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Every Night

1: one-shot

Every Night

ConstantComment

23 Reviews   |   23 Ratings, 0 Likes, 60 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Erotica Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 4,777 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

"At night there were no titles, just two souls, taking what comfort they could from a world that had so very little." AU, M for smut.

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10/10

mick42

Thank you for a sweet and tender telling of their love story.

10/10

severuslover

Aww...that was such a sweet story! Marvelous job!! I loved it!~Jen

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

Thanks. I'm glad you loved it. x) My Severus always seems to channel romantic flangst. *sighs* I'm always wondering where the heck all this mushy stuff came from. ;) I guess Professor Snape was like this all the while, just waiting for the right moment, I suppose. LOL.^_^

10/10

makaem

That was fabulous. I guess that is why prudish types insist on separate beds for single people...

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

Thanks!

10/10

gersknightlady

This was absolutely wonderfuly written. Amazing scenes, emotion and comfort. I really enjoyed this so much.
Awesome job.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

Thank you, very much. :] That means a lot! I'm glad you enjoyed. -CC

0/10

kimjo2

woderful, just wonderful.  loved the big and little spoons.  thanks so much

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

Hee. *warm fuzzies* Thank you! -CC

10/10

snitchette

This is simply brilliant. I love the spooning thing, it's so tender a gesture, especially from him. Really, I love it.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

Yay for spoons! :) Thank you, very much for the review and the wonderful words in it, of course. -CC

0/10

mayadidi

this was beautiful! im glad I read it.thanks

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

Thank you,

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

! I'm glad you read it, too. :D -CC

10/10

katielady08

Beautiful!

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

Thank you so much! :3

0/10

Dreamy_Dragon

Awww, I love the tenderness of this!

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

Thanks so much!!!! I really appreciate that. :D-CC

0/10

SnarkySnape13

Beautiful story!

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

thank you! :)

10/10

sregner

What a beautiful story...thank you.  The bracelet's pretty too.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

No, thank you! :) Glad you liked.

10/10

Sevvy

Beautiful.  Truly beautiful.  I really liked this gentle, romantic story with it's theme of hope.  I especially liked the beginning of their relationship where so little is said and the way in which they seek silent comfort and reassurance with each other.  I think that in itself makes this such a special and truly romantic tale.And I love the idea of the big and little spoons!  This is certainly one fic that I personally shall not forget for a long while.  Thank you for sharing :-)

Response from Sevvy (Reviewer)

BTW: I've just checked out the picture of that bracelet - it's very similar to one I own myself (mine's in a bronze/metalic metal.)  I love Celtic jewelry and in fact own several pieces; I particularly like the 'Lovers Knot' and all that it symbolizes.  (Must be the Irish in me - I am of Irish descent!)  I can certainly see Severus giving this as a gift - it would be a good choice in my opinion; simple and understated but very meaningful! :-)

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

Wooh! Thank you. :) I myself love Celtic jewelry. I have a ring (that I rarely take off) that I bought in Dingle last summer. :) In fact, I'm wearing it now! So glad you enjoyed the story, sevvy. Thanks for the lovely review! - CC

10/10

neelix

Oh my god... now I have smudged my mascara. Shouldn't have read this before work! Just so beautiful... wonderful. I have to read it again!

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

*gasp* Oh, no! Not the mascara! Anything but that! XD I'm very happy that you enjoyed. And by all means, read it again! ;) -CC

10/10

rosered

I love a story with a HEA!!!  Fantastic tale of affection, acceptance and love.  Well done.  :D

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

Why, thank you. ^_^

10/10

blue artemis

I do love this story.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

thank you!

10/10

Nessa

That was bloody BRILLIANT!!

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

THANK YOU!! Heh. Glad you liked. -CC

Response from Nessa (Reviewer)

I'm sorry I only summed it up in a few words, but you got my initial reaction. I love your stories. Your Bio is great 'The way to my heart is Harry Potter' *cough* severussnape *cough* .. I think we are on the same lines lol

0/10

snapesphoenix

intense but lovely. i love their quietness and the spooning, of course. what a comfort in a dark time. i don't know that they are ooc here. sometimes words are meaningless and much too finite to convey what only a simple gesture, look, or a comforting touch can say. no one ever knows how one will change when war and death are upon them. it must have been a tough road for both of them when they were separated. i am happy for them.on a lighter note, i once read a t-shirt, in a store in las vegas... "spooning leads to forking", it read. clearly they were not wrong in this instance, lol.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

THANKS! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and also that you didn't think them too over the top. :) And I have seen that t-shirt. I surprisingly wasn't thinking about that when I wrote this. *shrugs* That is funny, though. -CC

0/10

Terab

Very nice story and I loved the happy ending

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

Thanks, I'm glad you did. 

9/10

mo112

Thank you, that was lovely. IMHO both of them are ooc because they talk so little, but these are special times and perhaps you are right. 

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

I'm glad you liked... and yes, they're a bit... mushy. LoL. I hope it didn't detract too much from the story. :) Thanks for the review! -CC

10/10

sunny33

Excellent.  I love the way they didn't talk for so long, just were there for each other.  :)

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

Thank you. Sometimes you don't need words. :D

0/10

orm irian

Very nice.  I liked that a lot. 

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

Thanks!

0/10

Clairvoyant

This was beautiful.  With despair, there is still hope.  You want to make me cry, don't ya?  I still have the tissue you gave me yesterday, so today we save the trees.  Great story, CC. 

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

Yes, saving trees has always been my greatest concern... other than, you know, writing about Mr. Snape, here. ;) And making people cry. *evil cackle* Anyway... thanks for the lovely review!

10/10

bournespeed

very moving piece.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of Every Night)

Thank you; that means a lot! Glad you enjoyed. :) -CC

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