Barnes & Noble. 

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0/10

rhiannonofthemoon

Messing with time is tricky business!  I hope Severus is very, very careful.  Great job!

10/10

FlittterKat

I like where you're going with this prompt. Sooo, does Severus place little Tommy with a family or is he thinking about raising him? Wonder if he could come to the future with Severus and what would change? Can't wait for the next chapter.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Oh man, please update this soon. This is very intriguing. I really look forward to reading more. If it is your muse that is the problem, then send it here and I will give it a swift kick to start it up again.

0/10

phoenix

Very intriguing start and I would love to see more. I hope that it is not abandoned as I can see so much potential and wonder what would happen to stuck in the distant past Severus.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Oh man I was really getting into this.  More please, please more.  I love stories like this one.

0/10

kimjo2

cool!  is he going to adopt tommy?  i can hardly wait to find out!  thanks so much

9/10

Shadow

Oh my. I cant wait to see what happens when Severus starts muddling with the past.

9/10

Dreamy_Dragon

Very interesting beginning - I love time travel stories. Looking forward to more!

9/10

StormySkize

This is a great start to a very different time-turner fic. In every time-turner story I've read, it's Hermione who goes back in time -- usually meeting up with a much younger Snape. The idea that Snape will go back in time and try to 'fix' things is intriguing, though fraught with danger.Looking forward to more of this one.

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

Thank you. I hope to get the next chapter written this week or next at the latest.

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

Thank you. I hope to get the next chapter written this week or next at the latest.

0/10

Muggline

Oh, how interesting. I have to bookmark this!

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

Thanks. :)

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

Thanks. :)

9/10

beaweasley2

Ohhh No! He DIDN'T! Did he? Oh, my the touble he's gonna - the havoc, and everything will be all turned upside down if he does...

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

Hehehe very eloquently put.  Yes he did and yes he will, and yes it will. :)Thanks for the review and the rating.

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

Hehehe very eloquently put.  Yes he did and yes he will, and yes it will. :)Thanks for the review and the rating.

0/10

elsolel

Excellent beginning.  I hope that Severus changes Tom for the better.  I am looking forward to the next chapter very eagerly.

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

Im sure he will do his best.  I am hoping to get it written this week or next.

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

Im sure he will do his best.  I am hoping to get it written this week or next.

8/10

itchyfoot

Oh, Sevvie! Listen to Dumbledore.

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

I fear that he isnt.  Thanks for the review and rating!

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

I fear that he isnt.  Thanks for the review and rating!

0/10

klschmidt

This is the beginning of a potentially very interesting story.  Can't wait to see where you take it.  :-D  Great start.

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

Thank you so much.

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

Thank you so much.

10/10

sregner

That is not a good thing to do Severus, don't do it!  Nice beginning!

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

I think he is only thinking of the good that will come of it.  Thanks for the review and rating!

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

I think he is only thinking of the good that will come of it.  Thanks for the review and rating!

0/10

shellsnapeluver

Oh, very interesting, indeed! I love time-turner fics!!!!! Wow... there is so much that would change if he tried to fix things in the past... I hope he doesn't screw it all up.

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

Thank you.  I dont think he will screw it up - not intentially anyway.

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

Thank you.  I dont think he will screw it up - not intentially anyway.

10/10

pookah

This is a really great beginning!   As in real life, a good turn may be the one that sets in motion a chain of events that saves the world. I taught my daughter that: don't pass up the chance to do someone a kindness, it might  be your kind act that sets many good things into motion for years. A single good family taking the boy in as a baby, or young Tom Riddle looking for his innocent child, could have changed everything, (and may yet do so, in your tale.)

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

Thank you so much for the review and the rating.  I dont believe you will be disappointed with what I have planned.

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

Thank you so much for the review and the rating.  I dont believe you will be disappointed with what I have planned.

10/10

blue artemis

This is interesting.  I shall see where it goes. 

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

Thanks for your review and the rating.  Next chapter should be up this week or next I hope.

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

Thanks for your review and the rating.  Next chapter should be up this week or next I hope.

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

Good start on this story. I like that it's a different take on the Time-Turner angle.

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

Thanks, SW.  I appreciate your review and rating. :)

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

Thanks, SW.  I appreciate your review and rating. :)

0/10

sunny33

What's he going to do, adopt him?  Good start :)

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

One never can tell can they?;) Thanks for the review.

Response from HermioneWeasley1972 (Author of Rewriting History)

One never can tell can they?;) Thanks for the review.

0/10

CharmedForce

I do hope you continue this story. I would love to see the effects Severus' decision has had on the world. Well done!

0/10

Moreteadk

Oh dear what happens next? Or should I say before?Seeing James every day wouldn't be so bad actually, considering that if he was completely Voldemort-and-Darkness-free, then he might have actually got the girl himself. Which does mean that Harry would never have been born. Somehow I suspect Severus haven't actually thought it through at all.

0/10

debjunk

Intriguing start.  I like the idea of Severus going back and changing Voldemort and the past. 

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