Watching
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Snape's thoughts on watching the Golden Trio have a water fight.
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sunny33
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Hello all, I am a 53 year old from NZ. Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing. Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)
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Now that is what I call fighting dirty. Saucy Witch to have the cheek to wink at him. Looks to me as if Hermione choreographed the whole fight to see Severus react.
Wonderful wee drabble. Thank you.
I have read it before but had to review.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
LOL Have you read Can't Take My Eyes Off You? It's a longer multichapter story. This drabble starts it off. :DWildcard's response: No, I do not think so. But will check, then review. I do love long stories. Thanks.
So saucy, ha ha... thanks so much!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
Watch this space. This drabble has developed into a 22 chapter story for the Severus Big Bang Birthday bash and will begin posting here after Jan 20th. :)
Haha Go Hermione, winning in a water-balloon fight and being one step ahead of Severus!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
Yep. She's onto him. Look out for the full story, 48000 words and counting, due to start on a screen near you soon.
Anonymous
There's a sequel to this, right?
Author's Response: There's a whole 48000 word story coming up soon. :)
That last line... laughing now.Great twist. Hee hee.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
Thanks! :)
I wonder what's going through Harry and Ron's minds...
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
They are teenaged boys. All the blood is probably 3 feet lower. NOTHING is going through their minds... ;)
what a hoot! it had me laughing all the way down the hall! thanks so much
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
Glad you enjoyed it! :)
hahaha!! This is hilarious - poor Sev went from babysitter to voyeur to Hermione's pawn in three heartbeats! Great drabble!!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
Poor man didn't stand a chance! :)
LOL LOL Go, Hermione - smart girl! She IS going to get what she wants, by golly. (G) Thanks for the giggle, Cat
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
You're welcome! :)
LOL! Great one! Old pervert indeed, but I loved the last part where it was obvious that Hermione knew exactly where he was and what he was doing. It seems maybe she planned to not wear a bra in the first place.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
She was onto him right from the start! :)
Tee hee, she knows he's watching. I think she wants him to see her with a wet tee-shirt, possibly to give him ideas as well as a show. ;)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
She does have a touch of Slytherin, after all! :)
Hey Sunny, That was a lot of fun! You really managed to turn a simple water balloon fight into something different. Great prompt response. ~ Brena
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
Thanks, Brena. :)
Oh, this was *wonderful*! I am exceedingly happy that someone decided to answer my prompt! I really loved this; it's *brilliant*!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
Thanks, lyn. I saw the prompt earlier in the week and hoped no-one had snaffled it! :)
Haha. Perfect. I love it. Peeping-Tom Snape. Priceless.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
Thanks! :)
Lovely, I like to think that Hermione knows exactly what she is doing, and who sees her do so.....:-))
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
She is a smart one, indeed! :)
Hermione you minx! Clever, clever girl. Nice bait and switch. This was a great prompt response! Love it. AV
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
Thanks, AV! :)
HA HA Busted Snape! You maybe seeing more of them!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
Well and truly! :)
*CHEESY GRIN* That was great!! devious plotting Hermione! Thanks for your hard work - love all of your writing
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
*hugs* Thanks. :)
Anonymous
*mwahaha* Great! I wonder wether Minerva assigned this duty to Snape to give him some entertainment, too? *giggles*
Author's Response: Now that is just evil! :P
I know it goes against the whole idea of a drabble, but this really needs a sequel-- preferably a long one.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
LOL. I'll put it on the to-do list... :)
Snort. The poor man ;-)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
He underestimated her as well! :)
hehehe... naughty! But funny! Makes me want to know what happens next!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
He received his just desserts. I think he would run away! :)
Didn't he say that the know-it-all must not be underestimated. She is very certainly the one who initiated the game knowing is was watching... Clever girl.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Watching)
I think he was snookered! :)