Chapter 7
Chapter 7 of 29
ancientgirlSeverus and Hermione go out for "supplies."
ReviewedI know this chapter is a bit short, but it sort of just belonged on its own.
All canon characters belong to JKR.
Thanks to June for being my beta.
Chapter 7
It was now Saturday morning. Severus rose early, as was his usual custom, and dressed in casual attire — black trousers and a white raw silk shirt. With his sleeves rolled up, he sat at his desk and penned a short note to Hermione. ‘No,’ he thought; ‘she is Miss Granger.’
Miss Granger:
I realized this morning that we are in need of several ingredients for the coming year. It will be necessary to venture to Hogsmeade to order the proper amounts for all the classes.
Be ready to leave the grounds at two this afternoon. We will Apparate to Hogsmeade, and then proceed to the Apothecary. I will need to show you how to choose the freshest ingredients for your upcoming classes. Since you will be acquiring these on your own in the future, it is best you learn the correct way to do so now.
Once we have finished, we can have the Apothecary deliver the order to the castle. I imagine this will take us the entire afternoon, and therefore we will most likely miss dinner at the Great Hall. It would be best for us to have dinner at the Three Broomsticks, or better yet, Muggle London.
I will meet you outside your rooms at two.
Severus Snape
He made sure not to sound as though he was asking her to dinner, instead telling her she was having dinner with him — no ifs, ands or buts. He looked the letter over several times, then rolled it up and sealed it with wax and his personal crest. He opened the small narrow window next to his desk and whistled. After a few moments, a large black Raven appeared and bowed his head.
“Osiris, take this to Miss Granger. She is next door, but wait for a response.”
The bird bowed once more and flew in the direction of Hermione’s rooms. He only had to fly about thirty or forty feet, so it did not take long for him to start tapping at her window.
Hermione had just woken up and gone into the bathroom when she heard the familiar tapping sound, letting her know she had received correspondence. She had to run out in her towel. She saw the large black bird and wondered briefly who could have sent it. Hermione knew no one with such a bird. She opened her window and the bird hopped in. He was the biggest Raven she had ever seen. His feathers were shiny and so black he shone blue, not unlike Severus’ hair, she thought. She smiled; if she could not call him Severus to his face, she would at least give herself the pleasure of doing so when thinking about him.
She took the small scroll from the bird’s leg and looked at the sender’s name. She gasped; it was from him, from Severus.
“Oh no, I must have forgotten an appointment with him or something,” she said aloud to herself. She looked at the Raven. “Was he angry when he wrote this?” To her great surprise, he shook his head and actually looked agitated. ‘Yes,’ she thought, ‘this was certainly his bird.’ She sat down breathing a sigh of relief and read the note.
“Dinner?” She had to read it twice. He had practically ordered her to have dinner with him. It seemed as though he timed the trip to the Apothecary just right. Of course it would take several hours to pick out the freshest and best ingredients, as well as choose the correct amounts for the potions planned for the first quarter of the year. She had no idea how to do so herself, so he clearly needed to teach her the process. By the time they finished shopping, it would be dinnertime, and certainly too late to have dinner in the Great Hall. Why not have dinner out? She went to her office and wrote a quick note to let him know she would be ready, and sent it off. Tonight she would have dinner with Severus.
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I'll have another chapter up on Sunday. I hope you like this one.
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254 Reviews | 8.24/10 Average
This is deffinetly one of the best fanfics I have read, and I have read a lot. It is well rounded and intresting. There were no errors that I noticed. I realy enjoyed this story and the way that it was writen and am now going to go check out some of this authors other works.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Hi! Thank you for the lovely review. I have a few sequals to this story. I hope you enjoy those as well! I've also got some comedies. :)
Draco, a typical man!
Awe, he so unsure of himself, and Hermione well if I was in her situation I would have a hard time keeping my hands off him too,growwlll!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I've always seen him as such a shy person. Mainly due of course to him not being accepted as a child by the other kids.
love your Draco, I really like stories that pair Ginny and Drco!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thank you! It's always wonderful to hear someone likes your work. I've always liked the Ginny/Draco pairing as well. I'm especially fond of the Ginny/Lucius paring.
had to go see the artwork and Severus is right,I kept waiting for her to breathe.
I love the way his thoughts drift!
Poor Severus, wanting so little out of life so sad!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Yeah, you get to a point where you just don't wish for things anymore.
Great start I love a mischevious Dumbledore!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I always have fun with Dumbledore. :)
Naughty Dumbledore!!
i love your writing, i know I have read this before but I am not sure I have reviewed as such I m re-reading and reviewing. Thank you for writing!!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thank you for reading it!!!
Brava! This has be such fun to read, and I'm so happy I found it. And now I have to go find the three sequels. *iz addicted*Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I only meant for this to be a one shot, but when I finished it, I realized there was still more I wanted to tell. I hope you enjoy the others equally.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I only meant for this to be a one shot, but when I finished it, I realized there was still more I wanted to tell. I hope you enjoy the others equally.
A lovely wedding, an even lovelier baby boy, and Ron get a pair of fuzzy earrings. Sounds just right to me.I'm sure with Crooks and Osiris as his "mentors," little Raven Sanguis Snape will become a very capable Slytherin. Well done!Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thank you so much for taking so much time out of your day to read the entire story! I'm so very happy you enjoyed it!
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thank you so much for taking so much time out of your day to read the entire story! I'm so very happy you enjoyed it!
They're going to be married!!! *grinning* This poem is perfect for this story. Well done, you!Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thankfully, it all came together.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Thankfully, it all came together.
Woo hoo! Now they both know that each of them had seen the other in the Mirror of Erised.
I can't stop smiling.
Beth
The first part of this chapter was total angst, but you managed to save Osiris, and tha silly raven had me laughing my arse off by the end. I hope things go as well with Severus and Hermione when he sees her again. Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Before I started writing my own fanfiction, I always hated reading stories with chapters upon chapters of angst. I read a story once in which every single possible bad thing that could happen to a person happened to Hermione. It's one of the reasons I began to write my own stuff. I just wanted to do something different.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Before I started writing my own fanfiction, I always hated reading stories with chapters upon chapters of angst. I read a story once in which every single possible bad thing that could happen to a person happened to Hermione. It's one of the reasons I began to write my own stuff. I just wanted to do something different.
This is gut wrenching. I don't want Osiris to die, but I really don't want the baby to die.Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I cried while I wrote this chapter. I still cry when I read it. There was no way, though, that I was going to kill Osiris off.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
I cried while I wrote this chapter. I still cry when I read it. There was no way, though, that I was going to kill Osiris off.
Good going, guys! Thank goodness they got through to Harry and he's going to check on Hermione!Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Yeah, things will start to get going from here.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Yeah, things will start to get going from here.
Good God, man! Go find Hermione- she's ill -and pregnant -and needs someone to help her!!!
Beth
I could kiss Draco! Finally something might change. I hope the dynamic duo are doing their own bit of sleuthing to get to the bottom of this.
Beth
Hooray! With Crookshanks and Osiris on the case there's a chance for things to get better for Hermione and Severus. I hope it doesn't take too long. And I hope Draco decides to get involved, too. These love birds need all the help they can get right now.Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Yeah, Osiris and Crooks are going to be a great team.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
Yeah, Osiris and Crooks are going to be a great team.
At least Hermione has been able to talk to Ginny and Draco. At least she has them to give her support until she can think... and I hope someone puts a bug is Severus' ear.
Beth
Now the plot thickens! Please let something good happen to bring them back together so they can both know the truth about what happened.*still want to see Ron get what he deserves*Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
No worries. Ron will get his.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
No worries. Ron will get his.
Ouch- that hurt. I feel bad for both of them. Ron Weasley needs to have his anatomy adjusted! Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
OH, he'll get his.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
OH, he'll get his.
Good Lord! This couldn't have turned out worse. Of course, if Severus hadn't been spying on Hermione he wouldn't have heard the stupid crap Ron said... but still I'd like to strangle the ginger idiot myself. *grrrrrrrrrr*Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
He should have just trusted her.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
He should have just trusted her.
A glorious night! She is his own Hermione, and he her gallant knight.I love that poem.Beth
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
That poem worked really well here. It's one of my all time favorite.
Response from ancientgirl (Author of The Long Wait)
That poem worked really well here. It's one of my all time favorite.