Cave of Mind - Full
Chapter 2 of 2
Ladymage SamikoThe slightly longer original version of Cave of Mind.
It was disconcerting, to say the least, to wake up staring at your own dead body. To watch it lie there, then be picked up and carted off for burial. It was even more disconcerting to realise that you couldn't follow. That, in fact, you couldn't leave the six walls of the room in which you'd died.
But the worst of it was seeing your murderer lunging at you, feeling all the terror and despair of that moment, the utter hopelessness when you realized you'd never see a world without Voldemort. And then, just before you died, to know that you were a ghost. And that, as soon as you awoke, it would happen all over again.
But wait. Here was another ghost, one who didn't belong. A wizened scrap of an old woman. "Severus," she said, and he recognized her youthful voice. "It's over. It's time to go home." He took Hermione's hand and they walked together into eternity.
6/9/08
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So hermione came back to get him, as soon as she could.
Love a good ghost story.
interesting. thanks
6 walls of the room? It took me a second to catch up with you!!!
If they cannot be together in life, I'll take the ghost couple
Ahh, now I get it!
I prefer this full version, but both are good.
i'm glad you included this version. it filled it in just enough. i liked the notion that she went back long enough to lead his ghost to rest. : )
"they walked together into eternity" that's a great line.
I've seen Howl's Moving Castle, that was a cool movie!