Bad Moon
Chapter 9 of 17
julymorningHermione learns more about Snape from Mark and investigates the nature of ghosts.
ReviewedBad Moon
I fear rivers overflowing
I hear the voice of rage and ruin
Hermione found herself at loose ends not long after her dinner with Teach. He sent a terse note to let her know he would be travelling on the Continent for a few weeks she hoped his flight to sunnier climes was unrelated to the disastrous conclusion to their evening and Harry and Ron told her they would be away for Auror training for some weeks as well. She wondered what, precisely, such training comprised and where it might take place, but contented herself with imagining something like an American summer camp, complete with obstacle course and teamwork activities.
The school year had begun not long before, so she found herself spending many of her evenings tutoring Mark. It was a fairly lame excuse for her to have company; he didn't need much help, and it was only her luck that his studies hadn't progressed beyond the point she herself had reached in the Muggle curriculum. He would be starting secondary school the next year, and then her formidable brain would be next to useless to him.
One evening found Mark at her house, working on science prep. He sat at her scruffy dining room table, head bent so low over his work that his shaggy hair brushed the book in front of him, a plate of cheese and crackers and a glass of juice near his elbow 'brain food,' Hermione called it. He had told her that he liked to do his homework at hers; he found it difficult to concentrate at home where the television was usually on.
Hermione was seated at the other side of the table, making some notes on ghosts her new side project. She hadn't told Mark who their resident spectre was, but he seemed to approve of the project anyway: for him, unexplainable phenomena were things to be figured out, not feared.
'Hermione,' asked Mark abruptly, looking up from his papers, 'what's avocado?'
Startled, she answered automatically, 'It's a tropical fruit. You've probably seen one it looks like a pear with a knobbly green skin over it.'
Mark wrinkled his nose. 'That doesn't sound right to me. What's a fruit got to do with solutions?'
'Erm... Maybe you'd better explain why you're asking.'
'Okay,' he agreed, pushing his textbook across to her. 'They're making us study solutions and suspensions again, even though we did it all last year. Professor Snape was showing me how to calculate molarity in his lab at Christmastime and said that a mole was something to do with avocado, but I've forgotten what it was.'
'He was... what?' Hermione gasped, gripping the edge of the table with white knuckles. 'You've been in his lab?'
'Yeah...' Mark answered slowly, beginning to look alarmed. 'Why? What's the matter?'
'You...' she stammered speechlessly. She wanted to ask: Why didn't you tell me about it? When we thought there was a man in the house, why didn't you suggest looking downstairs? Why would Snape show you, of all people, something so suspicious? What else do you know about this house that I don't? But, of course, she could ask none of these questions, so she continued to gape at him, aware that her reaction must seem out of all proportion to his remarks.
Seeking to calm her, Mark went on, 'He was pretty uptight about it, you know. I wasn't allowed to touch anything unless he said. But he let me play around with some scales and beakers and stuff so that I could learn how to make different concentrations of sugar-water. He said it would help us improve our lemonade recipe.'
'Improve the lemonade recipe?' she echoed limply.
'We did really well at it,' he said, smiling proudly. 'We made all these different concentrations and then tasted each one. The best one ended up being about half sugar and half water the others were too sweet. Then we decided how much lemon juice to add. That was different, obviously, because lemon juice doesn't dissolve in water, so it wasn't a solution and the professor couldn't use the same maths. Then he scaled everything up so that we could make a really big pitcher of the stuff.'
'Professor Snape did all this?' she asked doubtfully.
'Yeah. He said we could refine the recipe as I got better at maths. Then we could say we had created the best possible lemonade and prove it scientifically.' Mark's face fell. 'Although I guess we won't ever do that now.'
'Oh, Mark,' Hermione sighed, resting her hand over his comfortingly. 'You can still do it one day yourself. It'll be a memorial to his memory.'
He shrugged. 'Maybe. So, do you know what avocado is, then?'
Hermione shook her head regretfully. 'I'll find out for you, though.'
''Kay.' He leaned back over his work and said indistinctly, 'If you're going to answer a question for me, I should answer one for you. It's only fair.'
Laughing, Hermione said, 'All right. I've got a question for you. Did Professor Snape keep a journal in his lab?'
Mark raised his head slowly and favoured her with that same appraising, adult expression she had seen on his face the night she met him. 'You want to go snooping through his private life?' he asked evenly.
It was on the tip of her tongue to make a heated denial, but something in Mark's eyes changed her mind. 'Yes,' she said simply.
'He might've kept one,' Mark mused. 'That's not a fair question, though. You've got to ask me something I can actually answer.'
Hermione pondered this for a moment before saying, 'Why did you like Professor Snape so much?'
Mark grinned. 'Easy. Because he was clever.'
'Is that why you like me?'
'No,' he said immediately.
'Why, then?' she pressed.
He answered, 'Because you liked Professor Snape, too.'
***
During the weekdays, Hermione was building up quite a complex picture of the nature of ghosts. Using Teach's money and the Ministry's contacts, she was able to acquire passes to most of the major research libraries in the country and quite a few of the privately-owned ones, too, in which she spent long hours reading both wizarding and Muggle accounts of the paranormal. Most of what she learned was rubbish; the information that wasn't, she dutifully noted down and collated at home at the end of each day.
The wizarding definition of a ghost, she discovered, was frustratingly imprecise: 'the imprint of a departed soul.' To her, this suggested that a ghost was something like a wizard's portrait, imbued with his personality and knowledge, but pearly-white and mobile rather than stationary. A ghost could interact with people, talking and moving about at will; a ghost could be affected by magic (how well she remembered the basilisk and Nearly-Headless Nick!). A ghost, however, like a portrait, was not the actual person it was an imprint, a facsimile. The soul was elsewhere; what remained behind was more like an interactive recording.
Hermione did not think this sort of ghost was what she had on her hands: if the Snape who kept appearing in her house could speak to her directly, he probably would have done so by now; he was not translucent white, but instead could have passed as a human being, so natural did he look; he was not intimidated by her wand or her spells. She began to revise her terminology: he was not a ghost, at least not in the traditional sense, so in her notes she started to refer to him as a 'manifestation' instead.
From wizarding works on ghosts, she moved on to Muggle accounts and immediately hit upon some very interesting information. For one thing, there was an almost endless list of famous ghosts, from the 'real' to the fictional, and they were said to appear for any number of fascinating reasons. The most usual explanation for the appearance of a ghost was quite similar to what wizarding literature had said: the person's image usually manifested in a place familiar to, or important to, that person in life. The legend that the ghost of Queen Anne Boleyn haunted the Tower of London was familiar to Hermione, although in all of her visits to the Tower, she had never once had the impression that it might be haunted. In fact, it seemed to her to be a bustling, rather cheerful place, for all its dire history.
In other cases, a ghost might appear to request some kind of favour from the living. Pliny the Younger, that great writer of letters, had in one of his missives described a ghost seen by his friend, the philosopher Athenodorus, in a house in Athens. Although the ghost had been unable to communicate, Athenodorus had followed the apparition into the garden and noted the spot where it had dematerialised. Upon digging there the next day, he found the corpse of an old man and was able to give it proper burial, thereby putting the ghost to rest. And in Shakespeare's Hamlet, of course, the ghost of the old king appears to Hamlet and declares himself unable to find peace until his murder is avenged.
But the sort of apparition that really caught her eye, and which she noted down carefully, was what the books referred to as an 'oracular' spirit. Making sure her pen was plentifully supplied with ink, she set to writing:
Example A: King Saul and the Witch of Endor
I Samuel 28
King Saul, having expelled all of the mediums and fortune-tellers from Israel, is overcome by terror when he witnesses the army of the Philistines approaching his land. Although he prays for guidance from the Lord and attempts to divine an answer through the Urim and Thummim, he receives no message. In despair, he disguises himself and goes to see the Witch of Endor. After he reassures her that she will not be punished for being a medium, she summons at his request the spirit of the prophet Samuel. Angered that his peace has been disturbed, Samuel tells Saul that he received no message from the Lord because he has not obeyed the Lord's commands. He tells Saul that he will be defeated by the Philistines the next day and will die, along with his sons, at their hands.
Example B: Brutus at the Battle of Philippi
Plutarch, Parallel Lives, 'Brutus'
Marcus Junius Brutus, one of the assassins of the dictator Gaius Julius Caesar in 44 B. C., had been a reluctant party to the conspiracy because of his familial and political connections to Caesar and is rumoured to feel considerable guilt about the manner in which he and his fellows terminated Caesar's 'tyranny.' His doubts and guilt stalk him even as he and Lucius Cassius Longinus, the mastermind of the conspiracy, prepare for battle against Caesar's heir, Octavianus. Having progressed with his army as far as Asia Province, he is reading in his tent one night when an apparition enters. Upon being questioned, it promises Brutus, 'You shall see me again at Philippi.' As it happens, Brutus's army meets that of Octavianus just outside of the ancient city of Philippi in Thrace. After an initial, indecisive battle, Brutus retires for the night and sees the phantom, which warns him of impending doom once again. On the next day, when the tide of battle turns against Brutus and victory seems impossible, he kills himself rather than be captured and humiliated by Octavianus.
(Note: this story also appears in Shakespeare's Julius Caesar, in which the ghost is that of Caesar himself.)
Example C: Jacob Marley and Ebenezer Scrooge
Dickens, A Christmas Carol
Fictional. Ebenezer Scrooge, a miserly and greedy businessman, is visited on Christmas Eve by the ghost of his business partner, Jacob Marley, who had died seven years before. Marley is doomed to suffer the burden of chains and weights for all eternity as punishment for his avarice and other sins; he warns Scrooge that unless he changes his ways, his own punishment will be even worse. Marley warns Scrooge that he will have one opportunity to change and describes to him the advent of the three spirits of Christmas, who will assist him to take advantage of this opportunity.
Now, Hermione thought, these were not 'ghosts' of the Nearly-Headless Nick sort. They possessed knowledge beyond what they could have known in life and appeared to individuals to warn them of some incipient disaster. Most of the time, those people had an opportunity to avert the disaster, but only in the case of Scrooge unfortunately a fictional personage had this actually been done. Unlike her apparition of Snape, the 'ghosts' in her examples could communicate verbally, although this seemed to happen only under certain circumstances: when Samuel appeared to Saul, he had been summoned by a medium; the spirits that appeared to Brutus and Scrooge had come late at night when those men were exhausted and nearing sleep...
She sat up straighter suddenly and banged her knee on the underside of the table. When they were exhausted and nearing sleep... She had first seen Snape in the window that afternoon, true, but it was after a morning's worth of backbreaking labour in her garden. But when she had seen him in her room that night, she had been half-asleep still, and when she had found him standing in her sitting room, she had been drunk. And he had been able to speak to her in her dreams... What was it he had said? 'You must not continue down this path.' What path did he mean?
***
Something she had written about King Saul caught her eye the next day as she was reviewing her notes. Before going to see the Witch of Endor, he had tried to divine what he should do by using the Urim and Thummim. Suspicious though she was about Divination, this did not sound like crystal-gazing or Tarot-reading to Hermione, so she decided to look up what, exactly, were the Urim and Thummim.
What she discovered amazed her. The first reference she came across was again in the first book of Samuel, in which Saul used them to determine who amongst his company had sinned that day. He split the company into two groups and cast the lots, saying, 'If the group containing myself and my son is at fault, respond with Urim; if the group containing the rest of my men is at fault, respond with Thummim.' Urim was the response, and Saul discovered that it was his son who had sinned. This information was not particularly useful to Hermione; it seemed to her no different from flipping a coin. She did not hit pay dirt until she consulted much to her personal chagrin some wizarding books on Divination.
There, in a volume called Necromancy, Divination, and Free Will, she found the following passage:
One of the least distasteful methods of communicating with the souls of the dead is by using the Urim and Thummim. Historical record suggests that this was the method favoured by magicians during the time of the ancient Hebrews, and accounts of it survive even in Muggle lore. The procedure is very simple and requires no incantations or even magic of any kind. Two objects of the same shape and size must be obtained; they must be distinguishable from one another only by sight. The easiest way to do this is by choosing objects with different colors; in the ancient world, a white stone and a black stone were used most commonly. The two objects must then be placed into an opaque bag and shaken thoroughly. The querent should speak his or her question aloud and indicate clearly which object will signify an affirmative response and which a negative response. Having done this, the querent should then remove one of the objects from the bag or box. Its colour will indicate the appropriate answer.
As a method of necromancy, the Urim and Thummim are heavily criticised, primarily for two reasons. The first, and most obvious, is that it is not considered 'true' (i.e. magical) Divination and is therefore subject more to the laws of probability than anything else. Only two responses are possible, each one equally mathematically probable, thus giving the method a more than passing resemblance to a game of chance. Indeed, the fact that this is a method much favoured by Muggle spiritualists to dupe the bereaved lends weight to this critique. The other objection, often offered by those with experience in the more scientific aspects of Divination, is that the mechanism whereby the souls of the dead influence the outcome of the exercise is unknown. Do they affect the position of the objects within the bag? Or do they somehow direct the hand of the querent to the appropriate object? Extensive experimentation has thus far been inconclusive.
Anecdotal evidence, however, suggests that wizards and witches can overcome these limitations in certain ways; many magical querents maintain that when these additional strictures are employed, using the Urim and Thummim is one of the most useful and reliable ways to obtain simple information. Some reports claim that, when the querent is seeking information from the soul of a named individual, choosing as his objects items that once belonged to that individual ensures that the spirit is attentive and responds accurately. Others have concluded that Summoning the soul of a named individual into the objects themselves is an even more certain way to achieve accuracy, though this is usually frowned upon as Dark magic. Still others claim that the phrasing of the questions is the most important aspect of the process: the simpler the question, the less accurate the answer will be. The art, therefore, is to create complex, precise questions that can be satisfied by simple responses. Probably for this reason, the Urim and Thummim is the method of Divination most often employed by the legal profession.
She had to skip back to the introduction to discover that this was not the sort of Divination that was taught at Hogwarts. There, Divination had seemed to consist of looking into some vague, pre-determined future and making nonsense pronouncements about it; necromancy, she learned, was a way of questioning the dead about anything unknown, past, present, or future. The dead were believed to possess special knowledge, even about matters which had been unknown to them in life.
Hermione could believe in this sort of Divination quite easily; it coincided perfectly with what she was learning through her research into the soul. If there was such a thing as a collective soul, then it was entirely possible that any one part of it any soul which had belonged once to a living individual might have access to the knowledge possessed by the entity as a whole. This would explain why the souls of the dead were so useful in Divination; it did not, however, explain, as the book had said, the mechanism by which the information was communicated.
Undeterred, Hermione returned to Spinner's End that night determined to perform her first ever willing attempt at Divination. After dinner and a few glasses of wine to open her mind, she thought to herself she settled herself comfortably on the sofa in the basement by the light of a few candles and the warm glow of the furnace. She knew she was limited by the fact that she didn't have anything of Snape's to use quills, she suspected, wouldn't mix up well inside a bag but she had obtained one red marble and one green marble and hoped that her choice of colours might have some useful effect.
She took a few deep breaths and began, 'I wish to communicate with Severus Snape, the late owner of this house. If your answer is yes, respond with green; if your answer is no, respond with red. Severus Snape, are you here?'
She waited for a few seconds, feeling silly, then reached into the bag and pulled out a marble. Her breath caught.
It was green.
She stared at the tiny sphere of glass in amazement, then dropped it back into the leather sack she was holding and shook vigorously. 'Professor Snape,' she asked, 'can you speak to me in the way a living person might speak to another living person?'
She reached into the bag again. This time the marble she extracted was red.
'Okay...' she murmured. 'Professor Snape, have you to tried to communicate with me through my dreams?'
Green.
'Professor Snape, do I need to continue addressing you by name?'
Red.
'Do you like my choice of colours?'
Green.
'When you appear to me, are you trying to warn me about something?'
Green.
'Can you tell me in a dream what that is?'
Red.
Hermione exhaled a frustrated sigh. 'Can you tell me some other way?'
Green.
Of course, this was the limitation of using the Urim and Thummim she could not now ask him what that other way was. 'Is this Dark magic, what I'm doing?'
Red.
'Am I speaking to your soul right now?'
Green.
'Could I Summon a soul into these marbles, if I wanted to?'
Red.
'Is a copy of the Ars Magica in this house right now?'
Red.
'Is your journal in this house right now?'
Red.
She had been keeping a tally of how many times she drew green and how many times she drew red; so far she had drawn green six times and red seven times exactly what she would have expected according to probability. She heaved another deep sigh, and one of the candles guttered out.
'Does your journal contain any notes on the material in the Ars Magica?' she asked.
Green. Now the tally was seven and seven.
'Would those notes be useful to me in my research for Teach?'
Green. Eight and seven.
Another candle guttered out. Hermione glanced at it in alarm. 'Is what I am doing right now, with the marbles, dangerous?'
Red.
'Are you making the candles go out?' She was shivering now with apprehension.
Green.
The final candle flickered; by the light of its wavering flame, Hermione caught sight of a shadow forming in front of her by the armchair. The light was suddenly snuffed out, making her gasp; the dark figure of a man standing before her was illuminated only by the muted glow of the furnace in the corner. The figure moved; fingers, unmistakable in their calloused gentleness, stroked her cheek tenderly.
Hermione screamed.
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What a story. I am blazing through it, shamefully jumped over the Aristotle soul quotes to read about Severus, but will catch my breath now, re-read calmly, and remember to watch details, not just plot. Gods. obssessive Love.
I always did want a reason to read Avicenna, being interested in herbs, gardens and the Moorish-Spanish times in European History, Al- Andalus. a time of true scientific curiosity and partial tolerance.
Our times could learn something from those inquiring minds. Why do labels have to strip people from feeling tolerance with each other ? well, It is wonderfully written , and am truly delighted you have not stopped writing it.
Wow, this story is so intense. Usually I dislike stories that have anything to do with spirits or the afterlife or the soul. This story put the aforementioned in an entirely different perspective for me. I truly hope that this story gets finished sometime.
So glad you've come back to this story. This is a great updates. I'll keep my eyes on the lookout for more.
Oh man, I got so excited when this popped up on my alerts. You did not disappoint.
Very interesting story! Thanks for the update!
An update after all this time was such a welcome sight! It's such a good story!
Events in this chapter are really ominous though. Bet it's that Edward Teach--he's always given me the creeps.
Catching up with this story--so compelling, I'm not reviewing much. I really like the continued closeness of Harry and Ron and Hermione. A lot of stories have them drifting apart right away, and that doesn't seem all that likely to me, given what they've shared. Snape's manifestation and the small boy and the brown man all have me a bit puzzled, but I'm sure they and their roles will become clearer with time. I'm also a bit shocked by the rule-abiding Hermione's willingness to push ethical boundaries here. But what really gave me pause in this chapter was the furnace. If it was in the hidden basement, how did she think the house was heated? How would she fill it with fuel?
I am also very glad to see this story. It is very original and just keeps getting more interesting. I jumped on the update as soon as it hit but shamefully didn't review right away for which I apologize. Love the story. Best wishes, Kat
Response from GryffKat (Reviewer)
PS: I love the song titles for chapters. You even hit one of my desert island discs in there.
Response from GryffKat (Reviewer)
PS: I love the song titles for chapters. You even hit one of my desert island discs in there.
Lovely to see this! It's been one of the fics on my wistful list--unfinished fics so good I can't help but reread from time to time and check to see if there is anything new. And Lo! (please forgive the Tolkien moment) here is chapter 17 with more to come. Rubs hands gleefully and jumps right back in.
Oh my God, you're finally back! I had already given up hope on the story being continued, and I'm really happy to be proved wrong! Wonderful chapter and great story, keep up the good work! Cheers and welcome back ;D Luiza
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
OMG, I only posted the new chap about 2 seconds ago! Thank you so much for coming back to read some more, you rock. :-D
Response from Moon999 (Reviewer)
uhsahsuhsuhs Oh, I guess I was just excited ;D Are updates going to be more regular now or is real life getting on the way? If you need any help or a beta or anything you can ask me (even though I'm not a native ;P).Luiza
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
OMG, I only posted the new chap about 2 seconds ago! Thank you so much for coming back to read some more, you rock. :-D
Response from Moon999 (Reviewer)
uhsahsuhsuhs Oh, I guess I was just excited ;D Are updates going to be more regular now or is real life getting on the way? If you need any help or a beta or anything you can ask me (even though I'm not a native ;P).Luiza
I come back to this so many times and I'm always incredibly disappointed that it's abandoned. Is there any chance at all of you letting someone beta the finished copy?
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
It's back, there's a new chapter up! Come read, I promise not to suck and abandon it again. :-)
The situation with Cheat was never resolved. I don't trust him to keep this information to himself, and Hermione seems to feel no compunction to do the right thing and let Kingsley know that they had a falling out and he has left angery and in possession of this knowledge. She needn't tell Kingsley exactly what their falling out had to do with. She could even say he was afraid that she had been tempted to keep Snape in his body permanently. Kingsley wouldn't automatically assume sex to be the only good reason to bring back Severus Snape. From his point of view there could have been many other motives. Snape is a hero, an Order Memeber and a friend. He would understand the temptation but would also trust Hermione would never actually do such a thing.Hermione and Kingsley stupidly had never really investigated Cheat's personal integrity when they allowed him to sponser this project and know everything it entailed. That seems odd considering what they had just endured from Voldemort. How did they know Cheat didn't desire eternal live himself? Have only the short sighted people survived the war? Cheat's open ending, I suppose, is in keeping with the genre. There have been many horror movies that have left an open ending, adding to the present fear the knowiedge these horrible things could be rediscovered, and all Hell could break loose again. Also, most horror movies need individuals making stupid and short sighted choices to create the perfect storm for dangerous outcomes. Everyone in the audience is yelling "Don't go down there!" or "How stupid could you be!" Well done!
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Thanks for the 'well done' but the story isn't finished! I've just put a new chapter up—come back and read it, please. :-)
Hermione, Hermione, Hermione...Now what's going to happen to you. I'm sure Cheat won't be finanancing your research any longer. Why didn't you destroy the everything as he asked, after Cheat was back? Will you do it now? I doubt it. How do you know he hasn't gone right back to your house and stolen it to be used for nefarious purposes? You are the lamest Hermione I've known. You should be sharp as a tack and figuring out this stuff before it happens. Are you just so traumatized by the war that you've lost your edge?
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Lamest Hermione ever? :-)
This feels wrong. Totally wrong. It isn't like Hermione to be so foolhearty. That's why she wanted Harry to destroy the Prince's book. Her Gryffindore impulsivity must be ruling her. I don't like this. I hope I'm wrong and nothing bad happens to Severus. It might be good if Cheat never gets back into a body, I think. Now, how to remove him from the earth relm? Command him into the veil, I think. She never really checked out why he was so facinated with Serius' death. He's too good to be true. Too rich, too generous, too seemingly benign and too handsome. I think Cheat wants Hermione to make him a horcrux. Who is he going to kill to get himself torn to make a piece for the horcrux? This is Dark Magic. This is the stuff of Voldemort. Snape did it, but I sincerely doubt he enlisted a dead soul to go into his body. That isn't at all like him. I know HE isn't this foolhearty. And it sounds like Hermione has been shagging Cheat. But it doesn't sound like she's in love with him. It doesn't seem like Hermione to be this easy to influence. I'm missing something. How could she continue shagging Cheat in Severus' house? Doesn't Hermione see that she has fallen for the same ethical lies that allowed Snape to take The Mark, to his ever lasting despair? I truely hope this is what Severus wants Hermione to do so that he can speak to her. I hope she remembers she loves him. She is out of control right now. (or under control) Too bad Harry doesn't know what she's up to. I think he would try to stop her. He wouldn't exploit Severus Snape this way, and I don't think that when it came down to it, he would ever want Hermione to try to actually make a Horcrux and that is where this is headed, I am pretty sure. I don't think this is what Kingsley had in mind when he allowed her to do this either.
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Hermione is too wrapped up in discovering new magic to be cautious. And yes, I think Harry would stop her too, which is why she's not telling him what she's doing. I started writing this story originally because I thought Horcruxes seemed like only half an idea—something maybe JK didn't think through too deeply—and I wanted to explore the implications of being able to do something like fiddle with one's soul.
Are you going to finish writing this story...Just curious on how it's going to end.
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Thanks for your message! Yes, I'm going to finish it—now, in fact. It's been a long hiatus, but I'm finally back in the writing groove. :-)
This is such an amazing story--so engrossing and original!I sincerely hope that you have not abandoned it, although I note the last update is more than a year ago...Please let us know your intentions. Thanks.
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
That long ago? Good grief, it doesn't feel like it's been that long! Thank you for leaving such a nice review. I promise the story is not abandoned, just on hiatus while I sort my life out. It is actually finished, but unedited, unbeta'd, and I'm still not entirely happy with the ending. I promise, though, that it will not die a quiet death! :-)
I was devastated when I realized there were no more chapters. I'm anxious for another one and can not wait until you have one out :)
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
I'm so sorry, my darling! There has been a long delay in updating because of RL, but the next chapter is in the works. I'm so glad you have enjoyed the story thus far. Thanks for the review! :-)
Wow, this is an intriguing story. So odd and different from any other I've read--it just hooks the reader right in and doesn't let go! I can't wait to read more! Do update soon.
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you are enjoying it. My apologies for the long delay between updates - RL has been a trial of late. The next chapter is in the works, and I hope to have it finished soon. :-)
I've just get irremediably hooked on your story.I truly hope it isn't abandoned. It's wonderful!Keep writting, please!
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
It's not abandoned, just coming along slowly due to the end of the school year barrelling down! Thank you so much for the review - I will update soon!
I wonder if Draco wants a permanent break? Will Severus stay in his body permanently?
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Well, that remains to be seen. Thank you for the review; sorry there has been so much delay in posting more chapters! RL takes its toll...
smile - where in the world will it go next - thanks for the grand work!!!
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Thank you, darling! What a lovely review. I hope to have more posted very soon. :-)
Oh wow... awesome story and brilliantly written! Can't wait for more!
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Thank you so much! I received your email as well - I'm so glad you enjoy the story and want to read more. And I will have more, I promise, and hopefully soon! :-)
NO! I can't bloddy believe it!so that was why Draco was so excited by hearing about the existence and effectiveness of Snapes potion!!I would never have guessed.he wants to be dead. crazy. his body would move around but not with his soul.hm. what he had experienced the first time his soul was distracted from his body must have been something wonderful. But it didn't show on his face. other from the experiences we see on dead peoples face, where the observants often described peace, beauty, calmness, anything. but not what Hermione had seen.that is interesting.Does that have to do with him not being "really" dead by dying natural death?I mean, he can return any time.And what about Teach. He still is a ticking bomb.When and to whom will he tell or sell his story.And is Snape right. The potion as a weapon for a corrupt, terrorising tyranning governement?to really bring back ghosts of the past?to use their knowledge etc. sort of secret weapon.but Hermione is right. the asked soul can refuse cooperation, but on the other hand, a much crueler soul can creep into the body. waah.well, for the moment it is Snape. So there are 3 happy people. I guess.And Draco really had the decency not to return during love making. He is a gentleman after all *gg*They had to wait for their moment for so long.And I think Snape can be content. This time it is at least the body of a young Slytherin, and not a totaly unknown american wizzard.must be hard work for Hermioe to make believe it is not Draco standing in front of her. but on the other hand, it seems to be quite easy. but for how long???
Response from salvamea (Reviewer)
at this rate the potion will be used up very quickly, I wonder?
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
I love your reviews with a warm, fuzzy, loving love. :-D You always pick out the interesting things! And your commentary is so inspired. As to the potion - they are only using three drops at a time (rather like Veritaserum), so it'll be a while before they run out. To date, only 9 drops have been used...Thank you so much for the review!!! :-D
Thank you for the update! Another great chapter. Thank you for writing!
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Lovely! Thank you so much for reviewing! :-)
wow! what now? besides another cup of tea! great update. thanks so much
Response from julymorning (Author of Soul Man)
Thank you so much! 'What now' coming up soon, I hope... :-)