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Be Careful What You Wish For

1: One

Be Careful What You Wish For

BulletTimeScully

16 Reviews   |   16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Smut Drabble/100-Word LDWS 636 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Bellatrix Lestrange Severus Snape

Be careful what you wish for... it might not turn out like you expect.

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BulletTimeScully

Member Since 2009  |  15 Stories  |  Favorited by 61  |  109 Reviews Written  |  284 Review Responses



There's not much to say, really. I'm a thirty year-old mother of three, married for seven years, I live in the Southeastern US, I'm a newly graduated Registered Nurse, and I'm absolutely enthralled with Severus Snape. It was my love for Alan Rickman that inititally brought me to love the character of Snape so much, and I adore everything he (Alan Rickman) has ever done, stage or screen. I've been in the fandom for around three years now, and have loved every minute of it.

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Reviews for Be Careful What You Wish For

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0/10

anoesis

Ooh, that was a powerful one-shot!

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thank you! I think this was my first time really writing Bella. She's one nasty piece, but she got hers in the end. ;)

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thank you! I think this was my first time really writing Bella. She's one nasty piece, but she got hers in the end. ;)

10/10

phoenix

Very dark, but then when one has Bella featured, that tends to happen. I like how he was able to exact some revenge on her. 

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thanks! Oh yes... the dark and Bella pretty much go hand in hand. And I wouldn't let Severus go without getting some good ol' fashioned Slytherin revenge. 

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thanks! Oh yes... the dark and Bella pretty much go hand in hand. And I wouldn't let Severus go without getting some good ol' fashioned Slytherin revenge. 

10/10

Anonymous

.No matter what thought you've put in it, if they don't think you've, then it will be a disappointment for them not directly.Spending lots of money on an issue can offset this, but it's still perceived that you have treated it in the form of chore.When giving a gift try to describe why most people chose that one thing.Sometimes, .No matter what thought you've put in it, if they don't think you've, then it will be a disappointment for them not directly.Spending lots of money on an issue can offset this, but it's still perceived that you have treated it in the form of chore.When giving a gift try to describe why most people chose that one thing.Sometimes, of program, they just don't like it, but that shouldn't be viewed like a failure.

The greatest gift is one that makes individuals really cheerful.This may be possible in the ways listed above, but to get that particular thing may resonate.You really need to know individual, whether it's a really spouse, partner, child as well as parent as well as put a lot of thought involved with it.Whether it's a really specially emblazoned picture of the car from your daughter and / or that ok'd Hank Aaron baseball there is a constant, ever thought you would get, you sense you have got the preferred present ever knowning that really should make all the giver content too

7/10

Sevvy

Less is definitely more in this instance.  This is a great one-shot in which you get the whole raw emotion of the piece across beautifully.  I can't say anything more other than Bella had it coming ... :-)

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thanks! You're right, she definitely had it coming, and Severus gave it to her every bit as good as she gave it to him. 

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thanks! You're right, she definitely had it coming, and Severus gave it to her every bit as good as she gave it to him. 

0/10

PHONELADY

ouch!!! what goes around comes around.

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Yes it does! Thanks for reviewing!

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Yes it does! Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

HBAR

Yikes!  Um, that's a good yikes.

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Hehe... thanks!

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Hehe... thanks!

0/10

KingPig

I love this! I wish we could have had more!

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thank you! This was all I could pull out with these two right now. I love writing Bella though... she's so nasty and evil; there really is no limit to her evilness, and that's so much fun to play with. :)

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thank you! This was all I could pull out with these two right now. I love writing Bella though... she's so nasty and evil; there really is no limit to her evilness, and that's so much fun to play with. :)

10/10

morgaine_dulac

Brrrr, chilly. Yet brilliant!

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thank you so much! I love being able to write really dark stuff, especially with a character like Bella who is darkness personified, at least IMO. :)

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thank you so much! I love being able to write really dark stuff, especially with a character like Bella who is darkness personified, at least IMO. :)

10/10

sunny33

Vengeance was his, but did she enjoy it after all, twisted cretaure that she is? :0

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Ooohhh... good point. Ya know... she might have. She's a twisted biatch, that one. ;) Thanks for the review!

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Ooohhh... good point. Ya know... she might have. She's a twisted biatch, that one. ;) Thanks for the review!

10/10

Owlbait

Oh, wow. That Bella is some piece of work. I also think she taught Sev rather a lot, unfortunately.

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

You're right... I think he probably picked up on a few things. He's a quick one, our Severus. It came back to bite her in the ass though. Thanks for the review. 

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

You're right... I think he probably picked up on a few things. He's a quick one, our Severus. It came back to bite her in the ass though. Thanks for the review. 

10/10

peskipiksi

Excellent and chilling. It fits perfectly with the characters, and with Voldemort's words in DH 'He agreed there were other women more worthy of him.' I can see him fancying Bella almost against his will and thinking he should take her to bed to appease Voldemort.

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

I agree. She was of 'noble' blood, and from an ancient house... a house that had always favored the dark. I can see him being 'talked into' liking her, being egged on by his fellow Death Eaters. Thanks so much!

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

I agree. She was of 'noble' blood, and from an ancient house... a house that had always favored the dark. I can see him being 'talked into' liking her, being egged on by his fellow Death Eaters. Thanks so much!

0/10

moiramountain

As I read this, the air in my room suddently felt as though it had turned to ice.  Superb vignette of lust and hate - and the madness they create.

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thank you! And they do create madness, you're very right... but which one is worse? ;)

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thank you! And they do create madness, you're very right... but which one is worse? ;)

10/10

mick42

A very chilling,powerful picture drawn in so few words.

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thank you so much!

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thank you so much!

10/10

cottontail

Excellent one shot, you never disappoint. 

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thanks! Sorry it took so long to get around to responding. I'm glad you liked this dark little story. :)

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thanks! Sorry it took so long to get around to responding. I'm glad you liked this dark little story. :)

0/10

reader76

Chilling and powerful.  Well done. 

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thank you so very much!

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thank you so very much!

10/10

nagandsev

The dark tension within Severus is so tangible at the end, as well the flow of emotions, diabolical and carnal, from Bella to him and back again--very effective dark elements--powerful scenario!

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thank you! They're such powerful personalities, but in such different ways...  which was fun to write. 

Response from BulletTimeScully (Author of Be Careful What You Wish For)

Thank you! They're such powerful personalities, but in such different ways...  which was fun to write. 

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