pls add a reader whinge of the same nature. I am a newbie in hp fandom, i just wasted to tell you that u and plaidpooka are my favorites. Kudos on the sheer concentrationof action- i mean wow!! In the morning she goes out to meet her secret admirer and the very same night, she is celebrating with her husband! talk about a really good day!

I enjoyed your story; but quit worrying about whether or not a story is canon or not.  The AU stories are the most interesting and  original; the canon stories are mostly just rehashes of the books.  Who knows what JKR has planned for Book Seven; I am doubting that we will like it.  Her first five books were great; I'm waiting to find out what she does with Book Seven.  It may not be good.  In the event that it is't, I hope that writers won't quit writing these fanfics.

Whew!  Wrapped that all up right quick.  And yes, I did recognize parts of it.  But borrowing from yourself has no penalties.  ~

I just can't believe he gets her all completely aroused again and then he brings up the subject of collecting her virgin blood.  And, yes. wouldn't we all like our very own Snape?  And if the instruction manual is missing, I'm willing to experiment... carefully.  Or use the one in this chapter which is excellent and very revealing.  ~

I wonder what that other gift was that he bought in the jewelry store?  I especially liked when he showed up unannounced in the mirror portal and was absolutely stunned by her standing there in the silver nightie with the slit up to here.  She has alot of power over him and not a clue yet what to do with it.  ~

Wow, the Hogwarts Charter, the Castle Wards and DD's tinkley objects have them eloping almost faster than I can say 'Marriage Law.'  LOL   ~

That was fun to read.  You do such a marvelous job writing these encounters.  I am surprised that a few minutes of being blindfolded, her loosey-goosey 'rules' and his explanation of consensual games merits a BDSM warning.  I liked Hermione's quick-witted responses to Harry which harkened back to Umbridge's trip to the Dark Forest in OOP.  Time to turn the page.  I just love reading something where I don't have to wait and wait for another installment.  ~

Ah, yes, now all those pieces fall into place and the reasons are clear.  No time for a long review--I've got to read more.  ~

I don't understand what has caused Severus to get in such a rush for an unveiling.  Perhaps the next chapter will make it clearer(?).  ~

That was certainly spy-sneaky standing behind her while she reads his letter.  But it left him in the ironic position of having to answer questions about himself as a third party.  At the end he laughed briefly along with the readers.  Cool!  I do wonder how he'll go about revealing his true identity to her.  My curiousity is also growing about the nature of the curse he is supposed to save her from.  ~

You're off to a good start.  I'm in heaven for having found one of your stories I haven't read to help me survive the summer heat.  Interesting that Severus felt compelled to suck on his own injured digit, even knowing the effect.  I'm looking forward to seeing if he follows DD's advice and what of himself he will reveal to her, if anything.  ~

I really liked this story.  I enjoy your writing very much.  Thank you.

Hi, LOTM,it’s always a pleasure to read something from you. Although the main plot developed very fast – only one day for their first meeting, their Gretna Green marriage, the wedding night, and although SS was quite a very bit OOC here (can you say `quite a very bit`?), too soft for me in the end, with his everlasting apologies for his crude behaviour, but you warned us enough about that before and assumingly you can’t always write the same Snape, that would be boring (for you, anyway); as I said in the beginning, it’s very pleasurable to read your writing.

What I liked most here - besides your absolutely wonderful lemons, but you surely know that you are quite gifted with them, you simply got the “right feeling” with it, the right “speed”, it’s never awkward, but always highly erotic, highly imaginative, inspiringly – um, where was I? Yes, what I liked most here was the “Granger-Snape-Manual”. What a fantastic fun! So very amusing!!

Thanks a lot for the entertaining time!

Yay!Just what I needed to cheer me up.The Lady strikes again.

That was sweet and sappy. I thoroughly enjoyed it, Lotm. It was interesting to see a few aspects from In Annulo scattered around. A fun little read. Thanks for posting it! :)

SUPER DUPER!!!I really loved it.

*giggle* Loved it....I needed some fluff ...well done!

Great ending!  I loved it!

Fantastic, I really enjoyed this - thank you for posting even though HBP crushed it!!

*Dies* At first when I heard they had to marry I really didn't think that would go over well with Hermione, but who knew? *Giggles*

*Drools* Wonderful... Simply wonderful as always my dear!

LOTM, I love both your tales and I've also read your "For Someone Special" be he canon or be he occsnape, one of your snape's is worth two in the blind. 

I agree with your whigne! I want one too!!!  OMG I lovew my husband, but lets face it anyone still "in love" at this stage is either faking it, or has found a way to have their cake and eat it too---  okay now i want Snape cake, thanks a lot Lady!

Okay, I love this fic.  I just had to tell you, I found Hermione's earrings.  The woman riding a moon ones.http://www.azuregreen.com/Jewelry/Pendants_&_Charms/JWOMF:_Woman_Facing_Moon_Pendant/Page_9/JWOMF.html

Loved it in, every bit of it, including the completely OCC severus.  i dont think ive ever laughed harder than i did reading the Manuals. I want my very own Granger-Snape!