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Potions Under Duress Hook, Line and Sink Her
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Hook, Line and Sink Her

LaiksMarei

8 Reviews   |   8 Ratings, 0 Likes, 25 Favorites )

Humor Romance post-HBP/HBP compliant Potions Under Duress 3,401 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Kingsley Shacklebolt Severus Snape

Double talk leads to double pleasure for a certain Potions Master.

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Chapter 1: Hook, Line and Sink Her


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LaiksMarei

Member Since 2006  |  7 Stories  |  Favorited by 19  |  86 Reviews Written  |  112 Review Responses

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Reviews for Hook, Line and Sink Her

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10/10

bluecamosis

DUDE!!! I can't believe I just read that! You naughty wordsmith. No really it was done in a way that didn't make me thing that Hermione was a lot younger than Snape. Good job. Keep this up, and you may have me convinced. lol

Response from LaiksMarei (Author of Hook, Line and Sink Her)

Dude, I am so ready to pull you into this fandom.  You are so close.  ;)Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I am so glad you liked it.

9/10

trinitynyx

i like, just wish it was longer. that would have awesome

Response from LaiksMarei (Author of Hook, Line and Sink Her)

I wish it could have been longer as well, but I was under a time crunch for an exchange.  I am pleased you enjoyed it.

10/10

ubiquirk

I love how cracky the double entendres got - if you've got to use them, might as well make them funny!  Kingsley as a framing device is also nicely done.  And the title!  Perfect.

Response from LaiksMarei (Author of Hook, Line and Sink Her)

Thank you so very much, ubi.  I could not have done it without you.  :D

0/10

simulacrum

wonderful!  and I love your use of Kingsley.  all of the characters seem very real and full-fleshed.

Response from LaiksMarei (Author of Hook, Line and Sink Her)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  I am pleased you enjoyed Kingsley.  :)

0/10

macropis

Very nice!  One word struck me as strange (I sew with silk alot)-- raw silk is coarse and nubby and generally feels like burlap!  Silk charmeuse might be a better descriptor.

Response from LaiksMarei (Author of Hook, Line and Sink Her)

I was actually going for the nubby feel and low sheen look of raw silk as a reference to her skin. I pictured her flesh pebbled with goosebumps and having a semi-rough texture. Hermione does not strike me as a gossamer type. I appreciate your input.

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I am glad you enjoyed it.

0/10

mosey

The Howlingmojo? Funny that I have grown to epic proportions, apparently!And your story, was yet again, delightful! Love,Mojo

Response from LaiksMarei (Author of Hook, Line and Sink Her)

But you and your art is indeed epic.  :)

I am truly pleased you enjoyed the story, and I hope you will continue to do so for many reads to (hopefully) come.

10/10

Arachnae

This was so cute! Bravo!!

Response from LaiksMarei (Author of Hook, Line and Sink Her)

Thank you very much!

9/10

Morganabythesea

Loved it! With the possible exception of gratuitous sex scenes.Thanks for writing a great story.Jacque

Response from LaiksMarei (Author of Hook, Line and Sink Her)

Thank you for reading and reviewing.  I was so very close to attemtping the full-on smut, but I chickened out at the last minute.  ;)

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