Crookshanks needs a bell!

I'm so gladd you've decided to expand the story. 

I ended up crying my eyes out over your epilogue to this story.  I didn't pay much attention to the date that you finished this story, but I will be on the lookout for any future stories.  I'm a very much older reader, but am quite a fanatic fanfiction fan, especially stories about Snape and Hermione.  I can't picture Ron and Hermione together; it actually makes me squirm.  One thing about your story, I feel that seven years was a bit too long for H. not to have improved somewhat; she is too much of a fighter not to have done something to have improved her life.  I also wish that you had given her more than three years of happy life after regaining her vision.  On this website, I'm not sure how one gets notices of updates.  , I hope that your health has improved; it must have been a real drag to have been in hospital so long.   You are certainly one of the better writers of fanfiction that I have encountered.

excellent. sad, but excellent :)

Hi. thank you for this story. although sad that Hermione died I loved it. I didn't realy think Snape was that out of charaacter. I mean who knows what love can do to a person.

hi.  I don't think snape is that OOC I mean the circumstances are rather special and people in love can change drastically.

An Epilogue with a wedding or a praposal would be nice but not necessacary and could even be written seperately when you have more time.Elen

This is soooooooooooo great story! I read the one-shot a long time ago then and I love this sequel you made! I'm not going to be unhappy if you end here because I don't feel you need to continue it much more but it is up to you!Very great, indeed!

Oh, it's just lovely. I think if you would add a small epilogue showing us Harry / Ron reactions, that would be cool, but there's no pressure. I really enjoyed this story.

Epilogue.

An epilogue is definitely called for here. Brilliant story, enjoyed it thoroughly.

Her eyesight is back! Very nicely done.  I can see why you're toying with the idea of ending it here, it's a natural stop. But I'd love to read more...

I 'always' love SS/HG stories to go on and on, especially good ones ... but in fairness to your life at the moment, I'd agree, this could be a good stopping point; maybe an epilogue to wrap up any loose ends and round it out.

Hadn't realized what a cliffie you left us at until I went back to ch. 7 to remind myself of the last chapter. But being sick does kill the creativity flow! Hope you're feeling better. 

Hi,

I would like to see another chapter so that we can see what her friends do, and a little lemon maybe. lol. i really have injoyed this story it is great. thanks for writing it.

Oh i hope you are feeling better.

XOXOXO

I'd like to read an epilogue, even a short one, to tie up some lose ends, especially with Hermione's friends. Thanks for writing this story.

Hello!I've never reviewed before, but since this seems to be the end...It was really moving this last chapter, it could be over now and I wouldn't be (very) sad because it sounds right. Maybe when you have time, in some months, for instance, you could write about their future together, the others' reaction, etc... I know I would read it!xoxo

Excellent story! It's so beautiful. I hope you are doing better by the time you get this review. Im sorry you are sick, but hang in there. Best wishes on a very happy future!

sad ending. If I loved someone that much I'd go with them.

As You wish was a comment made by Snape to Albus Dumledore but Im not sure when. Maybe when Harry and Ron crashed the Ford Angliainto the whomping willow and Dumbledore dismissed him? BTW this story is so very sweet. I am truly glad you chose to write a sequel.

I love your story. When  in the end I find aut that Hermione died I was soo sade, bath soon recocoveryYou should bee indide proud

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I really liked the original "I'll be there for you". This continuation was just beautiful. Touching, wonderful, and just beautiful. Thank you for sharing your imagination with us.

oh wow what a touching story i loved the one shot as well.... very heartwarming loved this

*is crying* This story came up on 'random story' today and I'm so glad that it did.  You brought a wealth of emotions to light through your characters and think I'm in love with your Severus.  Lovely story. 

oooh, ooooh, OOOOOOH!! Pick me, pick me, me, me, me, MEEEEE!! *Waves hand in the air furiously*I know, Princess Bride, one of my favourites.Loving your work!

I can assure you that I enjoyed it immensely!

The scene in this chapter where Severus is describing the surroundings to Hermione and his subsequent tears have really moved me.  The despair and emotion are rolling off the screen in waves.  A wonderfully descriptive chapter and the development of their relationship is marvellous.  Your understanding and creative approach to Hermione's sightlessness is second to none and I applaud  the way you have the characters dealing with their interaction whilst encompassing the impact that Visual Impairment after trauma has on people both physically, emotionally and spiritually.  Kudos for you!  Blessings and a box of Kleenex!