Chapter 21
Chapter 21 of 29
ancientgirlDraco visits Severus and plants the seeds of doubt.
ReviewedAll canon characters belong to JKR.
Thanks to June for doing the beta work for me.
Chapter 21
As Osiris and Crookshanks were sprinting away, Draco was walking up to the entrance of the dungeons. He stopped briefly, thinking he had just seen something odd flash by him, and then thought, ‘Did I just see a huge black bird, riding an even bigger orange cat?’ He shook his head and continued on his path. ‘Next time I’ll cut myself off after two martinis.’ He had promised Ginny he would not interfere with the Severus-Hermione situation. And he wasn’t going to, but that didn’t mean he could not visit his godfather. It’s not like Severus would have suspected anything; after all, he had not said anything about his relationship with Hermione, and as far as Severus knew Hermione had not said anything either. Draco reached Severus’ door and knocked several times, before Severus came and opened it.
“Draco, what are you doing here?” asked Severus as he let in the young man.
“Can’t I come and visit?” asked Draco, as he walked in and took off his cloak.
Severus turned and offered him a drink, which he refused, as he sat on Severus’ couch. Severus sat across from him on his favorite chair, next to the fireplace.
“You know that you can visit me any time you wish,” stated Severus.
“I was meeting with some of father’s investors in Hogsmeade, and thought I’d stop by and say hello.”
“How is your father, by the way? I heard that he and Rosmerta were expecting; is that correct?” asked Severus.
Draco laughed. “Yes. Can you believe it? He told me about a month ago. He said he wanted to do it right this time.” Draco looked down at his shoes, trying to focus on something so that his tears would not fall. “He said he realized a few years ago that he had not been a good father to me, and asked me to forgive him.”
“And have you?” asked Severus.
“Yes. I’m old enough to look at it from his point of view at the time. He was a Death Eater then, and he believed in different things. He was busy with his beliefs and his Dark Lord. When he turned sides, he began to realize what a shit of a father he had been, when he realized he barely knew his own son. I’m glad he’s happy now, and I’m glad he’s decided to be a father to me.” Draco smiled. Wanting to change the subject, he stood and walked to Severus’ desk, where he picked up some papers. “Any prospective geniuses in your classes?”
Severus snorted. “Half-wits and dunderheads, the entire lot. I swear it’s as though they are getting stupider and stupider with each passing school year. As much as she drove me insane with her endless questions, I would give anything to have at least one know…” Severus realized what he was about to say and stopped.
“One what, one know-it-all like Hermione?” Draco noticed how uncomfortable Severus was and decided to throw caution to the wind. Ginny would forgive him for meddling. “What happened, Severus?” Severus looked surprised. “I know you were seeing each other.” Draco noticed Severus shift slightly in his chair.
“Nothing happened, and I’ll thank you to stay out of my affairs,” said Severus, in an annoyed tone.
“I’m not trying to meddle in your business, but it’s just that…” Draco hesitated, not quite knowing what he wanted to say.
“Well, spit it out, for Merlin’s sake.”
“You’re both miserable. You two were seeing each other for a couple of months, and you were…happy. At least, happy for you. And Hermione was positively glowing all the time. Then suddenly, something happens and you two aren’t even speaking to each other.” Draco had begun pacing.
“I take it she has been speaking with Ginny? And no doubt making me out to be the bastard in this whole situation,” said Severus, now growing fully agitated.
Draco stopped pacing and looked at him. “Severus, I’m not quite sure how to ask this, but…” Draco approached him. “You weren’t just using her for sex, were you? I mean, you did care for her, didn’t you?”
Severus looked up at him. ‘What the hell?’ he thought.
“So, it’s like that, is it?” Severus demanded. “Now the blame is mine, and she is innocent of all wrongdoing?” Severus stood and walked past Draco. He poured himself a brandy, and began to drink it down. “So typical of a woman!”
“I’ve only heard her side of what happened. If she had something to do with all this then please, enlighten me.” Draco was now confused. He had listened to Hermione the day she told him and Ginny about her breakup with Severus, as well as the cruel things he had said to her, but now Severus was turning it all around. Severus made it seem as though Hermione had done something to merit being treated like an unwanted dirty rag.
“Draco, I neither have the time nor the inclination to go into this with you. I’m asking you to stay out of this.”
“Severus, I love you like a father, but Hermione is my friend and…”
“Well, maybe your friend hasn’t been as honest with you as you think!” Severus was quickly losing his patience. Hermione had obviously painted the picture of her being the woman scorned, the one who had been mistreated and abused. He laughed to himself; of course she would not tell anyone of her plot to humiliate him. No! That would make her look like a cruel unfeeling bitch. “You need to leave, Draco.”
Draco picked up his cloak from the armrest of the couch and headed for the door. Before he walked out he looked at Severus, who was now sitting at his desk, head bowed and scribbling like mad.
“If you two could see how alike you both are, then maybe you could just sit down and talk this out. Something isn’t right, Severus, and if I were you, I’d find out what’s really going on before you both lose out.” Then Draco walked out.
Severus set down his quill and ran his hands through his hair as he sighed deeply. He thought about what Draco had said to him, then thought back on how Hermione had been acting. He began to wonder, if perhaps there was something more to what he had heard that day at the Three Broomsticks. Draco had planted the seed of doubt in his head. Severus shook it off, as he remembered the conversation he heard. No, there was no doubting what he had heard, and there was no doubting her part in the scheme. Still, something nagged at him now. ‘Damn that Draco,’ he thought.
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Draco managed to put some doubt in Severus' head. Now its up to our two little friends to help out.
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254 Reviews | 8.24/10 Average
This is deffinetly one of the best fanfics I have read, and I have read a lot. It is well rounded and intresting. There were no errors that I noticed. I realy enjoyed this story and the way that it was writen and am now going to go check out some of this authors other works.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Hi! Thank you for the lovely review. I have a few sequals to this story. I hope you enjoy those as well! I've also got some comedies. :)
Draco, a typical man!
Awe, he so unsure of himself, and Hermione well if I was in her situation I would have a hard time keeping my hands off him too,growwlll!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I've always seen him as such a shy person. Mainly due of course to him not being accepted as a child by the other kids.
love your Draco, I really like stories that pair Ginny and Drco!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thank you! It's always wonderful to hear someone likes your work. I've always liked the Ginny/Draco pairing as well. I'm especially fond of the Ginny/Lucius paring.
had to go see the artwork and Severus is right,I kept waiting for her to breathe.
I love the way his thoughts drift!
Poor Severus, wanting so little out of life so sad!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Yeah, you get to a point where you just don't wish for things anymore.
Great start I love a mischevious Dumbledore!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I always have fun with Dumbledore. :)
Naughty Dumbledore!!
i love your writing, i know I have read this before but I am not sure I have reviewed as such I m re-reading and reviewing. Thank you for writing!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thank you for reading it!!!
Brava! This has be such fun to read, and I'm so happy I found it. And now I have to go find the three sequels. *iz addicted*Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I only meant for this to be a one shot, but when I finished it, I realized there was still more I wanted to tell. I hope you enjoy the others equally.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I only meant for this to be a one shot, but when I finished it, I realized there was still more I wanted to tell. I hope you enjoy the others equally.
A lovely wedding, an even lovelier baby boy, and Ron get a pair of fuzzy earrings. Sounds just right to me.I'm sure with Crooks and Osiris as his "mentors," little Raven Sanguis Snape will become a very capable Slytherin. Well done!Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thank you so much for taking so much time out of your day to read the entire story! I'm so very happy you enjoyed it!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thank you so much for taking so much time out of your day to read the entire story! I'm so very happy you enjoyed it!
They're going to be married!!! *grinning* This poem is perfect for this story. Well done, you!Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thankfully, it all came together.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thankfully, it all came together.
Woo hoo! Now they both know that each of them had seen the other in the Mirror of Erised.
I can't stop smiling.
Beth
The first part of this chapter was total angst, but you managed to save Osiris, and tha silly raven had me laughing my arse off by the end. I hope things go as well with Severus and Hermione when he sees her again. Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Before I started writing my own fanfiction, I always hated reading stories with chapters upon chapters of angst. I read a story once in which every single possible bad thing that could happen to a person happened to Hermione. It's one of the reasons I began to write my own stuff. I just wanted to do something different.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Before I started writing my own fanfiction, I always hated reading stories with chapters upon chapters of angst. I read a story once in which every single possible bad thing that could happen to a person happened to Hermione. It's one of the reasons I began to write my own stuff. I just wanted to do something different.
This is gut wrenching. I don't want Osiris to die, but I really don't want the baby to die.Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I cried while I wrote this chapter. I still cry when I read it. There was no way, though, that I was going to kill Osiris off.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I cried while I wrote this chapter. I still cry when I read it. There was no way, though, that I was going to kill Osiris off.
Good going, guys! Thank goodness they got through to Harry and he's going to check on Hermione!Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Yeah, things will start to get going from here.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Yeah, things will start to get going from here.
Good God, man! Go find Hermione- she's ill -and pregnant -and needs someone to help her!!!
Beth
I could kiss Draco! Finally something might change. I hope the dynamic duo are doing their own bit of sleuthing to get to the bottom of this.
Beth
Hooray! With Crookshanks and Osiris on the case there's a chance for things to get better for Hermione and Severus. I hope it doesn't take too long. And I hope Draco decides to get involved, too. These love birds need all the help they can get right now.Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Yeah, Osiris and Crooks are going to be a great team.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Yeah, Osiris and Crooks are going to be a great team.
At least Hermione has been able to talk to Ginny and Draco. At least she has them to give her support until she can think... and I hope someone puts a bug is Severus' ear.
Beth
Now the plot thickens! Please let something good happen to bring them back together so they can both know the truth about what happened.*still want to see Ron get what he deserves*Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
No worries. Ron will get his.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
No worries. Ron will get his.
Ouch- that hurt. I feel bad for both of them. Ron Weasley needs to have his anatomy adjusted! Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
OH, he'll get his.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
OH, he'll get his.
Good Lord! This couldn't have turned out worse. Of course, if Severus hadn't been spying on Hermione he wouldn't have heard the stupid crap Ron said... but still I'd like to strangle the ginger idiot myself. *grrrrrrrrrr*Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
He should have just trusted her.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
He should have just trusted her.
A glorious night! She is his own Hermione, and he her gallant knight.I love that poem.Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
That poem worked really well here. It's one of my all time favorite.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
That poem worked really well here. It's one of my all time favorite.