*whew* Is it hot in here, or is it me? Beautifully written, and I especially loved your portrayal of Severus. Not fluffy, but enough sweetness to make me sigh.

Okay, I needed something to read and thought I give this a try. The first chapters were really hot. And I'm dying to see Harry and Ron suffer. Oh yes, I'm evil, I admit it. So the next chapter should be very interesting, I hope.

I think I have you to blame for my "Evil Harry" fic.  I haven't seen it done very much and decided to put my own spin on the idea.  I can't wait to see Harry and Ron get it in this story!  It's wrong and evil and I'm loving it.  Not to mention it's spawning plot bunnies!

I almost forgot about this story. It seems like it has been quite some time since you updated,  but I am glad you did. this is wonderful so far and I truly hope to see more of it soon

Man, for some reason, I don't know that Snape will be there waiting for her. Did I misunderstand about him seeing her getting snatched? Hope her knight is there. LOL But, fricking Harry / Ron. They've got some nerve, haven't they?

Teehee. I've finally just come round to read this chapter (the one I'd missed) and love it. Great bloody prats is right! I'm glad that Snape saw her abduction at least and didn't just go brood, thinking she'd left him and had a change of heart. :)

Oh damn. I hunted this story down (saw a mention of there being more of it somewhere else on Ashwinder and so tracked it through google) to be able to read the rest, and it ends HERE?!

Please update soon. 

Mother of all fish.... this is quite a dish... and I have never hated Ron and Harry so much.... but that's okay... Severus is still as delicious as ever... and Oh so much more.... what is the word.... er.... gentle... no.... dominant.... no.... hmmmm.... gently in control - yes that is it... wasn't looking for a word but a phrase.... Looking forward to more!

Please tell me you have some sort of horrible punishment waiting for these two bigger than life idiots!!!! It's a good thing no one else was home when I read this chapter!! They would have run into the room in alarm, tofind out why I was yelling and cursing my fool head off!!!  I know Hermione is very resourceful, but I hope Severus finds her and allows his dark side to take control just long enough to teach the stupid arses a lesson they won't EVER forget!! Excellent as always!!!

Gah!

Evil!

Stopping there... 

Can't wait to read abotu what she does. 

Fetch an auror indeed!  Hopefully she'll let Severus deal with them.  It's not like he's not experienced in the darker side of things and I'm sure he'd think of interesting ways to make them pay!Brilliant story and thank you so much for updating.

I'd kick them both so hard in the balls that they would come out of their throats.LOL, I swear she really needs to give them a good hexing.

What a sad and frustrating chapter! I'm fuming here!!  How dare they! And with Hermione not having her wand to defend herself. And she really shouldn't feel guilty towards Severus for having to endure Harry's kiss etc... Silly girl ^^ What will happen next? That Auror sounded like a good idea. Or some personal retaliation.I do hope you will update soon, because it is such a great story... and a very evil cliffie!! Thanks!

I was hoping that this appearing on Ashwinder meant you were ready to update.Is this the chapter you weren't happy with?  If so, I can spot what's wrong - no naked, hot and sweaty Snape

I'm glad that the boys seem to be letting down their guard, though it doesn't seem very ... Hermione ... to be depending on being rescued, instead of using that brilliant mind of hers to get herself out of this situation.  Rather wimpy of her.  Then again, she's been abused by the boys all this time, so maybe she just needs to remind herself of the brave dame she is capable of being.  Either way, it's an enthralling and very good story, and thanks for updating!

MOTHER OF.... Oh hi... how are you??? Anyways, this is a really good story so far and I cant wait for updates!!!

Can't wait to read the rest!  I always did like this story!!

harry and ron need there asses kicked

*Sighs* I'm happy to of read this chapter, but I'm rather sad as well.  Now it's going to be awhile for another update, and I'm dying to know if Severus is going to be there. If he's not, I'm hoping Hermione will trick them into getting her wand back, hexing them until the can't get it up (ever again!), and then returning to Severus. Yes, that sounds nice. If I were Hermione, I'd be angry enough to kill with my bare hands. But she's a bit nicer than I am, I believe (curse of red hair: major temper). Anyway, despite the fact that I think it's going to be awhile until another update, I am going to ask (nicely ). So, please, update again very soon!

I love the story. Please update soon!

Go Hermione, she can be so Slytherin when she wants to.  Lovely.  --  B

well what next?

Wellllllllllllllllll done! Now. Go write the next chapter. Right now.

Wow, the best smut around.  A very intriguing Severus.  Thank you for writing.

Gosh! Now I'm feeling all hot under the collar. Lucky girl, to find the right man just when she needed to.