The Hogwarts Stalker
sunny3320 Reviews | 6.9/10 (20 Ratings, 0 Likes, 2 Favorites )
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sunny33
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
Reviews for The Hogwarts Stalker
That was really good, I didn't expect that ending.
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
Hehe. Gotcha! :)
Anonymous
No, don't drag me into this!
Author's Response: Why not. It was probably all your fault in the first place. :)
Anonymous
at least there was a beta waiting in the wings to defend the subordinate claus's honor.
Author's Response: You have to watch them; they lurk in corners everywhere!
Nicely done, Penny. See I use them, too. hehe
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
I see you have started your campaign for review queen LOL :P
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
I see you have started your campaign for review queen LOL :P
Hee! I really like these!
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
Thanks, Tesh!
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
Thanks, Tesh!
*sporfle!* This was cute, sunny33! Any chance of some more? So... is the bushy-haired almost-victim Hermione, or you? Or are you one-and-the-same?
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
Give me a grammar crime prompt,
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
, and I will consider doing one just for you.!
Response from Cat Feral (Reviewer)
I'm not sure if it counts as a grammar crime (more of a spelling crime), but I've often been struck by how many otherwise good writers seem to mix up "then" and "than". Could you do anything with that?
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
Give me a grammar crime prompt,
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
, and I will consider doing one just for you.!
Response from Cat Feral (Reviewer)
I'm not sure if it counts as a grammar crime (more of a spelling crime), but I've often been struck by how many otherwise good writers seem to mix up "then" and "than". Could you do anything with that?
Anonymous
Sneaky commas. Good show! 
Author's Response: Thanks chook!
ROFL. Excellent.
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
Thanks!
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
Thanks!
Too funny! I have trouble with commas, too! All hail the betas who help us out with our recalcitrant commas. 
Golly! This is a scream!
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
LOL, glad you liked it! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
LOL, glad you liked it! :)
what a hoot! thanks
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
Thanks Kimjo!
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
Thanks Kimjo!
Cute sunny, real cute... for all beta's! lol
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
They need their moment of glory! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
They need their moment of glory! :)
This is hilarious! I, too, left school before the "comma rules" changed, and I find myself noticing the difference from my A+ papers of forty years ago and the wonderful writing of today.Well done!Beth
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
I bet our old English teachers would have had just as much trouble as we have the the pesky things! Thanks for the review.
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
I bet our old English teachers would have had just as much trouble as we have the the pesky things! Thanks for the review.
Aw, does someone get her stories back with corrections? I was once good with commas, but the rules were changed after I left school. I think I use too many for current rules of grammar.
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
Well I've only done one or two so far, but from conversations with lots of people about naughty commas...
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
Well I've only done one or two so far, but from conversations with lots of people about naughty commas...
Hilarious!
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
Thanks Em !
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
Thanks Em !
hahahhahahaha. i loved this. i used to think i was good with recalcitrant commas, 'til my writing met ladyinthecloak. *sighs*
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
What, you too? She's the best! Thanks for the review.
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
What, you too? She's the best! Thanks for the review.
Too funny! LOL!
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
Thanks, it was the result of a hilarious IM conversation I had with Moreteadk one night :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
Thanks, it was the result of a hilarious IM conversation I had with Moreteadk one night :)
LMAO! It's like a tribute to all betas. 
I'm so glad you posted it. I should have asked you for permission to show it around at first, but I didn't think about it until after you had gone to bed. I kept wishing I could have somehow linked people to my IM history file. :pI'm pimping you out on my LJ now. :D
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
It is a tribute to the hard work they do, saving us from those dastardly commas! Thanks MT for the inspiration! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
It is a tribute to the hard work they do, saving us from those dastardly commas! Thanks MT for the inspiration! :)
Anonymous
How does one get to be a comma guru? I try and try, but the little SOB's refuse to be tamed!
"Thrust himself into that forbidden place..." Sheesh, that's exactly what they do! LOL. Good one.
Author's Response: Thanks Lulabelle! Perhaps it should be a Comma Wrangler?
LOL Too cute!
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
Thanks Southern, I couldn't resist the thought of a wicked comma on the loose!
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
Thanks Southern, I couldn't resist the thought of a wicked comma on the loose!
They seem to pick on Hermione a lot. I didn't quite fall out of my chair laughing.
Response from sunny33 (Author of The Hogwarts Stalker)
That was my very first story! :)