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Potions Under Duress Equilibrium
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Equilibrium

1: Chapter One

2: Chapter two

3: Chapter Three

4: Chapter Four

5: Chapter Five

6: Chapter Six

7: Chapter Seven

8: Epilogue

Equilibrium

Lady Apythia

111 Reviews   |   111 Ratings, 0 Likes, 214 Favorites )

Angst Romance Erotica Smut Slash Epilogue post-HBP/HBP compliant post-DH/DH What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 18,353 Words 8 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Remus Lupin Severus Snape

Both Severus and Remus have been imprisoned and will not be released unless someone is willing to be bound to them. Hermione is forced to confront her feelings and history with both men as she debates what is easy verses what is right in love and life

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Chapters (8)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Chapter 8: Epilogue


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Lady Apythia

Member Since 2005  |  3 Stories  |  Favorited by 45  |  58 Reviews Written  |  195 Review Responses

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9/10

Bettina

Thanks for sharing this extraordinary story!

0/10

MollysSister

Sounds like Hermione knows more about Remus than Harry does. Curious.

0/10

Moyra

Many thanks for this wonderful threesome-fic. I especially loved the forth guy Teddy in it.

10/10

Sampdoria

You haven't abonded this wonderful fic, have you????? I want to read more and will probably start wailing if you don't update soon:-))

10/10

Wistful_stargazer

Well ALRIGHT!  She got to do them both separately, and then both at the same time--it was about time!  Hey?  Lucky girl!  LOL
;~D

~*~*~
Well done--keep up the good work!

Is this the final chapter?  If so the story is marked as being a W.I.P. (Work In Progress), and hasn't been updated since June 12, 2008.  Please don't let a delightful story, such as this one, be abandoned!

PLEASE, PLEASe, PLEAse, PLEase, PLease, Please, please update soon.

10/10

Wistful_stargazer

EEK!  If Hermione isn't careful, she'll kill herself, from trying to accio a heavy book or something else that could crush her, due to the amount of magic she is able to channel due to the bond.


Hmm, to think that the way to remove the bond is to shag while under the influence of both a love and a lust potion--how cool is that?
;~D

It's about time that Hermione got herself a happy, and at the hands of her two men during a quick grope fest while waiting for the return of Harry and George from getting supper.
;~D

I love how Severus' dirty talking was getting Remus all "pumped up" over the idea of scoring with her (for the first time EVER) later on that evening--LUCKY girl!
;~D

Now to even out the amount of physical loving going around; Hermione is definitely behind on the scoreboard.
:~P

~*~*~

Well done--keep up the good work!

10/10

Wistful_stargazer

Grr, the men of the house both need to grow a pair, and stop pussy footing around, and tell the girl EXACTLY what they mean because she is too insecure about what she is to them to realize what they are offering her.

Well done--keep up the good work!

10/10

Wistful_stargazer

Hurray!  They all have feelings for each other!  So much the better for their future together.


Well done--keep up the good work!

10/10

Wistful_stargazer

*::fans face while breathing rapidly::*
OMG--freaking lucky girl to have run into the good Professor Snape, and have him escort her home, and such!  Mmm, I would SO love to be Hermione!
;~D

Mmm, I get the feeling that she has perhaps had an encounter or two with Professor Lupin as well.  Allow me to repeat myself... I would SO love to be Hermione!
;~D

Well done--keep up the good work!

10/10

Wistful_stargazer

ARGH!  The poor girl is slowly dying of UST poisoning.  If she doesn't get some soon, it may kill her.  LOL

;~P

Hmm, at least the two finally laid their cards on the table and told her how they feel and where she fit into it all.  Hopefully she isn't too far gone on the insecurity/pity train to accept what they have to offer.  Hey?

Well done--keep up the good work!

10/10

Wistful_stargazer

HURRAY!  Two of my favorite love interests for Hermione are no longer dead.  That they need to bind with someone willing, and Hermione is available is perfect.

I love this story concept.

Well done--keep up the good work!

0/10

sunny33

Great climax, so to speak!

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thanks!

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thanks!

0/10

DeeMichelle

intriguing

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

I hope you continue to think so. Thanks for reading!

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

I hope you continue to think so. Thanks for reading!

0/10

seraph7

Right I got to the end and decided to leave the main review here instead of just leaving one liners at the end of each chapter.I was a bit confused by the soul binding thing. Perhaps I need to reread that section to get it clearer in my head. Is this a work in progress? I felt the ending was a bit abrupt but if there's more on the way then that's fair enough.

0/10

seraph7

Good, I was not disappointed . I think however I'm just not a big fan of the Severus/ Hermione ship especially when they end up in bed. It just seems so wrong. Strangely I seem to come across a lot of SS/HG stories though.

0/10

nighthawk

Oh yes. I so love this threesome. Who would not like to be sandwiched between those two men. I'm really, really looking forward to the next chapter. With your story I feel like a child in a candy shop, not knowing what to choose first. ;-)

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

That's the best compliment! Thanks so much. I am so glad you are enjoying it!

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

That's the best compliment! Thanks so much. I am so glad you are enjoying it!

10/10

Gardengirl

Wow! *fans self*But I'm a bit confused (as usual) - which spell and bond will fade - the Ministry's, or the soul bond?

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Sorry, it's confusing. The theory is this: That the Soul Mating ritual will over-ride the ministry binding as Soul Mates sort of out-rank regular bondings,  thus breaking the Ministry spell. So at this point, the threesome would be bound only by the Soul Mating ritual. But because, in theory, the ritual was potions-induced, when the results of the potion wore off, so would  the results of the ritual, leaving all three unbound and in control of their own magic.I hope that clears it up! Thanks for commenting!

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Sorry, it's confusing. The theory is this: That the Soul Mating ritual will over-ride the ministry binding as Soul Mates sort of out-rank regular bondings,  thus breaking the Ministry spell. So at this point, the threesome would be bound only by the Soul Mating ritual. But because, in theory, the ritual was potions-induced, when the results of the potion wore off, so would  the results of the ritual, leaving all three unbound and in control of their own magic.I hope that clears it up! Thanks for commenting!

10/10

Lkmaide

I want a Snupin sandwich of my own!!!  with a nice glass of milk.  hmmm. . . .   or is that mmmmmm

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

I believe the line for Snupin sandwiches is forming over there. *points to queue*Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

I believe the line for Snupin sandwiches is forming over there. *points to queue*Thanks so much for reading and commenting!

10/10

Anonymous

Squeee!!!! So happy this morning! Perfect! Oh, but did you have to leave off where you did? I was practically dancing in my chair, waiting for Severus and Remus.... Oh, good lord, woman!

I'm a big fan of "no-potion" sex. It proves a lot. Glad they didn't need any.

Author's Response: Thank you! I am so glad you liked it.

0/10

RedOrchid

Ooh! Nice! Very hot. Good good work you!

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thank you!

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thank you!

0/10

Honoria

wow this is hot!  Excellent eroticism

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thank you! I am so glad you liked it!

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thank you! I am so glad you liked it!

0/10

Isode

Wow! You managed to make that not only hot but beautiful as well.  I could feel the love (the love song from the Lion King is running through my head right now). I am curious as to where you will take the story from here so don't keep us in suspense.I also wanted to compliment you on your story Too Wise To Woo, Much Ado About Nothing is my favorite Shakespear play and I always thought HG/SS would make a great Beatrice and Benedict.  Thanks for two great reads now go write some more.

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thank you so much! I appreciate all your comments. now go write some more.If my muse cooperates! I think I might have to try to write another threesome with these characters. I've never received as much feedback as I have for this story.

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thank you so much! I appreciate all your comments. now go write some more.If my muse cooperates! I think I might have to try to write another threesome with these characters. I've never received as much feedback as I have for this story.

10/10

gabi1791

Hot, veeeeery hot!!! More, please!!gab

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thank you!

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thank you!

10/10

Sampdoria

Brilliant, absolutely brilliant!! Thank you so much for a wonderful, magical and hot chapter:-)) I have always said that those three are perfect for eachother and you have most certainly proven my point:-))I just love this story and I can't wait to read the next chapter (I want to watch too...:-))

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thank you!All these reviews are making me rethink what I wrote! The story was written for an exchange and the next chapter is the epilogue, but I think I might have to throw in one more chapter for everyone. Apparently Hermione isn't the only voyeur.

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thank you!All these reviews are making me rethink what I wrote! The story was written for an exchange and the next chapter is the epilogue, but I think I might have to throw in one more chapter for everyone. Apparently Hermione isn't the only voyeur.

10/10

hgelman

Whoo boy!  That was certainly worth the wait!  Great chapter!

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thanks so much! I am glad it lived up to your expectations!

Response from Lady Apythia (Author of Equilibrium)

Thanks so much! I am glad it lived up to your expectations!

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