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Potions Under Duress Always
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1: Keeping An Eye on Crookshanks

2: It's The Little Things That Matter

3: Sweet Dreams Are Made of Thee

4: What I Meant To Say

5: When The Rain Falls

6: The Grass is Always Greener...

7: What Makes You Different Makes You Beautiful

8: Beauty is in the Eye of the Beholder

9: Epilogue: Who Needs the World?

Always

themistresssnape

140 Reviews   |   140 Ratings, 0 Likes, 129 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 15,466 Words 9 Chapters Complete
Severus Snape Hermione Granger Harry Potter Ronald Weasley

Sequel to "I'll Be There For You." Suggested that you read that one first! Rated for later chapters.

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Chapters (9)

Chapter 1: Keeping An Eye on Crookshanks

Chapter 2: It's The Little Things That Matter

Chapter 3: Sweet Dreams Are Made of Thee

Chapter 4: What I Meant To Say

Chapter 5: When The Rain Falls

Chapter 6: The Grass is Always Greener...

Chapter 7: What Makes You Different Makes You Beautiful

Chapter 8: Beauty is in the Eye of the Beholder

Chapter 9: Epilogue: Who Needs the World?


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themistresssnape

Member Since 2005  |  12 Stories  |  Favorited by 197  |  72 Reviews Written  |  917 Review Responses

After many years away, and many forays into other fandoms, I'm back to my roots. The Granger-Snapes!

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10/10

breastlady

I know this story was written years ago, and I've marked it read. I may have answered the question at the end of this chapter way back then, I don't remember. However, anyone who doesn't know "As you wish" is from the Princess Bride isn't worth their salt as a romantic fan fiction reader. I've must have seen it 15 times, at least. A long, long time ago when my last baby was born, I used to take her 5 year old sister to a one dollar movie theater and dinner every Thursday night. It was her night with mommy. There weren't very many movies she could see so we saw the same movie week after week until it left the theater then we bought it. Now I'm a grandma and both my daughters have sons. I still love that movie. Regarding this story, it seems like 7 years is a long time for Hermione to take to realize her watcher is Severus. But, that's the story line and I mind it not. It is sweet and show his devotion. That is what really matters.  

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

I think, in a way, she always had an inkling that it was Severus. But she didn't say anything because it seemed so important to him to be anonymous for just a while. I think it was just as important to her to feel that he was there that it was for him to be "invisible" to her.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

I think, in a way, she always had an inkling that it was Severus. But she didn't say anything because it seemed so important to him to be anonymous for just a while. I think it was just as important to her to feel that he was there that it was for him to be "invisible" to her.

0/10

Ljpjcg

A very sweet story, but dang!  And I enjoyed reding it very much. But dang!

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

But dang! I'm sorry!

Response from Ljpjcg (Reviewer)

No! Don't be sorry. As heartbreaking as the epilogue is, all the chapters brought me joy. 

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

But dang! I'm sorry!

Response from Ljpjcg (Reviewer)

No! Don't be sorry. As heartbreaking as the epilogue is, all the chapters brought me joy. 

0/10

Lightening

Love the princess bride reference

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

I absolutely love that story, and that film. It seemed perfect for the two of them!

10/10

AlanaVawn

The "as you wish" is from The Princess Bride, a very good movie. I like your writing style, and I plan on reading all of your works with Harry Potter, and maybe the original fiction as well.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Correct! Take 50 points... unless you're from Gryffindor. Then take 5. But thanks for reading no matter what house you're in! ~The Mistress

10/10

Morsmordre

I don't think Snape is really OOC here, I mean we never saw him in love did we? If he had  been married to Lily in the books he probably would have been like this, I think.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Thank you so much! I think so too. All of his time playing with two masters really hardened him, but I think he would have been like this had he had the chance to be in love. So sorry it took me so long to reply! ~The Mistress

0/10

maegwen

Oh my, I just cried and cried like a ninny. A beautiful story.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Thank you for the compliment, but I didn't mean to make you cry! ~The Mistress

0/10

sunny33

A bell. Good idea. :)

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Thank you! So sorry I haven't responded sooner, it's been a bit of a rough semester. Thanks for reading! ~The Mistress

0/10

sunny33

Do Ro and Harry know he has been going there for seven years ?

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

You'd be surprised what those two know... ~ The Mistress

0/10

Anijade

Truly touching, made me a little weepy I worried that the daughter might not feel as loved since he focused so much on his granddaughter

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Oh she had no trouble with that, I promise you. Thanks for reading! ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Oh she had no trouble with that, I promise you. Thanks for reading! ~The Mistress

0/10

Bettina

uh, that's a surprising epilogue and very sad for Severus. But then it is life. I loved the story, you're awonderful writer!

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Thanks so much!~The Mistress

0/10

kimjo2

wonderful story!  thanks

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Thanks so much! ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Thanks so much! ~The Mistress

0/10

rhiannonofthemoon

Such a sad, bittersweet ending, but beautiful all the same.  Thanks for sharing it.  ;)

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Thank you! ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Thank you! ~The Mistress

0/10

rhiannonofthemoon

It worked!  Yay!  First try, too - Snape is truly brilliant.  But how will being able to see change their relationship?

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

You must wait and see! ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

You must wait and see! ~The Mistress

0/10

rhiannonofthemoon

Oh, has he succeeded?  I wonder why it didn't occur to him earlier to create a cure.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Severus was so deeply in despair over what happened to her that his mind wasn't quite working up to par at the moment. ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Severus was so deeply in despair over what happened to her that his mind wasn't quite working up to par at the moment. ~The Mistress

0/10

rhiannonofthemoon

Ron didn't notice that she was in love?  What a dunce!Loving the story!

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Thank you for all your wonderful reviews! And I poke fun at Ron a lot, but I still love him! ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Thank you for all your wonderful reviews! And I poke fun at Ron a lot, but I still love him! ~The Mistress

0/10

rhiannonofthemoon

Very well-written lemon.  Yum.  :)And with the hundred degree weather we are having at the moment, a little rain sound very good.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Oh my goodness, I know! And it's worse when you're pregnant (like I am at the moment!) and have a little one who you have to chase around as he's just learning to crawl! ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Oh my goodness, I know! And it's worse when you're pregnant (like I am at the moment!) and have a little one who you have to chase around as he's just learning to crawl! ~The Mistress

0/10

rhiannonofthemoon

Wow, I had assumed that Hermione knew that he left the room.  She must have thought that he just kept very, very quiet?  I suppose Harry and Ron would have distracted her from thinking about it.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Yes, and it was so routine for her to sense Ron and Harry but not Severus. ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Yes, and it was so routine for her to sense Ron and Harry but not Severus. ~The Mistress

0/10

rhiannonofthemoon

What a beautiful scene!  Dancing and kissing in the summer rain.  Snape has changed a lot, hasn't he?.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

I loved writing this scene, as it's something I've always wanted to do! I don't think he's changed so much as just mellowed out a bit now that things are over. ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

I loved writing this scene, as it's something I've always wanted to do! I don't think he's changed so much as just mellowed out a bit now that things are over. ~The Mistress

0/10

rhiannonofthemoon

She couldn't give up her cat!  The bell was a good idea, though.This is a very sweet, WAFF fic.  Looking forward to seeing where you will take it.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Thank you for reading and for all of your great reviews! They really do feed the muse. And yes, I could not imagine Hermione without Crooks! ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Thank you for reading and for all of your great reviews! They really do feed the muse. And yes, I could not imagine Hermione without Crooks! ~The Mistress

0/10

rhiannonofthemoon

"As you wish" comes from the Princess Bride, of course!  I love that movie.  Points to Slytherin!What are they living on if neither has a job?

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Oh yes, then take 50! They are war heros, aren't they? And in my mind I thought the Wizarding world has something like disability payments like we have here in the states, when someone is unable to work they help take care of their living expenses. And I supposed that her parents would be helping too. Severus, of course, after living very frugally for so many years, has saved a small fortune at Gringotts. ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Oh yes, then take 50! They are war heros, aren't they? And in my mind I thought the Wizarding world has something like disability payments like we have here in the states, when someone is unable to work they help take care of their living expenses. And I supposed that her parents would be helping too. Severus, of course, after living very frugally for so many years, has saved a small fortune at Gringotts. ~The Mistress

9/10

CharmedForce

Just beautiful... though so sad that Hermione lived through so much to be taken by a car crash.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

I know, but at least she got her sight back and was able to give birth to a wonderful daughter and see her grow up! ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

I know, but at least she got her sight back and was able to give birth to a wonderful daughter and see her grow up! ~The Mistress

0/10

WriterMerrin

How beautiful and sad.  Writing can be such a powerful way to help though the bad times.  The epilog was lovely.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

I know, it's so theraputic. Thank you so much for reading! ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

I know, it's so theraputic. Thank you so much for reading! ~The Mistress

0/10

WriterMerrin

Oh, now I have happy tears in my eyes.  I guess I shouldn't be surprised that Severus would take it upon himself to cure her, but it is a wonderful surprise.  I forgot to mention in a previous chapter, but I found it quite telling that she hadn't been using her wand all that time.  So many wonderful details.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

I hate that I made you cry, but I hope they were tears of joy and compassion. Yes, Hermione had quite given up on her life as a witch until Severus showed up. ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

I hate that I made you cry, but I hope they were tears of joy and compassion. Yes, Hermione had quite given up on her life as a witch until Severus showed up. ~The Mistress

0/10

WriterMerrin

Oh, Severus' tears are so precious.  I like that Harry decided to be the voice of reason.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

I think after he gets his fits of passion out, Harry does have a very logical spirit. ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

I think after he gets his fits of passion out, Harry does have a very logical spirit. ~The Mistress

0/10

WriterMerrin

Hmm. I had thought that I had read this before, but I think I would have remembered a chapter like this.  I love both of their thoughts in this chapter.

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Thank you, and it's a huge compliment to have this chapter be so memorable for you. ~The Mistress

Response from themistresssnape (Author of Always)

Thank you, and it's a huge compliment to have this chapter be so memorable for you. ~The Mistress

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