It's a good idea to have written this that way. And you're absolutely right. Having put the epilogue at the biginning would've ruined the suspense. I'm just curious about the name of the French hospital "Charlotte Duerre". Where did you find this? Was she some kind of famous french doctor or you just created her for the story?

I liked that quite a bit. 

Lovely!!! But then, so are all of your stories.  I was so happy to see a story from you in the queue when I logged on. This was really nice, and you were right to keep the epilogue at the end. And this line was really funny: “Fine, I’m a virgin. Well, technically, I don’t think that’s true anymore. " That just seems like such a Hermione statement. <g>

wonderful fic, i like the originality, while i was reading i thought  please  don´t tell me it is a one shot!, but the epilogue was just right were it should be. 

Reading the story backwards was kind of hard to begin with but it was a very good read! Great job!

Good to read a one shot that isn't just well written and thought out, but has an interesting storytelling format too. Allthough I could "Waargh" at them for not having fluffy-flower-sexy-paradise-thingies right after the Shrieking Shack incident. But then again, don't think that would have given us a great story :)

I have not seen the Seinfeld episode you mentioned, but the technique you applied to relate your story was easy to follow and I enjoyed the telling.

Pearel, what a heartfelt story. I liked the format a lot better than I thought that I would. I hope that since we are seeing a fic from you, that means that you are feeling good. Hugs, Muggle Mom

Loved it. Thanks. Stories like this are all too rare. Great job.

Oh, wow, I loved the format of this fic. Thanks for a fantastic story!

I like your format, how you have it in reverse. It is different, and entertaining. Lovely!

Severus, you idiot, it's about time you start to fight for what's yours!Great story, a lot less confusing than I thought it would be, being backwards and all.

WOW Pearle, Excellent story, MORE, MORE!!!  Have missed you and your stories...Glad you are back!

Lovely, I liked it!!! Wanted to kick Severus's ass, but I loved it:-))

How creative of you ...it was a pleasure to read!

I enjoyed this very much.  The format is interesting and fun to read.  It's always nice to see a new story from you (as well as new chapters for WIP's).  I hope that this is a sign that you've been feeling well. 

I really like this story. It made me happy. Great job!