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The Precious Few Chapter 11: Soon, He Thought
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The Precious Few

1: Crimson

2: I Promise

3: Thankful, he was

4: Vindicated

5: Home

6: Just friends, right?

7: Sleep never came easily

8: She had most definitely lied

9: And he held on

10: She'd Promised, After All

11: Soon, He Thought

Soon, He Thought

The Precious Few

Chapter 11 of 11

ConstantComment

Epilogue: A year into their relationship, big news arrives at Spinner's End.

Humor Drama Angst Romance Drabble/100-Word Alternate Universe Epilogue post-HBP/HBP compliant What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 3,904 Words 11 Chapters Complete
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Severus woke slowly this morning, smelling breakfast in the air and feeling chilled on one side.

Hermione was up.

Stretching, he tried to hold on to what was left of last night’s dream and wound up clinging to one image—a pair of big, dark eyes.

He swung out of bed, hissing as his toes touched the frigid floor, and hopped around to find the sweater Hermione’d given him their first Christmas.

They lived together, now.

Which is nice, Severus thought as he rummaged through their dresser. Christ, where are my clothes?

“The toast, Severus,” Hermione called as the toaster beeped, glancing over her shoulder as he came downstairs. He did his duty and sat, watching appreciatively from the table as Hermione sashayed around the room. She set his plate down and smiled glowingly at him.

“Excellent, Hermione.” He leaned up to place a kiss on her lips. Then, Severus looked down at the table. Something was missing… “Love, where’re the mimosas?” They had them every Sunday; it was odd—

“Oh, I didn’t feel like one. Yours is in the fridge.”

Severus stared incredulously as she stood shakily to get it. If there was one thing he was sure about Hermione, it was that she never passed up the opportunity for alcohol. “Hermione?”

Suddenly, she burst into tears.

He stood and scooped her into his arms, stroking her hair. Crying woman! Crying woman! What to do!? “What’s wrong, dear one?”

She sobbed something unintelligible into his chest. He grunted inquisitively. “I’m pregnant,” she repeated, louder.

Severus’ surprise formed into incredulity as she wiped her nose on a sleeve. “Why the hell are you crying?”

She wailed, burying her head in his neck. “You hate children,” she sniffled.

Suddenly, Severus went rigid. “What?”

“Oh, Severus, what are we going to do?”

--

“I can’t… can’t give it up,” she said miserably, cradling her flat stomach.

“Who said you should give it up?”

She looked up at him with big, watery eyes, and his dream came back with force—those eyes, young and wondrous—a child’s eyes. “I don’t want you to give it up, Hermione. And, frankly, I’m hurt with your assumption that I hate children.”

She snorted, cocking an eyebrow.

“I hate Gryffindor children,” he clarified. “There is a difference. And our child will most certainly not be Gryffindor.”

“…You mean, I can keep it?”

“For Heaven’s sake, it’s not a damned puppy, and I’m not asking you to abort a fucking baby!”

She looked stricken.

“Sorry, that was crude. I’m just surprised, that’s all, that you’d think so little of me… that I wouldn’t want a child. My own child,” he said softly. “Our child.”

With that she threw herself at him and covered his face with kisses, a mirror of their first meeting at Spinner’s End. He smiled widely, lifting her off her feet, spinning them around in the cramped kitchen, depositing her on the counter. “You know what this means, don’t you?”

“What?” she asked, tapping the tip of his nose.

He shrugged, feigning nonchalance. “We’ll have to move.”

“Oh, thank God!”

“Get a nice little cottage in Scotland,” he continued. “With rosebushes and a big back garden.”

“And a swing-set?”

Severus sighed, attempting ‘put-upon’. “If you insist.”

“Hmm.” She smiled mischievously. “Do you know what else I insist upon?”

He squeezed her round the middle.

“I insist that you take me back to bed and shag me senseless. In celebration.”

“As you wish, dear one.” He grinned as she sped up the stairs, happy once more, and patted the black box in his pocket.

Soon, he thought.


A/N: Well. *sighs wistfully* That's the end, folks! I'm so happy with all the positive feedback I've been getting on this drabble series and I hope you enjoyed this last double-tribble. Might not be the typical drama-filled day for Sev and Hermione, but I thought it'd be sweet to show how well they're doing a little while into their relationship.

Thanks so much to Melusin, who agreed to look over this.

And I'm glad everyone liked Severus' dreams. Yes, he has crazy dreams. *shrugs* So what if he's a little messed up in the head? We all know and love him that way, anyhow. :D

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Latest 25 Reviews for The Precious Few

103 Reviews  |  6.28/10 Average

10/10

Bella99

Delightful.

10/10

semicharmed

I love it. It's very sweet.

10/10

semicharmed

I love it. It's very sweet.

10/10

Bentwaters

Yay for the random story button again. I love when it brings me such delightful stories as this. Love the progression of their relationship and especially the wonderful ending. Adored the whole thing! Thank you so much for sharing.

9/10

Bettina

very nice!

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Thank you! And thank you for the stars! -CC

10/10

Nessa

Lovely ending to a brilliant drabble.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Thanks so much! :D -CC

10/10

sregner

Thank god I found this story today.  I was over on OWL and there was a story called Whispers that was heart-wrenchingly sad that I had to find a happy and sweet story.  This was it.  Thank you (BTW, Whispers is awesome, just terribly sad)

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Well, I'm glad you got some warm fuzzies out of reading my story. That was the idea. :D Thanks for the stars and the review! -CC

10/10

debjunk

Crying woman! LOL. Quite cute. Sorry to see it end.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Thank you! XD

0/10

sunny33

Nice finish! :)

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Thanks so much. I'm glad you think so. :D -CC

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sunny33

Why were they apart a month?

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Yeesh. They thought they had to be, I suppose. After all, he wasn't supposed to live and she wasn't supposed to look after him, so... LOL. Silly, isn't it?

0/10

sunny33

Good, he got the message! :)

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Kissing always seems to do the trick. ;]

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sunny33

Very sweet! :)

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Thank you! ^__^

10/10

Clairvoyant

This was a warm and sweet ending despite her expectations and his reactions.  Well done!  Bravo!

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Why, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. ^___^ -CC

10/10

rosered

Yippee!  A bun in the oven and a proposal in his pocket - what bliss!  Great ending to a fantastic story.  :Dp.s. (Could I respectfully request a little more 'Honeysuckle and Snow'?  I've been craving it.)

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Hah! I;m so glad you approve. ^___^ And I HAVE been feeling a strange urge to complete that story. Was that YOU? lol (I really am pondering the next chapter.) -CC

10/10

countrymouse

Ah, lovely!  Speaking of sweet dreams, I'm just about to head off to bed after a rather hard evening, and I"m sure this sweetness will go a long way toward giving me _very_ pleasant dreams, indeed!  Thank you for a lovely tale!

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for the lovely review. Sweet dreams (haha)! -CC

10/10

braye27

Oh!  This has been a joy to read.  I loved Severus' reaction to Hermione's tears, but he handled it just right in the end.  I also loved the black box he had in his pocket!This has been so much fun to follow.  Thanks!Beth

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Thanks!!! :D As always, I'm happy for the review and that you liked the story. And I had to leave a promise of a future for them, thus the lovely black box! -CC

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Stephanie76

Loved it! Especially the "Crying woman! Crying woman!" bit, that is so men!  Thanks for sharing the story with us, drabble that it was.  Still great!

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Thank you, Stephanie! I thought any guy would probably react that way. Haha. I'm glad you enjoyed! -CC

10/10

snitchette

It is a really nice and sweet ending. I'm so glad you decided to continue the original drabble because it turned out a lovely and very enjoyable story.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Thanks so much,

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

! And thanks for the stars! You're fab. -CC

0/10

kimjo2

*sniff*  that was lovely.  thanks muchly

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

You're very welcome, kimjo! :) Glad you enjoyed. -CC

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kimjo2

i hear you!  thanks

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Thank you! :D -CC

0/10

Clairvoyant

She figured out what we already knew.  Brightest witch of her age?  I think not.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

LOL. Yeah, Hermione can be a bit dense at times, if only because of that characteristic Gryffindor stubbornness. :) Thanks for the review! -CC

10/10

braye27

There a so many things I love about this chapter! 

•  I adore Severus with sleepy eyes and toddler's hair.  He's totally squishable!

•  “There was a... a drug lord… who was a platypus.”   He is so busted!  Our Hermione knows there was no "drug lord platypus," but she allowed him his secret. 

•  And she knows she has lied to her mama.  She and Severus ARE friends... they just aren't ONLY friends... they have fallen madly in love with each other.  I love it, CC!Beth

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Hahahaha. Well, what I meant was that he mixed two news stories together--one about drug cartels and the other about Australian animalia, but you know... He's still crazy. lol. I'm so glad you're liking the story. I hope you enjoy the next chapter, as well. -CC

10/10

peppermint

Ohhhhhh. Love this line.“It’s always better when you’re here,” he mumbled as he readjusted and curled up to doze. “You chase the bad away.”

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

*warm fuzzies!!!* Me too. He's such a toddler, really. I love a cuddly!Severus. Heh. Thanks for the stars! -CC

10/10

braye27

What terrible dreams Severus has!  The horror he lived during Voldemort's time was enough to live through as it happened, but to have to revisit it constantly in his dreams is just as bad.Thank goodness Hermione heard him and was there to save him from his nightmare.  How pleasant it must have been to see her sleeping there next to him!  Pleasant enough to bring him dreams of tap-dancing llamas.  Much better!!!Beth

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Man, those tap-dancing llamas are scary enough. ;P Thanks for the lovely review, as always. -CC

10/10

snitchette

I'm glad he's not shoked to find her lying beside him, in bed. Sharing intimacy is not something he would do easily so there must be a serious clus regarding his feelings towards her.

Response from ConstantComment (Author of The Precious Few)

Definitely. As Sev said, Hermione chases the bad away. She makes him feel safe. ^__^ You'll see how he feels about her, soon. Thanks for the review, Snitchette! -CC

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