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Potions Under Duress Soul Man
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Soul Man

1: Red House

2: She Said She Said

3: Living on a Thin Line

4: What Is and What Should Never Be

5: Quicksand

6: Custard Pie

7: Drowse

8: Kiss

9: Bad Moon

10: Dead On Time

11: Lily of the Valley

12: The Lantern

13: Have A Cigar

14: Strange Brew

15: Keep Yourself Alive

16: Nineteenth Nervous Breakdown

17: Voodoo Chile

Soul Man

julymorning

460 Reviews   |   460 Ratings, 0 Likes, 330 Favorites )

Drama Romance Horror Potions Under Duress 61,062 Words 17 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Original Character Severus Snape

Just after Voldemort's defeat, Hermione is doing research at the Department of Mysteries when she discovers she has inherited Spinner's End. As she uncovers the secrets of the house, the effect on her work – and her life – is startling.

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Chapters (17)

Chapter 1: Red House

Chapter 2: She Said She Said

Chapter 3: Living on a Thin Line

Chapter 4: What Is and What Should Never Be

Chapter 5: Quicksand

Chapter 6: Custard Pie

Chapter 7: Drowse

Chapter 8: Kiss

Chapter 9: Bad Moon

Chapter 10: Dead On Time

Chapter 11: Lily of the Valley

Chapter 12: The Lantern

Chapter 13: Have A Cigar

Chapter 14: Strange Brew

Chapter 15: Keep Yourself Alive

Chapter 16: Nineteenth Nervous Breakdown

Chapter 17: Voodoo Chile


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Member Since 2007  |  5 Stories  |  Favorited by 98  |  13 Reviews Written  |  1,043 Review Responses

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10/10

hgelman

Your post-coital comment struck me as so funny "fancy another cup of tea?"  I love the story - now I can't wait to see what happens next - what about Draco?  Will Hermione destroy Snape's work?  Will Snape stay?  What about Teach?  I am really looking forward to an update!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Thank you, m'dear! I'm really pleased you're still enjoying it. The exchange is over now and summer approaches, so I will (hopefully) be updating more frequently. And then we will find out about Draco, and Teach, and whether or not Snape will stay. :-D

10/10

MollysSister

I am all sorts of curious how long Draco will stay away. I think he will come back. I find myself feeling badly for Severus. Its sort of a half life isnt it?

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Dunno really... if I were a dead, haggard 39-year-old, I might like to come back to life in the body of a handsome, wealthy 18-year-old. :-) But we shall see. Thanks for the review!

0/10

sunny33

Oh, yes. A nice cuppa. The universal panacea! ;)

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Never fails to soothe the rough edges of those awkward moments, at least... :-)

10/10

Anonymous

Holy fucking hell, woman.

Speechless.

All right, I'm never speechless. This was one of your best, and not just because of the, er, culmination. No, I thought her arguments/encounters with both Draco and Snape were excellent; I was totally drawn into those moments, like I was watching them verbally battle.

Oh, and yeah, that scene on the kitchen table... Fuck, yes. I wondered how you'd manage it, if it would live up to the UST... And dear god, you did!!!!

*smooches of the incredibly wet variety*

Author's Response: w00t, m'dear, w00t. So glad you liked it! I too enjoy a good debate, followed by a good shag (in stories as well as in reality). Fulfilling the good ol' UST is always kinda tough - lame smut is, well, lame. Good to know this wasn't. :-)

10/10

hgelman

I am so glad you updated!  Great chapter!  Thank you for continuing!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Thank you so much for the review! Glad to see I haven't lost all of my readers. :)

10/10

mia madwyn

I just read this for the first time.  So compelling, so intricately woven, so sexually intense.  Stellar job, m'dear.  Stellar.I'm a little confused by one thing, and that's that Teach didn't attempt to apparate back to her home to steal everything before she gets another chance to destroy it.  He's tipped his hand and revealed himself to be a sodding bastard so I can' imagine that he expects her to continue helping him, and so I'm surprised.  But perhaps the story has something ahead that will explain all!Good job.  I look forward to the next chapter!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Thank you so much, mia dear - coming from you, winner of fifty squillion awards, that means an enormous amount to me! :-DYes, Teach is indeed a sodding bastard, but he's just the kind of sodding bastard who would consider that HE had done HER a favour. And, depending on how you look at it, that's exactly what he did do. I think it was also pretty clear to him that she didn't intend to destroy any of it. At any rate, everything will become clear as we carry on.And, hopefully, we will carry on to the next chapter soon - I'm perfecting it even now...  ;-)

Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)

Oh, that's great news.  Looking forward to it!

0/10

Osiodhachain

Uh oh. Draco's soul is no longer in his body and Hermione is in no condition to make the right decision about putting him back into it and not encase him in a marble for all eternity. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

I'm perfecting the next chapter even now, so hopefully you won't have to wait anxiously for too long! Thanks once again for reviewing - it makes my day! :)

0/10

salvamea

hip hip hoorray!! you are back to your story. I couldn't belive my eyes when I realised there was a new chapter!Three loud cheers.A slow chinese torture.  ? not only for Hermione, for sure.But now you have your new twists and turns.So Draco is not disgusted by her revelations but he also agrees to repeat the test?Did he already have the plan to make her swallow the potion?Was it a kind of gift to her or revenge ? or dontknowwhat?In the end I would say it was sort of a gift to her.She must have enjoyed it immensely.Snape is back *tralala*for how long is it now?Did I get this right. She has the means to create a horocrux for a whole soul, but the soul has to agree with that? complicé. But please! keept it going, yes?Salva

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

As usual, some of your insights are right on the money. But I won't say which ones, so as to keep up the suspense. :) I will certainly keep it going - other projects are complete, and I have more time to work on this now, so expect another update soon! Thank you immensely for reviewing.

0/10

Osiodhachain

Oh, my. I'm almost too scared and nervous to go on to the next chapter. I don't have a good feeling about this. Why is Hermione continuing to spend time with Teach when Snape has been trying to warn her against him? And what if what Snape has been warning her NOT to do is exactly what she is about to do? I hope the whole experiment doesn't go horribly wrong. 

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Well, quite! Unfortunately, I cannot divulge the answers to your questions, but rest assured, everything will be explained in good time. Thank you so much for, well, yet another awesome review. :-D

0/10

Osiodhachain

The level of thought and depth behind the Horcrux literature is truly amazing. I went to bed last night with my mind humming with magical philosophy about the nature of the soul. Absolutely captivating! 

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Hurrah! I must admit, that is one of my favourite parts of the fic. Writing it was soooo much fun. :-D Thanks for the third - the THIRD - squeeworthy review. You rock, did you know that?

10/10

Aurette

Oooo!  I just found this fic, very tasty!  More please!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Thank you! More to come soon. :-D

10/10

sinbad

Interesting, although the sex scene kinda ewe'd me. 

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Hmm, sorry about that. Er...hopefully the next chapter will be less squick-inducing! Thanks for reviewing. :)

0/10

kimjo2

yeow!  what a trip!  this is your brain on drugs...great use of that line!  psychodelic update.  thanks so much

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Thank YOU so much for the lovely review! I was a bit worried about that line - reading over it after posting, it occurred to me that it might be a bit too silly for Snape, but meh. He does what I tell him. ;-)

10/10

faeriebell

I was so happy to see this updated!!! Love this chapter, is it bad that I kind of want some of that potion? LOL

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Dude, not at all - the more I write about it, the more I want some of it, too! I'm so glad you liked the chapter, and I hope to update again soon. Thanks for leaving such a delightful review! :)

0/10

mom7knox

wow! what an incredible ride - keep up the great work! 

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :-D

0/10

sunny33

Draco got a lot more than he bargained for! :)

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Well, c'est possible. On the other hand, perhaps he got exactly what he wanted...? We shall see. Thanks for reviewing! :)

10/10

Muggline

Oh my, does this stuff contain LSD or something?

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

It contains mescaline, which, like LSD, is a hallucinogen, but works upon the body in a slightly different way.Also a controlled narcotic - so don't try this at home!Thanks for the review. :-)

10/10

shellsnapeluver

Squeee! Thank you for posting this!!!!!!! I'm so happy!! Now, more ghost stuff! Spooookyyyyy! heheeehhe

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

W00t! More coming up soon, darling, never fear. And thanks for leaving a review here, too - reviews make my heart go squee! :-D

0/10

Osiodhachain

I can hardly believe how well written this story is. The depth, the detail, the intrigue, the mystery, the spookiness. I feel like I'm reading a novel, not a fan fic. Amazing.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

There you go again, stroking the Muse. Flattery will get you everywhere. :) I'm happy that you like the detail and the intricacy - I was concerned initially that the slow pace would put people off, but that doesn't seem to have happened. So hurrah! More to come soon. Thanks again for such a lovely review!

0/10

musicdrink

Thanks for updating!  I hope the next chapter is in the works.  I can't wait for Severus to stay in physical form.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

The next chapter is indeed in the works, and I hope to have it posted soon! Then we shall see whether Severus gets to stick around longer. Thank you so much for the review! :)

0/10

Osiodhachain

I am absolutely loving this story. This chapter had me on pins and needles and shaking in my boots. I know Hermione's spectre/visitor is probably a benign force, but you write it so well that her fear and nervousness are palpable. Excellently done. I've never been this creeped out and exhilarated by a SSHG fic.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Wow - thank you! Reviews like this spur the Muse into action. :-DI'm sure you have seen by now that her spectre is a benign force, so well done you. I'm so glad you're finding the story so enjoyable.

10/10

MollysSister

OH MY! Hermione is determined to have her Snape isnt she? I am sure Draco will be none to pleased. Well assuming she lets Draco's soul return...Mawhahahahah!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

M'dear, you do the evil laugh so well. Poor Hermione the Man-Eater! I shall try to have the next chapter up soon so that you don't have to wait too long to find out whether Draco gets to keep his body. :-)

10/10

MollysSister

1998 was not the worst year of my life, that was the year I got married! Edward became hostile there rather quickly. Is Snape still inside him maybe? affecting him in some way? I think Edward was right to be worried that she would have found some way to keep Snape's soul in his body. Hell if I were HG thats what I would have done!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Congrats on your ten-year anniversary, then! :-)Yeah, Edward is a hostile kinda guy - and I think you're the first person to comment that Edward is right to be worried! I agree. ;-) Thank you so much for the review!

10/10

pookah

Gosh, I am sure Teach has dashed to Spinner's End to grab the notes and potion stuff!This is a great chapter!  and i love the other reviews, people bringing up such good questions and interesting thoughts.  Teach isn't very appealing right now, i have to say.  LOVE the story, though.

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Again, thank you! Everyone has such insightful things to say - I never really expected that readers would really get into the soul-theory stuff, but I'm so glad you enjoy it! :-D

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Again, thank you! Everyone has such insightful things to say - I never really expected that readers would really get into the soul-theory stuff, but I'm so glad you enjoy it! :-D

10/10

pookah

I  missed these two chapters!  I see from the dates it was while i was ill and not reading much fanfiction.  I am happy I decided to check on this tale!  Very good, as it has been from the start!

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Thank you so much! I'm sorry to hear that you were ill, but I'm glad you're back in the fanfic ocean. Sorry it has taken me so long to respond to your review - I haven't been doing much in the fanfic world lately, either. ;-)

Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)

Thank you so much! I'm sorry to hear that you were ill, but I'm glad you're back in the fanfic ocean. Sorry it has taken me so long to respond to your review - I haven't been doing much in the fanfic world lately, either. ;-)

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