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Potions Under Duress Soul Man
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Soul Man

1: Red House

2: She Said She Said

3: Living on a Thin Line

4: What Is and What Should Never Be

5: Quicksand

6: Custard Pie

7: Drowse

8: Kiss

9: Bad Moon

10: Dead On Time

11: Lily of the Valley

12: The Lantern

13: Have A Cigar

14: Strange Brew

15: Keep Yourself Alive

16: Nineteenth Nervous Breakdown

17: Voodoo Chile

Soul Man

julymorning

460 Reviews   |   460 Ratings, 0 Likes, 330 Favorites )

Drama Romance Horror Potions Under Duress 61,062 Words 17 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Original Character Severus Snape

Just after Voldemort's defeat, Hermione is doing research at the Department of Mysteries when she discovers she has inherited Spinner's End. As she uncovers the secrets of the house, the effect on her work – and her life – is startling.

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Chapters (17)

Chapter 1: Red House

Chapter 2: She Said She Said

Chapter 3: Living on a Thin Line

Chapter 4: What Is and What Should Never Be

Chapter 5: Quicksand

Chapter 6: Custard Pie

Chapter 7: Drowse

Chapter 8: Kiss

Chapter 9: Bad Moon

Chapter 10: Dead On Time

Chapter 11: Lily of the Valley

Chapter 12: The Lantern

Chapter 13: Have A Cigar

Chapter 14: Strange Brew

Chapter 15: Keep Yourself Alive

Chapter 16: Nineteenth Nervous Breakdown

Chapter 17: Voodoo Chile


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tinytexans

EEEeeeeeeee!!! Hmmmm.... speculations!! I think he wants to show her how to open the doooooor! Of course, I've been wrong before! Heehee! Good thing I have 7 chapters to read still!!! 

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Does the 'eeeee' mean you found this chapter terrifying, too? I do so love to give a good scare! *grins*

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Does the 'eeeee' mean you found this chapter terrifying, too? I do so love to give a good scare! *grins*

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tinytexans

Wow. Terrifying! And so very interesting! On to the next chappie!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Thank you so much! :-D

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Thank you so much! :-D

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tinytexans

Okay, I have to say... I have seen your updates here on TPP for a bit, and have thought about coming on over for a bit of a read, but just hadn't found the time. Today, whilst perusing elsewhere someone mentioned your story, and I thought, well, there's no time like the present. I find myself preferring not to read the WIPs. I like to know that a story will be finished when I begin, but I have seen you update this story often, for which I am glad... cause now I'm HOOKED! Yep. Hooked! You've set up the story brilliantly, and now I'll probably be up all night trying to catch up! Great story so far...

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

I know how that is - sometimes people abandon their stories, or go for ages without updating, and it can be really frustrating. But never fear, I like to update frequently. :) Also it's great to know that people are out there, reccing my stuff, as I am dreadfully poor at self-promotion. Thank you so much for wandering over and reading! I hope you continue to enjoy the fic as you carry on reading. :-D

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

I know how that is - sometimes people abandon their stories, or go for ages without updating, and it can be really frustrating. But never fear, I like to update frequently. :) Also it's great to know that people are out there, reccing my stuff, as I am dreadfully poor at self-promotion. Thank you so much for wandering over and reading! I hope you continue to enjoy the fic as you carry on reading. :-D

10/10

KarenDetroit

You know, this is worse than dying by inches....you might give the readers a break, considering the weather, economy, politics, and all that, plus the fact of DH itself.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Well, see, my reasoning was this. The economy and politics, at least, are going nowhere pleasant at the moment. So by leaving my readers at a cliffie, at least I'm giving them something to look forward to. ;) Thanks for the review!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Well, see, my reasoning was this. The economy and politics, at least, are going nowhere pleasant at the moment. So by leaving my readers at a cliffie, at least I'm giving them something to look forward to. ;) Thanks for the review!

10/10

Rowane

Intelligent, exciting and well-written. I just read the first 13 chapters and can't wait for what's to come. Love it!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

You read all thirteen chapters at once? Well done you! And well done me, come to think of it... ;-)Thank you so much for the wonderful review! More good stuff is coming up soon.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

You read all thirteen chapters at once? Well done you! And well done me, come to think of it... ;-)Thank you so much for the wonderful review! More good stuff is coming up soon.

10/10

hgelman

Wow!  What an update!  You are certainly a bit mean for leaving us hanging like this.  I EAGERLY look forward to the next chap!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

I know, but you know how I like my cliff-hangers. Resolving them is satisfying to all. :) I will have the next chapter up soon, I promise! Thanks for the review. :-D

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

I know, but you know how I like my cliff-hangers. Resolving them is satisfying to all. :) I will have the next chapter up soon, I promise! Thanks for the review. :-D

10/10

sinbad

I found the potion you created very interesting.  Things are really heating up!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Thanks! I worked for ages on that one - don't try it at home, mind. Wormwood and mescaline are both controlled substances! And thank you hugely for the thoughtful review. :-D

Response from sinbad (Reviewer)

I'm familiar with wormwood, it is an ingrediant in a herbal infusion called Vinager of the four theves or V4T in our home.  It's pretty potent it's anti viral, anti bacterial and anti fungal.  I never get sick when mom makes it lol, now I know why!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Do you drink this infusion? 'Cause...whoo! I bet it's potent. :)

Response from sinbad (Reviewer)

Yes, you can drink it (a teaspoon is a dose) wash with it and even use it for laundry (like washing bandages which we don't bother with) and yes it is potent.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Thanks! I worked for ages on that one - don't try it at home, mind. Wormwood and mescaline are both controlled substances! And thank you hugely for the thoughtful review. :-D

Response from sinbad (Reviewer)

I'm familiar with wormwood, it is an ingrediant in a herbal infusion called Vinager of the four theves or V4T in our home.  It's pretty potent it's anti viral, anti bacterial and anti fungal.  I never get sick when mom makes it lol, now I know why!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Do you drink this infusion? 'Cause...whoo! I bet it's potent. :)

Response from sinbad (Reviewer)

Yes, you can drink it (a teaspoon is a dose) wash with it and even use it for laundry (like washing bandages which we don't bother with) and yes it is potent.

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cmwinters

OH, you are a cruel, cruel person. :p

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Yes, yes. I try. :-D Thanks for the review!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Yes, yes. I try. :-D Thanks for the review!

10/10

shellsnapeluver

errr... evil cliff hanger! What is going on here! Teach is really up to something. I would be worried if I were her. Next chapter please! heheheheh

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Next chapter coming up real soon! And yes, I think Hermione is worried - too bad she also curious! :-D *evil laugh*

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Next chapter coming up real soon! And yes, I think Hermione is worried - too bad she also curious! :-D *evil laugh*

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sunny33

Oi, Snape, get your soul-butt into this here body, I want to interrogate you! LOL  Wonder what he will have to say?

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

We'll find out in the very next chapter! It'll be good stuff (at least, I hope you think it's good stuff)! Thanks for reviewing. :-D

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

We'll find out in the very next chapter! It'll be good stuff (at least, I hope you think it's good stuff)! Thanks for reviewing. :-D

10/10

jenonymous

I have a really bad feeling about this.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

said Luke portentously. Just then, the walls began to move, closing inward like a trash compactor. 'Look!' cried Han, pointing. Chewy roared in dismay.Okay, enough of that. I'm glad you have a bad feeling - that's the effect I've been going for! :-D Thank you so much for the review.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

said Luke portentously. Just then, the walls began to move, closing inward like a trash compactor. 'Look!' cried Han, pointing. Chewy roared in dismay.Okay, enough of that. I'm glad you have a bad feeling - that's the effect I've been going for! :-D Thank you so much for the review.

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lipa

Most interesting. Would that be what Snape warned her against? Can't wait to read more.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Well, we shall see. :) Thanks for your review!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Well, we shall see. :) Thanks for your review!

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Kailin

Nooo, don't stop THERE!  I have to know what happens next!  Tell me the next chapter is in the queue, or I'll be forced to revert to biting my fingernails.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

The next chapter is, unfortunately, not in the queue, but it will be soon, I swear! Thank you so much for the review! :-D

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

The next chapter is, unfortunately, not in the queue, but it will be soon, I swear! Thank you so much for the review! :-D

10/10

blue artemis

Bad idea.  Oh, well, this should get interesting. 

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Thank you! :)

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Thank you! :)

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timestep

And the plot thickens!  So looking forward to what happens next.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Thank you! I'm so pleased to hear it. :-D

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Thank you! I'm so pleased to hear it. :-D

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qui_quae_quod

Ah!  What a cliffie!

Lovely chapter.  I can't wait to see what happens next.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Thank you so much! :) I will update soon, I promise.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Thank you so much! :) I will update soon, I promise.

10/10

lillithj

0_o.  Ooooh, evil cliffie.I'm a research junkie and was loving the discussion od ingredients and measures and interactions.  I have to wonder about Hermione though.  She's been warned and is still working with this Teach character.  Hmmmmm.Looking forward to more.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Well, as they say, there are none so blind as those who will not see. They also say curiosity killed the cat. And other such stuff. Hermione's not listening - she's going to do what she wants. As would we all, for as they say, only the truly wise can learn from the mistakes of others. Etc. Thanks for your review! :-D

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Well, as they say, there are none so blind as those who will not see. They also say curiosity killed the cat. And other such stuff. Hermione's not listening - she's going to do what she wants. As would we all, for as they say, only the truly wise can learn from the mistakes of others. Etc. Thanks for your review! :-D

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timestep

But do we already kow - I'm really enjoying watching this mystery unfold.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

I'm so glad to hear it - thanks for the review! :)

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

I'm so glad to hear it - thanks for the review! :)

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Sari_Malfoy

Hmmmm. They're assuming that a soul of someone who is dead can be brough into a living body for a little while...and afterwards that soul would just agree to leave? If I was a soul of someone who had died, I think I might just want to live again (have a living body). Still, at least Teach thought of Snape doing something with/while in his body, so on some level he expects some kind of possible trouble. I can't believe that Hermione never considers this to be what she wasn't supposed to be doing. And everyone expects Snape's soul be all docile. It's certainly true that denial isn't a river in Egypt. Keep up the good work!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Well, they're making a lot of assumptions that may or may not be correct. We'll see. :) And yes, denial is not just a river in Egypt - very appropriate! Thank you so much for reviewing. :-D

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Well, they're making a lot of assumptions that may or may not be correct. We'll see. :) And yes, denial is not just a river in Egypt - very appropriate! Thank you so much for reviewing. :-D

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CharmedForce

Oh! What an interesting idea. It makes me wonder if Severus didn't really die... maybe he took the potion as his body was fading so that his soul left the physical and is just now floating around...

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Good guess, but... no. Snape is dead, dead, dead. :-DThank you so much for the review!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Good guess, but... no. Snape is dead, dead, dead. :-DThank you so much for the review!

10/10

kyriaofdelphi

Excellent. I am on the edge of my chair AGAIN! I need more and soon. Please! Thanks.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Hooray! More is coming soon, never fear. :-D

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Hooray! More is coming soon, never fear. :-D

10/10

arynwy

Academics give me chills. This had to be similar to the conversation the research team that created atomic reaction and then the bomb had at one point. They never thought of the repercussions until the horses had fled from the barn. What is to keep a person from misusing the process?Hermione is not thinking straight here and Teach is manipulating her rather masterfully at this point. I hope Severus will be able to fill her in on the shortcomings of all of this.Another great update! Thank you.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

To paraphrase the great Michael Crichton, academics are so concerned with whether or not they CAN do something that they never stop to think whether they SHOULD. Etc, etc. I loved 'Jurassic Park.' :-DYes, Hermione is getting manipulated from all sides - but that's all I'm going to say about that. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

To paraphrase the great Michael Crichton, academics are so concerned with whether or not they CAN do something that they never stop to think whether they SHOULD. Etc, etc. I loved 'Jurassic Park.' :-DYes, Hermione is getting manipulated from all sides - but that's all I'm going to say about that. Thank you so much for reviewing! :)

10/10

Anonymous

Aaaaahhhh!

Holy cow, this is the MOTHA of all cliffies! You dreadful woman! Where is the message that says, "The next chapter is in the queue!"

I'm gonna swear. I am. Goddamit! I was on the edge of my seat the whole chapter, but the last third? Girl, you've nearly done me in.

So Snape takes over Teach's body and says, What? "Don't trust this guy!" Okay, theories flying once more...

Author's Response: Hooray! What a lovely reaction. :-D

Thank goodness you were on the edge of your seat, 'cause I was wondering. I actually vetted this chapter with a third person (someone other than just me and my beta), who said it was sort of 'boring.' *sigh*

So - good to know I haven't lost my touch. :)

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kimjo2

evil cliffie alert!!!  and why does the name edward teach sound familiar?  a pirate?  anyway, thanks so much and i look forward to the next installment

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Yes - 'Edward Teach' was one of Blackbeard's names. Supposedly. So I stole it. :) Thank you for your review - I will have the next installment up soon!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Yes - 'Edward Teach' was one of Blackbeard's names. Supposedly. So I stole it. :) Thank you for your review - I will have the next installment up soon!

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Elise_Wanderer

Lord, Hermione!  Snape tries to warn you about Teach and doing something you shouldn't, and so you immediately go out, brew some strange concoction with Teach himself, and prepare to use it?  What are you, nuts?!  And the ethical ramifications just start to occur to you NOW?!?!On the other hand, if it gets Teach out of his body and Severus INTO it....  Oh, hell, drink it!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

We-ell, I suppose we tend to ignore the ethics of a particular action if it's an action we really, really want to perform. Humans can justify anything to themselves if they really want to. :)Thanks for reviewing! :-D

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

We-ell, I suppose we tend to ignore the ethics of a particular action if it's an action we really, really want to perform. Humans can justify anything to themselves if they really want to. :)Thanks for reviewing! :-D

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