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Moments of Insanity
Losille164 Reviews | 6.84/10 (164 Ratings, 0 Likes, 129 Favorites )
Ten years after the final battle, many things have changed considerably for our favorite witch and wizard. Severus becomes Headmaster of Hogwarts. Hermione has recently acquired Flourish and Blotts with the help of the wealthy Potters. Perchance two bibliophiles could meet and form a relationship over a good read, or will it take Severus' "moment of insanity" to bring them together?
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Thats so cool!!!
I cant wait for the chapter in which Thea will be asking "can Miss Hermione be my mummy?" lol
I love this story!
-KarlaMarie
Response from Losille (Author of Moments of Insanity)
Soon enough! Thanks for the review!
What a wonderful story! You've caught me in your trap. I am bookmarking this so I don't miss a chapter. Thank you!
Response from Losille (Author of Moments of Insanity)
Thank you so much! I can only hope you continue to enjoy!
I like the idea of the story. I just wish that Hermione had been introduced in the chapter. Hope you update soon.
Response from Losille (Author of Moments of Insanity)
All the Hermione you ever wanted in Chapter 1! Thanks!
lovely beginning to an interesting read. This is getting bookmarked! I love little Thea.
Response from Losille (Author of Moments of Insanity)
Thanks so much!
Awww, this is a sweet and fluffy start, and I enjoyed it very much. I'm looking forward to more.
Response from Losille (Author of Moments of Insanity)
More cotton candy ahead! Thanks!
Very promising. I rather like stories where Snape is a father, so that doesn't bother me at all. Besides, this is set "after events." :)
Response from Losille (Author of Moments of Insanity)
Thanks so much, my dear. It means so much to me to hear from amazing writers like you!
I'm curious to see where this heads. And there's nothing wrong with a fluffy bunny!
Response from Losille (Author of Moments of Insanity)
After some intense thought, I too have decided there is nothing wrong with a fluffy bunny, even if the fluff does molt off once and a while! Thank you!
An intriguing start, and I look forward to reading more.
Response from Losille (Author of Moments of Insanity)
Thank you!
great story so far, you need to write more so i can read it!
I love this story!Thea is such a sweety and I'm glad that Hermione helps her to loose up a bit - Severus is not a bad father (I like it very much how you describe him), but flobberworms-stories... :)I hope you will update soon and I'm looking forward to what will happen next!I'm very curious how good she will be as a teacher!
Lovely, thank you for the update! I have been waiting to find out where this one would take me. The pygmy puff and the bunny slippers! Stormy's missing pet. Do I get my 100 points?
I'd love to see a continuation of this story. It's quite well written, and the idea behind it is brilliant.
I'd love to see a continuation of this story. It's quite well written, and the idea behind it is brilliant.
I apologize for not reviewing regularly. I am enjoying this story. The dynamics between Hermione and Snape are intriguing, and I like the way you've portrayed Severus' relationship with Thea. It would have been very easy to have written something treacle-y that had him completely changed by fatherhood. The fact that you show us how some of his foibles colour his relationship with his child, even inadvertently, is refreshing. It's sweet and realistic at once.
Wait a minute. Why is she taking such an interest in Snape's social life, or lack thereof?! Is this a roundabout way of asking him out? Hmmmm. This should be an interesting little shopping expedition.
Now that was certainly a colorful chapter! An unexpected red flash from Thea, a decidedly green-eyed monster rearing up in Snape and a possible embarrassed blush from Hermione. Why, oh why did Thea lose control of her magic? When did Hermione decide to go in for a casual fling? What will Snape do with this new information about Hermione and Kingsley?
~Rushes off to the next chapter.~
Thea loved both of them equally. Now the only problem was pushing them together so they could all love each other.Oh, my! That is quite the little Slytherin plan she has cooked up there. Hermione made it her goal to make him see her as a mature, capable woman.I do believe he's already doing that! Well, certainly he's noticed the 'woman' part.~Snickers evilly.~
She had not even started teaching yet, and things were already getting strange. It did not bode well.Oh, I think it bodes quite well. Things are moving along very nicely. Of course, it might help if Hermione would stop to think about just how many enemies Snape has and just how easy it is to harm a little girl. Who can blame Snape for being paranoid about it? Still, poor little Thea does seem to need company.
It sounds like Harry's got some explaining to do! It should be all kinds of fun aving Shacklebolt around. Maybe even a little potential rivalry for Hermione? Or perhaps just some imagined rivalry on Snape's part? Snape's certainly noticing a number of interesting new things about the supposed bane of his existence. The Black Cloud had not yet appeared by eleven,You crack me up!
That he felt guilty for using his daughter’s innocence and gullibility to get into Hermione’s good graces—not that he really wanted to be a part of Hermione’s good graces? Oh, you just keep telling yourself that, Snape. I saw you noticing that shapely ankle...It seems that Hermione and Snape are reevaluating each other and finding out new and interesting things. It also seems that little Thea is bound and determined to force them into each other's company. I really, really like Thea. I hope she gets her way.
very good story. I'm dying to read the rest of it!!! Your writing is, well I like to call it, undetectable. What I mean is that when I read I don't think about anything but the story. Often when I read fanfiction even if the grammar is fine and there aren't a lot of typos there are words used repetitively or sometimes big words used when the writer is clueless about the meaning or a word will be used that isn't quite the right word given the context. So the writing itself becomes distracting and I can't continue reading. When I get into a story and don't think about the writing I know it's pretty well written. Then when the actual story is interesting or fun it's like icing on the cake! :)
Response from Losille (Author of Moments of Insanity)
I have been away in my own little world for far too long and promise to have a new chapter out as soon as possible, but I had to stop in and respond to my reviewers.Thank you so much for such a lovely review. It means a lot to me to get thoughtful reviews like yours. I hope you continue to enjoy!
Whee! I'm so very glad to see more of this up, I was really quite enchanted with this fic and missed seeing updates! Poor Hermione is quite out of her element, but she'll adjust!
I don't think I've commented on your fic before. Shame on me. I like the way you portray Snape as a father, and I felt a bit sorry for him when he had to watch Thea and Hermione walk away.
Response from Losille (Author of Moments of Insanity)
Thanks!
I like how Hermione thinks of her boss as "the Black Cloud". Pleased to see Kingsley as DADA professor, since most SS/HG fics I read don't have him teaching @ Hogwarts after the V-War. Is Kingsley also Slytherin in canon?
Response from Losille (Author of Moments of Insanity)
I looked at the HP Lexicon, and it never said what house he was in. I may have missed it, but I don't know. I just feel that to keep up the charade with Sirius vs. the Ministry, he had to be a cunning Slytherin.
I find just reading about all the commitments that Hermione has shouldered to be daunting... makes me wonder if she just doesn't know how to say No, or does she actually think she can swallow everything she's bitten off. Looking forward to the kids showing up and how Hermione handles teaching, being Deputy Head, Thea's demands for attention and Snape just being Snape.
Response from Losille (Author of Moments of Insanity)
Thanks for the review!