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Without Magic
karelia112 Reviews | 112 Ratings, 0 Likes, 116 Favorites )
The after-effects of the Final Battle are despair - especially when the magic disappears.
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karelia
Member Since 2005 | 83 Stories | Favorited by 232 | 666 Reviews Written | 2,343 Review Responses
Dabbling in writing, in music, enjoying knitting on reasonably cool days. Petulant admin. Beta for some. Alpha for some. Cheese-maker for many. Locavore with a passion.
Reviews for Without Magic
A lovely chapter where quiet progress is made.
Let's see. What does Charlie Weasley have in his packagessss, my precioussss? Could it be tasty dragon eggsessss? Voldemort's head on a stick? Ron-the-Prat's oversized ego? *snicker*Excellent chapter. I can't wait for more blushes ... more teasing ... just more.
Response from karelia (Author of Without Magic)
Thank you for reviewing! Ah, no, not dragon egssss. With no magic around, dragons are not visible, you see. Unless, of course they're in Severus' magical garden... But here's a tiny hint: If the magic returns, Severus will need some help to defend himself because Moody will make sure he'll be tried for killing AD. ;-)
Yes, more teasing and more blushes are inevitable.
Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)
I knows what it is, my preciousssss.... not dragon eggses, no. A vessel of some sortssssss. (Right?)
Ron's a big prat; Moody's a big prat. Is there a man around who ISN'T a big, giant prat?! Oh, yeah... Severus. *gets group to chant* We want Severus! We want Severus! We want Severus!
Write. Come on! Write Chapter VI. I don't think I can wait much longer. ... Just checked my inbox. Not there yet.
Response from karelia (Author of Without Magic)
Erm. Yes. We do want Severus, don't we...
I'm off to spend the day at Starbucks, writing, so you'll get the next chapter soon.
Wow, what a great story. I usually do not read WIP's but I remember this as a challange and thought it would be a difficult story to write. You have done a brilliant job. The plot is so realistic and the characters are so true to form. I can't wait for another chapter to be up. Linda
Yes, I hoped for more Snape, but she's there now. That's all that matters! My heart dropped when Parvati answered the door. I feared maybe she had an interest in "Severus," but she did mention Draco. So maybe... :) Great chapter.
Wonerful, more soon please.
great idea and good writing ,keep up the great work
Very interesting. Great start. I like that they will need Snape! hehe
Interesting premise for a story. Will be watching for the next part.
Ack...where's the rest of the story???? Help! Need more!!! This was going so well!!!!
I love the "magic is gone" stories. Can't wait for Hermione to find Snape & see if he's the one giving info to "Red Cloud". Good start - will be looking forward to your updates.
Very entertaining and original. I'm really enjoying this story. I hope that you can find the time to update frequantly and often. Make it as long as possible. Can't stand Ron. I know it is not; but it almost seems real; I know that too much government is real. Don't worry, I'm not an American; just one of those Canadian, and an older reader at that. This story is really fun to read.
Intereesting
Damn if Ron is back then will Hermione postpone her trip to find Severus? I hope not. Most enjoyable. -- B
oooo you had to end it right there, didn't you? lol loving the story, can't wait for the next chapter! *barely contains excitement* :D
So many questions! Red Cloud is communicating with... a disguised Trelawney. Hhaha! Nah, I have no idea. Dumbledore? Snicker... I am so curious about the Weasleys and... of course, Snape! Good work. Can't wait for next.
I really love this:Severus stretched out his hand towards her, and she took it, allowing him to pull her up. Not a care in the world that everyone at Spinner's End knew exactly what important things Severus had to do, she followed him happily.So beautifully written!Ron got some news, good thing that Charlie was around. I doubt Hermiones patience would have lasted long!
Guys that can't take the hint, like Ron, totally squick me.
Enjoyed the chapter, but still am quite confused about how these 'magic grabbing' towers sort of popped up all over the place without anyone noticing and why they didn't affect the magic until Voldemort was done in.
soooo glad that the orgonite muffins are working and Severus and Hermione have turned UP their relationship
Ronweasel must Die. He should be Avada'd just for his attitude alone.
Hehehe. Scientific Exploration. It was very funny when Red Cloud said that.Aaah ... the little lemons were lovely. I thoroughly enjoyed them again, despite the sneak preview. Really nice chapter, and can't wait for more!
I adore this story, every chapter is completely uplifting.However, I have to apologise before hand, I need to leave a message for Notsosaintly, via your review board.I am severely ill, and the Lupus I am suffering, due to the medication, can result in memory loss. I tried to select your story and one of ancientgirls, yesterday and today. I just got fuzzy lines, where the words should be. I checked my internet, and my computer, nothing showing itself within my internet space. So, I have to ask before I subject my computer to a full nerd checkover, which it worrying, my nerd talks such stupid mumgo jumbo that does not have any simple English within it, Could you then find out why out stories can not relate to your stories.Its one on one of one of
Response from karelia (Author of Without Magic)
I am absolutely tickled pink that you find each chapter uplifting! Thank you for saying that!
I have forwarded your message to Notsosaintly.
Notsosaintly's Response:
Hi,
Response from karelia (Author of Without Magic)
. Check your e-mail. I'll help you try to figure it out that way.
yippee, a new chapter. much love for you, and much hate for Ron!
-karla marie
Response from karelia (Author of Without Magic)
Thank you! But don't ya know, hate leads to the dark side, LOL. But I guess Ron really is being a prat, isn't he...
I believe that Hermione should have hexed Ron. He definitely deserves it. It was great that Severus and Hermione took their relationship to the "next level". Tee hee...Hopefully Hogwarts gets back to normal, and the kids have a place to go. But wouldn't that make Hogwarts a target, seeing as the government people don't want anyone to do magic? Hmm...This chapter made me laugh out several times, and I dearly love to laugh. Great chapter, I wish you updated faster! Still, at least this story isn't abandoned. Please, update again as soon as possible!!
Response from karelia (Author of Without Magic)
I agree with you about Hermione. But then, she is kind hearted, you know...
Thanks for saying that! That "next level" gave me a lot of grief while I was writing it.
Ah, but once the magic is back, the government people won't be able to see Hogwarts, now, will they?
Nope, the story isn't abandoned, I try my best to write at a steady pace, what between RL rudely interfering, other plot bunnies and other writing obligations. We'll get to the end eventually!
Thanks for a lovely review!
I can't wait to find out what's waiting for them at Hogwarts!
Response from karelia (Author of Without Magic)
Oh, I have hope that you'll find that interesting! Fawkes is one clever bird, after all. :-)
ooo excelent chapter lady. i hope you update soon because you've got me hooked on this story!
SSL
Response from karelia (Author of Without Magic)
Ooo, I'm so glad you like it! Next chapter is about half written, so yes, soon.
Thanks for reading and for leaving such a nice review!